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Month: September 2014 (Page 2 of 2)

The Diamond

The Diamond

By Dayanara Castellanos

One day there was a girl named Candy Gonmy and a boy named Harry Toma and they were friends they knew each other from a long time ago.Candy was 14 and Harry was 13.Candy and Harry lived in Spiderville,Ohio. Candy was a supergirl and harry was just a normal kid.

 

Harry had a special diamond. He had found it in a mountain in Ohio. The diamond was a light green diamond. Candy was there when Harry found it. Candy said it was not a good idea to take it to his house but Harry didn’t listen. Candy thought it was there for a reason for it to be there.

Candy and Harrywhere in the same class they sat next to each other Harry brought the diamond everywhere with him because he didn’t want it to get lost. One day Candy told him that it didn’t belong to him so you have to put it back where it was or else something bad is going to happen but Harry ignored what Candy had said. The next morning Harry and Candy woke up then they saw each other in school. Their classrooms weren’t that protected they were in portables.

 

Candy and harry were working when they heard noise outside they got scared for a second but they started working. When they heard the same noise again it sounded like if something were landing. They looked outside and saw a UFO and there was three aliens Candy saw their name tag right beneath there chest one of thems name was Bybo and the other two were Jonesy and Tomo they went to the classroom and the teacher said “everyone down” so Candy and all the other students went down except Harry he stayed up to see them and then the aliens went in the classroom. When the aliens went in the classroom they took Harry and the diamond then they went outside and you could hear Harry screaming for help but nobody help him because they were scared except Candy she follow the aliens when they left she was tracking them. When they finally got to their planet Neutron it was a weird planet but good enough for aliens.

When they got off with Harry, Candy followed them to their horrible disgusting lab. When they got their they took Harry to a weird looking machine and transformed him into a harry ugly spider with yellow ugly teeth and a yellow tutu and dark green tap shoes  he looked very different he was no longer human. Candy got in the lab after the aliens left she got in and tried to find a way to transform Harry back into a human. She finally found a way to transform Harry into a human.Before they could even get out the aliens walked in and saw them they looked at them with a weird face.Then they tried to run away from them but the couldn’t it was too late so the aliens got them and took them to a different kind of room where they could never escape from their after the aliens Tomo Jonesy and Bybo left Candy and Harry were making a plane so they could escape. So they were thinking and thinking and they had no ideas so they thinked more finally Candy said “I know what we could do” she said to Harry “We can scream that were hungry so when they come in we can beat whoever comes in because its either going to be Tomo Jonesy or Bybo and  who ever comes in is going to leave the door open or have a key so thats wat we should do right Harry” so then Harry said yeah sure why not.So then they screamed were HUNGRY !!! some one please bring us food or something so then Tomo came in and brought them a jelly sandwich as soon as Tomo opened the door Candy told Harry ‘‘NOW!!!!!’’ Then they both got him hurt so he couldn’t move so Candy took Tomo’s key from his pocket. Then Candy and Harry got out of the room they were locked in. After the were looking for a way to get out of the aliens planet neutron they couldn’t find the exit, when they just bump into Tomo.                                                  Then Tomo said “NO please dont hurt me any  more”

Than Candy replied “then why did you take Harry from our planet” than Tomo replied back well we took him because Harry you’re friend had stolen my moms diamond we had put in the Ohio mountain but then we saw that someone had taken it  and we located that person and it turns out it was your friend Harry. We weren’t trying to hurt you guys Tomo said but you guys were hurting use. Then Candy said how, Tomo said well you took our diamond and the diamond was my moms well our moms diamond and my mom couldn’t live without that diamond it was like a piece of her heart but you guys stole it so my mom is dying Tomo said Candy said sorry first of all and Harry did the same thing to then Tomo said “all i want to ask you is to return the diamond where it belongs and and where you got from” Than Candy and Harry promised to put the diamond where it was. Then Tomo said thank you to them and helped them find the exit then they found Candy pink rocket and lift then they got to the Ohio mountain and put the diamond back when they got to there house they took a shower and went to bed the next morning woke up they decided that they were going to go outside to play and when they got tired.

Candy so candy told Harry wanna go see if the diamond is there so Harry said sure. So then Candy and Harry were at the top of the Ohio mountain then they saw that the diamond was there except it was no longer green it was yellow……………………

The End

 

Wizards .V.S. Humans

                                                                                        Wizards V.S. Humans

                                                                                             By: Esther Fadaka

     May 10,2014,There once was a 9 year old girl named Sarah and she loved Germantown, Maryland.  But when this event happened she never forgot, until she meets her not-so “Normal” brother Zack and this girl Annie that thinks she knows what she’s doing to help her get through this ‘’tough’’ battle of Wizards .V.S. Humans…

“SARAH,WAKE UP!’’ yelled her mom.

Sarah wakes up and then goes back to sleep. 10 minutes later… Sarah wakes up she goes downstairs and she sees the front door is gone.

“WHOA!’’says Sarah.

A Cadillac pulls up in the house and the driver says

“Get in!”.’’Umm,’’says Sarah.

Then a sword flew over her head and she jumps in.

”Who are you?”asked Sarah.

“Annie,but thats not what seems to matter. This guy named Zack is after you!’’

“My little brother’s name is Zack and he’s 4.Are you sure because look behind you!”

“WHOA! That’s for sure not my brother.”

“Exactly,and we don’t know how to stop him!”

“I know, let me go.”

