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Month: December 2014 (Page 1 of 9)

The Boy Who Wanted to be Mortal: Part 2

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The Boy Who Wanted to be Mortal: Part 2

 

Donovan wakes up in the hospital and says “ What’s going on?”. Then he asked the doctor why he was there.

 

Then the doctor said “You were defeated by a villain that doesn’t like you so much.”

 

Then Donovan said in a suspicious sound “I Wonder who it was” it sounded like if he knew it was the keeper.but he didn’t want to point fingers at anyone so he was just stood quite. And asked the doctor if he could leave.

 

The doctor replied “Of course we just need to take some blood and see if you are fine” Donovan said “okay but hurry I need to be somewhere.”

 

Then what Donovan didn’t know was that the doctor was not really a doctor well he was but he faked to be one because he was actually a goddess. Her real name was Arrow she could control anything. The reason why the goddesses  needed the blood is so she could put it in a globe that you could see people through.

 

Then Donovan went to the keepers house and went to tell him if he could please let him see the history book but the keeper said “for what” then Donovan replied “I just wanted to see …”

 

Then the keeper said “To see who cursed you right” then Donovan said “ how did you know?”

 

Then the keeper said “Well i’m the keeper I own partly the history book.”

 

So Donovan kept begging him to let him see the history book but the keeper said know Donovan was thinking why the keeper kept refusing to let him see the history book.

 

So Donovan started thinking  that the keeper was the one that had cursed him or why else why the keeper not want to show the book to Donovan. Then the next day Donovan  woke up and left to school after school he was heading out the front door and he heard someone behind the door he tiptod behind the door and saw the little girl talking on a radio and he heard her say

 

“I think the boy Donovan is heading out I will  Check okay Mr. keeper.”

 

Then Donovan ran as fast as he could to his house and saw the little girl following him saying,

 

“Come back HERE .”

 

Donovan ran into his house and locked his doors he went up stairs and tried to call the goddesses but the goddesses didn’t answer. So he went to the back door but before he could even go out he got banged on his head a fainted. Then when he woke up he was at the keepers house and Donovan said “What am I doing here.” After donovan stood up and saw a lot of frozen bodies then he saw the keeper and said “Did you do this.”

 

“Yes yes I did and I will do it to you to” said the keeper then Donovan said “i’m guessing you also cursed me too”

 

Then the keeper replied “Well why wouldn’t I”

 

“I knew it was you” Donovan said to The keeper .”but no one would have expected me” said the keeper. “well I did” said Donovan. Then all everyone heard was a loud BANGand that was