“NO!He’s too powerful.”

“Really?Just last week he cried because I told him he is not a Monkey that likes bananas!”

“You understand  that he is not your brother Zack you know that right?” “Hey, if his name is Zack he has to have the mind of a Zack,and thats my brothers mind.”

“So,let me go.”Okay,if you say so?”No one can defeat me!” Zack said in deep dark voice. “I can,here’s a tasty banana.” “I HATE BANANAS!” Wait,weren’t you a Monkey that loves bananas last week?”Not anymore,”Zack said in the same voice.”So I guess I should get going…”Annie wait up,”and Sarah  and she jumped in the car!

Zack chased them all around the world to Maine to Washington State then to Texas.STOP!!Sarah got out of the car and was so mad that she went to Zack and yelled “Leave us ALONE!” Suddenly,she heard wake up Sarah 5 times and she woke up.Ahhh!Zack! Mom! she ran downstairs and opened the FRONT DOOR! Wait a second..SARAH!SARAH!Yes Zack. Wanna play Wizards .V.S. Humans?NOOOOooo!It was all a dream or was it…

 

The End of King Kong

The End of King Kong

By Joshua Chavez

One day in Oct 3, 2013 I came back from school and unpack, I ate doritos for a snack, I did my math homework with my cheesy fingers. Then I had nothing to do so I sat on my couch thinking what should I do next. I was sitting there for a long time. So I decided to play a videogame on my Xbox 360 called WWE 2010 in my basement, I was playing for hours! Suddenly the ground started to shake everything was falling down. I knew it was an earthquake so I ran upstairs then I saw that my livingroom was a huge disaster. But I had no time to fix it so I ran outside as fast as I can. But when I was outside I notice that it was only my house that was being destroyed.

 

I took a tour around my house but when got closer behind my house there was a lot of big black thick dry hair on the grass. Ones I got even closer there was a footprint the size of a school bus. Then I saw the king of the jungle, KING KONG!!! He was…. huge he’s the size of 2 school buses he has lots of black hair, he smells like rotten banana, and he looks like a gorilla with face injuries. He was grumpy because he was hungry. But he was destroying my house so I drove my car to Giant and I buyed a big banana later I drove my car to my house.

 

Suddenly King Kong saw the banana and started to chase me so I drove my car as fast as I can with the banana. He was destroying everything in his path cars, street light, and houses he was chasing me a long time. Meanwhile I passed Rockville so King Kong got distracted and rock and rolled instead so that gave me some time to think. So I finally got it, I build a huge lego rocket then I threw the banana in the rocket. When King Kong saw the banana in the rocket he ran and jumped in the rocket but accidentally pulled a lever. Suddenly the rocket flew to the moon and blew up and King Kong and a full  moon was never seen again!!

 

The Mythical Creature Contest

The Mythical Creature Contest

By: Kyla Randolph

 

There was a girl named Kaelyn Sharp she was 15 years old, she was the only child, she was bullied at school because all the girls were just really rude. She lived in Dingle Berry Woods and where she lived it was never hot or humid. Just nice and a good temperature neither did it snow but they did have some cold times but not often. Her mom wanted to buy her clothes before school started. So while they were going to the mall they had a little argument .” Mom do we really have to get new clothes me and dad went to get clothes two weeks ago” whined Kaelyn.But then her mom said “Yes because you need to look nice, not in ordinary skinny jeans, graphic t-shirts, and your boy hats!!!”. Then they got there they went in to Totally cute store and Kaelyn hated that store.

 

When she tried some dresses on, here is what she said. “This is too tight it makes my butt looks big, too long, too frumpy this stands out in the crowd i don’t like that, too itchy feels like sandpaper” Kaelyn complained.”Will you quit, your whining is making my head have a headache Jane her mom argued. “Mom do we really have to get new clothes i don’t even have shoes to go with it she complained”. Oh thats right!!! her mom called and for assistance to measure her feet. Kaelyn did not like this at all. So it got dark so they went out of the 5th store they’d enter but when Kaelyn and her mom left the store. Kaelyn was happy and her mom was upset. When they got home her dad had ordered chinese but. Kaelyn’s mom thought that he cooked. Kaelyn new he orders because she sometime stays home when the food comes. Now it was time for her to go to bed but she was playing her wii all night long.

 

When she woke up, ate some cereal, then had to walk her dog so she put her sweater on and walked her dog. She saw a sign that said: Looking for mythical creatures if you bring a creature here you will be able to win $1,000. Then Kaelyn had a plan to go find a mythical creature. So she called up her aunt Michelle and asked her if she can buy her a plane ticket anywhere. “Yes i was going to go to Japan to stay and draw beautiful places but i’m fine with staying here. 20 minutes later her aunt came over and handed her the ticket. During the night while her parents were sleeping she left with her bag and with some allowance money. She wish she could take her dog but she doesn’t wanna pay extra money when she only has 200 bucks. She planned a list of what things she will buy she buy some food in the airport before flight she has to get a cab. Also a cab to take her to her location.

 

The cab came finishing her few touches to the letter that she is going to give her parents. “Dear mom and dad, I went on an adventure to find something that you will be happy for. Do not call there will be no bars where I would be at. LOVE- Your daughter Kaelyn XOXO”. She went downstairs to go in the car. When she arrived at the airport, she paid the taxi guy. Then she went inside the airport to get a snack from the snack machine. Her plane was going to take off in 20 min so she got some food from Taco Bell. Her plane took off and she had some food in her bag. She snacked on some chips then watched something on her computer. Soon she fell asleep during the movie. BOOM!!! she woke up because of the sound her computer made, it was extra loud because she had her special earbuds on that had surround-sound. The lady wondered if she was all right then she went up to her and said. “ Are you ok, do want some refreshments we have coke, coffee, chips, salad, and veggie chips”. “Veggie chips may I have some please”. Kaelyn said excitedly with a smiley face. The lady said “Yes you may and since you’re a lover of veggie chips you may have two extra bags”.

 

They were stopping to get some more gas and to drop off some people.The flight attendant took everyone on a tour they were landed in Texas so Kaelyn brought extra pair of shorts from her bag to change into them. Someone bought her chinese while they were eating and it was a young boy who thought she was cute. But for her she had no interest in him because he was there for only a day in texas and she was just staying there for food. But he still bought some food he said.”Your a girl and girls never have money on them. Then she stormed out of the food court with her take-out.

 

“OK everyone time to go back on the plane”.The flight attendant reminded.She had a fun time on the plane someone showed her how to make cookies. But the fun had to end because she had landed at Hampton. Hampton was the famous land of Ham! She had dinner with a friend she met on the plane who is also a girl who’s her age. After they ate   Miley her little friend she met said.” Ok well i have to go meet  my aunt at the hotel. Kaelyn needed a place to sleep so she ask Miley if she can spend the night with them till morning. “ Yes and i will buy you breakfast and a cab when we wake up”. Miley insisted. Kaelyn was so thankful for the generous offer.”Aunt Kendra is caring and sweet you’ll love her”. Miley told. When the two girls got there they asked for Kendra Lowncen and the women said. “You must be Miley her niece right”. Miley nodded with a smile. The women gave her the key to the room 350.”Thank you”. Miley said with a happy smile.

Kaelyn woke up not remembering anything she only saw Miley and not her aunt. Her aunt came back from driving during the whole night. Miley woke up saying hello and morning to her aunt ann Kaelyn.”You brought us food thanks Wild”. Miley laughed. “Wild I thought her name was Kendra”. Kaelyn was puzzled. “Thats my nickname for close people and for friends. THen they all got a sausage a mic-muffin. After that Kaelyn went to take a shower. While taking a shower she wondered how her parent reacted to her note she gave them. Then got dressed and did her normal morning routine. But not exactly the way she does she says morning to her parents, instead she is saying morning to people she just met.

 

Now it was time to take a cab in the rainforest where she is doing her exploring. She said bye to Miley and Kendra.The cab took her to where she was headed and finally got at her destination. Then went exploring for the crazy creatures. She saw lots of hummingbirds and cute monkeys it was amazing. Then she heard little bells ringing in the forest? “Hello anyone there are looking for something”. Kaelyn worried and scared she didn’t know what was going on here. Then little creatures came out to say hello but she fell back and tried to move back while they were moving forward.”Who are you guys please don’t hurt me please!!!” Kaelyn cried.” We will not hurt you we are the Mooshie Munchers but we don’t eat Human creatures that would be rude”. The leader of the Mooshie Muncher is named HeadQuarter Sooth. Kaelyn saw on his pin.” Are you hungry human creature we plenty of food? The Leader questioned.” My name is Kaelyn and what type of food you had? Kaelyn said in a concerned way. The Mooshie Munchers took her to their lovely homes.

 

Here have some chicken. “CHICKEN you have chicken but you guys are not human. “Yes miss Kaelyn we have to live”. Then Kaelyn got here notebook and said the creatures are purple with pink ears. “There I will definitely be able to win the contest”. Kaelyn smiles and looks down at them. “What are you talking about miss Kaelyn”. HeadQuarter Sooth asks.  “I’m supposed to bring a mythical creature back to my homeland where I live”. “Well since you are very kind will promise to take care of my family I will allow you to bring five of my villagers for you to take”. HeadQuarter Sooth insisted. “But first you’ll need a good night sleep and something to eat” He said. “Ok fine bring on the chicken”! Kaelyn yelled. Everyone started cheering.

She woke up and ate some chicken she had from last night. “Hello miss Kaelyn we had cleaned your clothes for you so you can have a fresh new pair of clothes”. One of the school girls said. “Thank you thats very kind of you”. Kaelyn said in a thankful voice and gave her a hug. Then Kaelyn went to the front of the main mess hall and entered the government lounge where the government of Mooshie Munchies eats at. “Miss Kaelyn good morning how are you, we the Mooshie Munchies we will take you in our plane with the five Mooshie Munchers”. HeadQuarter Sooth exclaimed. Kaelyn and the Mooshie Munchers were saying goodbye to the others and soon they were off.

Kaelyn thought her bag was a bit heavy but she didn’t look in her bag. The Mooshie Munchers were so excited that they were singing 5,000 beer bottles on the wall. The next Morning one of the Mosshie Munchers stayed up all night because he really is person who is hyper all the time. When Kaelyn landed she had them all holding a rope the hyper one had to be attached to the rope so he wouldn’t get free.Then Kaelyn walked to the Mayor’s office and told him about the Mooshie Munchers.”Hello Sir my name is Kaelyn and I go to your daughters school…. “Ah yes you were the little girl who ran off at night aren’t you? The Mayor said in a concern way. “Yes sir but I have some….” “You know you shouldn’t run off like that it startled your poor parents we were going to send a search party for you”. The Mayor interrupted. “ I know but I found some Mythical creatures thats why I left. “What you actually found some real life Mythical creatures”! The Mayor exclaimed “Yes see heres Junnie Punnie, Crazy Kerk, Tough Punch, and Vanity. Then the guard took them back in the locks up room where they lock Mythical creatures.

 

‘Why would you do that they were very nice Mythical creatures they took care half the time I was gone”. Kaelyn cried. “Nice they could have brainwashed your brain while your sleep you don’t know now go back home. Then Kaelyn ran back home to unpack and tell her parents she help freeing her friends. “Mom, dad The Mayor took Mythical creatures I brought from my trip”. “Kaelyn oh my gosh i missed you so much we all are going to celebrate your arrival”. “Ok let me get unpacked”.Then Kaelyn ran upstairs to her room and drop her bag on her bed. “Oww that hurts!” A voice came from the bag  she brought. kaelyn unzipped the bag and said “Sunshine!! what are you doing here”. “Actually its ButterCup”. ButterCup reminded. “Sorry and why are here in my bag you could of hurt yourself”.Kaelyn asked “I’m here because I knew something was going to the Mooshie Munchers today”. ButterCup shared her thoughts. Then Kaelyn and ButterCup had did their planning, got there disguise, and Kaelyn brought her backpack.

“Come ButterCup get in my backpack”. Kaelyn pleaded “Like old times huh Kaelyn?” ButterCup laughed. Kaelyn with ButterCup in her backpack she ran outside before she could talk to her parents. Kaelyn then ran in the woods. Kaelyn and ButterCup put their disguise on and entered the Government Hall where ButterCup did the talking because she was on Kaelyn’s shoulders.”Hello sir good day i would love to see your Mythical creatures please”. ButterCup asked in a man voice.”Yes sir you must be Harvey Louis the man who is running the Mythical creature contest”. The Mayor said and showed him the Mythical creatures. “These are all the Mythical creatures we have”. The Mayor looked proud of his work. “ May I be alone please”. ButterCup asked. “Yes you may I will let you see them all”. kaelyn and ButterCup took the disguise off and opened up the cages and took out the back.” Guards stop them right now!” The Mayor said. All of the Mythical creatures who can fly or transplant in to something helped out the others and Kaelyn. Then they ran behind the sheriff and the Mayor and his guards were  arrested and the Mythical creatures were saved and sent back to their homes.

 

Kaelyn won something better than 1,000 she was awarded for being helpful to mythical creature. Some Mooshie Munchers also HeadQuarter Sooth came to celebrate her kindness and warm feeling for the mythical creatures. Since the mayor is no longer here his children Maddie and Rebecca are going to live there aunt in Houston, Texas.”Kaelyn i’m so proud of you but please tell us before you’re leaving please. Her mom complained and a nice voice.” Yes mom I understand but at least I got a plaque. Now the Mooshie Munchers and Kaelyn visit each other  now since the sheriff wants to learn about the Mooshie Munchers.

THE END 

Mondon ‘s Adventure

 

Mondon ‘s Adventure

 

This is Mondon  he has really cool super powers like super fart , and can transform into an animal. He can talk to animal and to his pet  Rexy,is a superpower partner and gots Mondon back all the time. Mondon is 29 and Rexy is 11 in bird year they live in rockville. Goldie is the main threat because she destorys  any animal in sight and want to destorys rexy.So what are they going about it?.

Mondon and Rexy are chilling in there       bathtub when all the sudden Mondon remember that he was going to get married that when he heard Goldie knocking at the door so he got ready and pretended to take Goldie to wedding but he was taking to the safir.

When they got the th safir Goldie said “where are you taking me ? ‘’ ‘’ I’m taking you to doom” spoke  Mondon. Be Quiet you’re getting on my last nerve” said Mondon  so he throwed Goldie into the three tigers cave, then chop chop say goodbye to Goldie. Finally the tiger were dividing her with their blood dripping fangs Goldie felt like she was going to “scream” and they

cut her  into 3rds and ate her all up.

The End…..

The Trail of Flowers

THE TRAIL OF FLOWERS

by: Amanda Carpio

May 25,2012 a girl named Rubie was born and learned how to crawl very fast. Rubie’s mother Adriana and her father Capri were very proud that Rubie could crawl.  Adriana and Capri decided to get her her own room in there kingdom. Very soon Rubie got her own room so that she can explore around her room. Years went by and Rubie was TEN  on May 25 2022 ! And she became very curious at that age. Later that day she got bored playing in her room so she decided to go pick flowers outside . She likes sunflowers because of the soft petals .Rubie went to the kitchen to get her self a flower basket . Rubie yanked 6 sunflowers out of the ground and sooner or later Rubie had 24 flowers in her flower basket.

Rubie went outside in her big backyard and since Rubies mother loves flowers Rubie’s backyard was full of flowers . Rubie was looking and she found her favorite flowers, sunflowers.   Rubie went to her mother’s flower room where all the supplies for flowers are. She grabbed 24 mini flower pots and a big bag of soil that was heavier than Rubie . Rubie went up to her room with all the flower supplies and put all 24 flower pots across her massive window . She saw a beautiful flower so she rushed down to the main room in the kingdom and bolted out the door and picked the flower she saw from her window which was a white flower with bright neon green and a bright neon orange dots on it . And when she yanked that one out she saw a whole line of the flower so she picked and picked until there was no more and she looked up and she was lost!!!

Rubie had no idea that she went that far she only thought  she went a couple steps into the forest .Rubie was completely lost Rubie figured that since the flowers were in one straight line she would go backwards and close her eyes so she wouldn’t get distracted and go the way back to her house. And sooner or later she bumps into something turns around and sees an orangutan his name was  mojo he had orange fur that was very long. Mojo had a name tag made out of carved wood it said  Mojo on it  in capital letters . So Rubie was surprised that Mojo had so much knowledge in his head. So what Rubie did was follow Mojo and see where he goes. Rubie followed Mojo for 2 hours and then she realised that she was supposed to follow the track to her house Rubie was so frustrated but she said to herself why get frustrated if you cant fix it its just getting herself stressed out. Rubie just relaxed and kept following Mojo. And another hour later Mojo finally stopped and sat down and started building something else it looked rusty and hand made by a human but it wasn’t made by a human it was made by an orangutan!!!! And when Rubie looked up she saw a tree house that was tall enough to see the whole city  including her kingdom so she climbed up the and hand made with small carvings on it ladder and when she got up she saw a boy and his name was mason he is the one that Rubie thought taught Mojo how to make all the crafts that she saw when she was walking to the tree house with mojo.  Ruby decided that she was going to introduce herself to mason in a fun way . So she decided to sneak up on him from the other side of the tree house  because there is one side of the tree house that has a ladder that goes up to the window of the tree house so she decided that she was going to climb on the ladder and scare Mason from the other side  of the tree  house and say boo! Mason jumped frighteningly but then laughed when he realized it was just Ruby!  so Rubie introduced herself and they became good friends.  Rubie and Mason played for hours but then Rubie remembered that she had to go home so she asked Mason for her finding the way back to her kingdom.  Mason knew every nook and cranny of the forest so finding the way back to Rubie’s kingdom was a piece of CAKE!!!!!  and rubies parents were relieved to see Rubie . And at the end mason came over for playdates with Mojo so they can play with a 3 ft tall orangutan . And at the end everyone was happy

THE   END

The War Between Elves and Goblins

The War Between Elves and Goblins                                                                                                                            1300 BC, March 13 Alaska.Once there was a prince named Razortip. He was the prince of the Great Elves. He was at the shooting range while the forest was quite. There was a shew zing bang after he shot his obsidian tip arrow. He went back to his forest tree fort and went to sleep in his bearskin mattress and blanket. The next few weeks have been the same: get up when the moon shines, go to bed, eat, train, hunt, rest, train,eat, hunt, train, rest, play, eat, talk train, sleep. Razortip became bored and decided to make something of his own where he could do things of his own free will. He Decided to make a fort where only he and the others he chose could get in. He decided to make a sky fort with the strongest metal and obsidian. He decided instead of playing and talking for five hours he would work and take five hours of his sleep to work with the people helping him. It took three years but managed to get it to full size and get it to fly and build/buy his stuff and get it even better but he managed it all to work.
He bought all the war supplies he needed to become the best war fighter in the elf kingdoms. He has got hunters and guards to protect his kingdom and feed them. Razortip did one thing all day and night and that was train.He made a new schedule: train,eat,train,eat,train,eat, train,sleep, train, sleep. He decided to make an army to defend if someone attacks. He decided to take an army of elves knights mages and dragon riders. They would all be the best in their league. He kept building and building and building his army and took the leaders of armies and then their armies. He had bought the toughest dragon skin body armor you can get. The hardest helmet possibile to supply and wear. The strongest gold boots to wear. all for him and his army. He finally finished a year or two later. He had the best army in the united elf kingdoms he was finished and decided to teach his troops even better one hundred million at a time he made them practice day and night all year round. He started at the age of twelve and ended building at the age of eighteen. One day Razortip went to the market and saw his archenemy. His name was Conzard. He had hairy armpits, horrible breath, hairy ears, warts and pimples all over him, and he was a goblin! He had small wars with him when they were younger and always fought until they were taken away from each other. He went to attack him but instead he said “remember me” punched him in the stomach and ran and in conzards raspy dark cold voice he said “I have a kingdom and will attack you” I will hunt you down”. The next day he trained his troops extra extra hard. The next day he does the same over and over again for six months. One day he saw Conzard and told him to fight him now. He fought until dawn and won. Razortip went home happy and had a feast. The next day conzard came and said he was going to start a war. Razortip did not believe him and sent a dragon rider after him. The next day he bought the newest technology and it was a crossbow. He also bought the newest bow and one hundred thousand obsidian arrows and one hundred thousand fire arrows and one hundred thousand explosive arrows. He was ready for battle. He did not sleep he trained all day and night. Two day’s he trained and one day he slept is what he did for weeks and weeks. Finally Conzard came with an army behind him. The war had come…

Razortip said “you come in an army and I have one behind me” “I am not afraid to do what I must conzard”.He sent out his dragon riders to attack and his nights and ordered the elves to fire and took out some of his army but lost one dragon rider not the dragon though. He went out to attack Conzard he struck his swords and slashed he missed. He got cut by the wolves claws and was bleeding badly he slashed and concord the wolf. He slashed and attacked and concorded trolls, goblins, and wolves they had taken half his army out and then less than three quarters of conzard’s army. Conzard was Really mad and so was razortip kept on attacking over and over again. The battle fields were full of fire and lava spouts and cracked ground. They were winning, he thought he knew it and was attacking and cozard only had one hundred giants left he was going to beat conzard. He only had knights and all his elves. He ordered his elves to use the new bows. They fired at one giant and took out his legs the knights took the rest of the giant for fifty times. They took explosive arrows and took out a giant with five shots to the chest. fifty more giants down and won the war Razortip and Conzard took out their swords and fought. Razortip slashed and took Conzards swords out of his hand and conzards foot slapped the sword out razortips hand. It turned into a fist fight and he kicked conzards stomach and took out his cross bow and hit conzard with it. He ran to go into the forest but Razortip did not let him run he went after him and tackled him. He got up and dragged him back took out his crossbow and said calmly “good by” and shot his crossbow. He had won, he had won the war and a spirit came and said “ you have gained immortality by defeating and ending the war between elves and goblins”.

He was famous and rich he built his castle more and more for sixty years one million people could live in it and he built another army over again and worked them harder and the elves and nights were honored and rewarded. The new army was named The Invincibles or The Goblin Slayers. They were better than the army before. Razortip was the best leader in all of the kingdoms. Nobody would dare come near him. He took all the leftover wolves from Conzard. He has about five thousand wolves from conzard and made the guards and his wolf pet pup Ripper. Ripper had a hole room and yard to play in with his friends and Razortips other pet pups. He made Ripper and his friends imortal to so they grow to be two times as large strong and fast as a full grown wolf but still be as light as a pup. Razortip took Ripper everywhere and he was the best pet ever. He had bought catapults Battering rams the hardest sturdiest finest armor as soon as it came out. Razortip had epic wars with enemies and makes allies with his friends and family and all the people he trusts best. He had the best army ever possible to get. He had the best kingdom ever built and constructed. One day he went out on an adventure on a ship. He bought it and went to a secret island and built a getaway from home. He brought along Ripper and some of his friends so they could play. He had a lot of fun there. Ripper loved it and his friends did to. He spent one month there with some family and friends. He had a lot of fun he ate fish, and octopus, and turtle, and shark fin soup. He had the best time ever he could relax play and do anything he wants he could live like this he thought. He wanted to have days like this every day he was happier than he had ever been in his life. He had to go back tomorrow and was very excited to see how his kingdom had done. They had been as good as usual. That day was the best day. He had a feast, built a pool that he swam in and had a lot of fun with Ripper. He had this day forever.

THE END

Jamour and Jackson Amazing Adventure Future

                                                  Jamour and Jackson Amazing Adventure

                                                                                          Future Problems

                                                                                                 Story : 1

                                                                                             By Jamour Bwalu

(April 15,2016 6:30am)

Hi my name is Jamour I’m 12 I love my cool math teacher Mr.James ,i’m good at skateboarding and I live in Germantown, Md. I have a great friend name Jackson who loves math and good at skateboarding.Theres a super cool teacher name Mr.James.Mr.James has brown hair, blue eyes, and long messy hair. Me and Jackson have been friends since we were just kids. Jackson is a half year older than me.One day me and Jackson were going when we met Mr.James with some car parts. We ask Mr. James “what are doing “ he said to school  that he created a  time machine. So me and Jackson followed him to the school .When we were in the school he took us to the math class and their was a nice blue  Mustang GT  2016 in the room! We asked him what was a car doing in the room Mr. James said “ that the time machine boy”,me and Jackson said it was a nice cool car. Mr.  James said it a was car with parts like a clock and other stuff that me and Jackson didn’t understand.

(6:54am)

So we told Mr. James that we got go. He said come after 1st Period.Me and Jackson left the room and went to sience class in science class me and Jackson had to cut a frog in half and then look inside it. Me and Jackson had to skip half of science class because of that.

So me and  Jackson just went to the math class  to see if Mr.  James was done with his class.

When we made it, Mr.  James class we had to wait 20 minutes so we go in.When the class was over  me and Jackson went in and we ask where was the car. He told us to go to the basement and turn on the car. Me and Jackson were freaking out when he said basement because the basement is the worst place to be. The basement has web,old creepy stuff,and people say that it is haunted by a boy name Jake Brown. Mr.James said to do it and we did because we didn’t want to make him mad.

(The Basement 11:30am)

 

When me and Jackson made it we turn the light then we turn the car. Mr.James came around 11:40 and he told us to get into the car.When we got in the car he said to buckle our seat  belt really good because when you go to the future you go really fast. Me and Jackson did what he said and we turn the car. Jackson was freaking out when I step on the pedal. Mr. James said “good luck , and goodbye boys”.Me and Jackson said goodbye and then we went. When we made to the future, it was all white and the basement is the garage and all the car are cool cars , and  there are white cars everywhere. Me and Jackson looked at the cool cars and we were amazed. Me and Jackson look in the trunk to see if Mr. James left anything in case of an  emergency.

 

( The Future 12:10)

 

In the trunk there were just white clothes and  two watches.So me and jackson put on the clothes plus the watches.Then me and Jackson went outside to cheak how cool the furture is.When we made it outside the future was bright, everyone wear white,and poster of my brother

Malik was everywhere.On a billboard i saw a picture of me making a dunk with these shoe that i created.Jackson was on a billboard too but he juking these people with shoe he created.Me and Jackson were suprise to see that we basketball payer, we create shoe  and that my brother is president. Jackson said “ future is the best” in a loud voice. I told him to keep it down and get don’t let no notice by anyone.He said ok ,and we left.I told jackson let go to Mr.James house.Me and Jackson had to pass a million of people walking to this rope..Jackson ask me what was going on, I told him  that maybe a parade is going on. On one of the parade cart there was me and Jackson saying hi to everyone.I was scared maybe they  met see us so i took Jackson arm and ran to a house that look like Mr.James house.Jackson knock on the door.Then this old man with a cane,me and Jackson ask who he was.The old man said he was Mr.James.The old man had a musties,gray hair,and a math cane.Me and Jackson were suprise to met Mr.James very old and wearing a math tie.

 

(Mr.James House 1:00pm)

Mr.James ask how was the car,and we told him the car was ok. Mr.James ask if we wanted anything to eat.I ask if he had Mcdonalds or Burger king,He told us he did have those junk food.Mr.James got 2 bag, one had  Mcdonalds and  the other one had Burger king.Jackson got a burger,fries,and  a coke.I got a burger,fries,and a pepsi.When me and Jackson were eating someone knock the door.Mr.James told us that the SFFBI (secret future FBI ) is looking for us.So me and Jackson went tto the basement and found a good place to hide. Mr.James open the door, there about 2 people with black suit and black glasses. SFFBI ask Mr.James if he saw two boy,small,white clothes,one has a hoddie .Mr.James said he seen two boy go downtown Washington.That was close said Jackson maybe we should go to the garage and get the car.I said ok and we went when we made it to the garage it was security everywhere.So me and Jackson hed go through the back door.When we went through a man cheak us if we were from the furture and the machine let us through.So we got the car and went to Jackson house to see if the furture Jackson was home.When we made it to Jackson house there was a 5 amazing car. There was a Ferrari,Lamborghini,Bugatti,Maserati,and a Jaguar.Jackson Why Because he never know he will get all the car he ever wanted.I ring the bell and this voice that sounds like Jackson said hello boys.

 

(Jackson Beautiful Amazing Home 2:49pm )

 

I said This is an amazing house. Thank said a voice that sound like Jackson but older.When we turn around there was this tall man.Jackson said are you the older me,and future Jackson said yes. Future Jackson said come in and sit down. So you’re a guy that a basketball player and your single said Jackson. Future Jackson told us that he had 4 kids and his married to an amazing woman. Wait what about me i said. You oh you grow up to be a great basketball player,nice to everyone you meet, and you have 6 kids said future Jackson .What i have six kid i yelled in a shocked voice.Oh yeah why is the SFFBI chasing me and Jackson.He told us there chasing because they know that you have something that can turn on the time machine and what is that thing.I got interrupted by a knock on the door.It was the SFFBI future Jackson said,he told us to go to the sercet room.What sercet room ? i asked.Butler take them to the secret room Future Jackson.Future Jackson Butler was short,had grey hair,and wear a black suit.When we made to the secret room there were at least twenty amazing car.The Butler said we could get any car.Me and  Jackson pick the  2023 Ferrari 458 spider.

 

( SFFBI Building 3:30pm )

Me and Jackson got in the car,start the engine,and drive pass the SFFBI car and vans.This is awesome i said. Me and  Jackson drove pass the like cool dude with shades and a fast car.Me and Jackson went to the SFFBI buliding, we had to punch our way in.Then we finally made it to the Secret room and found the time machine car but then we heard a vocie.The vocie came from a man that looked like me.Wait that me,hi boy.Wait you want to get us.No i’m saying hi and goodbye.Oh bye older me,bye said Future me.Then I start the engine,me and Jackson said our goodbye.Then we left,it was

sweet to meet my future self I said.When we made to our time nothing changed it was we were still in the basement. When we turn we saw Mr.James standing near the trunk.”How was the future boys” Mr. James said,It was amazing Mr. James.Thanks Mr. James.For what Mr. James said in a weird voice.Nevermind we got to class.See ya Mr. James, see ya boys.I hope we never have to that again yeah. See ya Jackson,Se ya.

 

                                               The End

 

 

The Evil Lego Robots

The Evil Lego Robots

By: Pooyan Hashemi

-December  16, 2811

Hi, I’m Pooyan the robot destroyer.I live on planet earth. I was building giant robots about 8 feet tall. As I was building i might have accidentally dropped a secret DNA that has a power of the human DNA but just evil.The robots turned evil because the DNA had a molecule that got to his heart and had a nerve that made the robots angry. The robots had a big head a big legs so they reach the top of a tower. They had a watch that whenever they speak into it and say a superpower it would add it to there bionics.

I was doing an experiment in my secret lab but it didn’t work. I gave them any power in the world that anybody could ask for. I made a big mistake. When i made just 1 of the robots, they found the robot DNA so the went to planet Legotonics and made 500 more of those robots. Porkville is doomed. They gave themselves wings and now they are flying. It was 8:00 in the morning when i heard a big BOOM then again BOOM. I went to look outside. All i could see was fire and little pieces from the buildings. I knew Porkville was in danger so i had to do something. I went to my secret lab and got my freeze ray. I put lego armour so i won’t get hurt. Thats when I came outside.

I froze 1 then another then another by i realized that my work is not right. When i realized that i gave them human DNA they are half human too. They have there own planet to live and survive. They only came to earth because they thought that humans would hurt them and they were looking for food. I brought my fire gun to unfreeze them. the mayor said that my work was right so he gave 5 cents. I gave those 5 cents to charity and now my life is good and now the robots work for me in my lab.

The robots turned on me and turned evil, My work has just been started. Not only they have a planet, they have there own DNA and weapons. When i let them go, they still wanted to destroy earth and I took 1 of the robots and try to take any kind of evidence that would help me destroy them. The iron that held them to a big chair was really hard to escape from. They also had a self destruct button so i did not notice it had one so it pushed the button and gave 5 seconds and i ran to safety and the robot blew up. I had an idea that if i could see their DNA in the body that was broken i could probably see how they made themselves but all of that DNA was built into a security box and had a password.

5 years later….yes i finally figured it out that if i can make a robot to destroy it that would be my answer. 24 hours later, finished now i can destroy the evil creature that i have created. I have flew with my spaceship to the mighty planet but i was amazed of how much there was. It didn’t even take 10 seconds to destroy my robot but at least 20 robots went after it. I flew back to earth and now know how much robots there were. But now its too late, they have made another planet and they have made 500,000 more robots.

 

I was building tactical nukes then i blew up both of the planets and now i gave up my career of being a scientist now i have better job, working at walmart but the people were all getting my autographs because i was rich and famous and the mayor said go buy a mansion but then i was like i don’t have like 5 million dollars then he said now you do. I was seised like really bad and with those 5 million dollars i bought 5 mansions 2 bathtubs 5 ferrari’s and 8 lamborghini’s. Wow im rich im really happy.  All of these things were from my really awesome inventions. I sold all of my laboratory items and now i’m a billionaire. Yeah baby.7 days later, The robot police have been looking for me, they have made everybody robots except me i was hiding but they are looking for me and now since i sold everything, i’m doomed but the only thing i can do for the rest of my years is hide but i have a plan to ask my buddy jack to help but i forgot he’s a robot too.I thought that all of the robots have been destroyed but the DNA can never be destroyed except i can find that DNA and find the sample to make my robot. The only way to make a robot is sneak a robot guard and find a way to put me in a robot suit. I have to find my buddy Jack and take out of that robot suit and tell him its me Pooyan. I did it now me and Jack have a mission to get everybody out of the robots suits but it will take a long time so I won’t do that. We’ll have to take the mayor out and then we’ll all team up to destroy the robots. The mayor is rich and has anything. He also is a bodybuilder and has 2 ray guns in his pocket. He has his own ninja’s that are not robots yet so thats fantastic. It’s good that the mayor has 2 nukes and now we are done the robots have been captured. We are free.

 

Jack said,”Not yet, remember the DNA.”

 

I vocalized, “Ok lets just get the DNA.”

 

“Its not that simple.”

“Why, because the DNA is almost everywhere.”

 

10 years later…

 

Pooyan “ we only found 4 of them but where are the rest after jack died we have no other choice but to fight the boss of lego robots”. (Mayor) If we couldn’t beat a regular robot how are we gonna fight the boss.(Pooyan) Don’t you have and kind of weapon to destroy it. (mayor)Yes but this robot is 30 feet tall. 5 years later, Jack and the mayor have died what should i do. I have waited 3 hours when i saw 15 glorious angels here to fight and help me. I have thanked them even if i got 18 billion dollars i still want my time to be good and I want to survive.

Everybody has came out of the robots and now life has never been like before. All we have to do is rebuild the towers and homes and that would take about 15 years. It’s ok, at least life is now the same again. We have time to destroy the DNA. I noticed that i have the DNA tracker on my 811 Telepod phone and its in a new planet called Legoworld. Uhhhh ohhhh. That is another robot world. Then I used another nuke, im lucky i had a extra nuke so I blew that world up and my life was the best like usual, so I went in my giant pool in my backyard. I realized that was a fake nuke that spreads out sprinkles. Im doomed again. Usually i have a plan but i ran out of plans. I have a friend chris. He is a scientist that has a chemical that destroys DNA’s so he had a chemical for diseases and it will work for the DNA it did so this is the 5th time that i will say that the earth is now saved.

(Future) September 5, 3000

Robot said, We have now gotten to the year 3000 we have to celebrate and destroy the planet earth. Pooyan said, this is torchure  why are you going to  destroy planet earth. Robot vocalized, We made a deal with the robot king that at the year 4900, we will celebrate to destroy planet earth. Pooyan repeated, i will find your boss and destroy evil. I was asleep for 7 hours then I said that im 71 years old but I’m still strong. I can handle it. I always have butterflies in my stomach when I’m caught. That won’t happen anymore.  I have another buddy Jason. He said that we have to destroy planet earth. I said fine so we took a lego helicopter so we blew anything that was left so then we joined another planet, planet Amir.

July 15, 3100

I was just looking at the beautiful  view from the top of the mountains and I built my very own mansion with 10 rooms, 7, bathrooms 2 pools 4 floors and it’s really big i mean really big so at planet Amir we were having a lot of fun before we saw a lego snake that shoots poison legos. when the lego hits you it burns you like fire. We had the freezeray but it was out of ammo because it’s really hot, about 110 degrees fahrenheit and what should I go by myself.

Jason said no I will go with you if you don’t mind so he said it’s ok i’.

 

I repeated ok i’ll be back in 2 hours

 

Jason vocalized ok

I came back with the snakes head .  I said i will keep this for the day that we were together. We hugged and said  I won’t be back for  anytime your alive. I said   “ Why”?

I’ll pass away so life will be easier and i’m too old , I can’t do this .

Ok bro, I’ll miss you so he went deep in the woods and then I went to sleep .  I went back  to sleep and noticed it was a really cool dream .

 

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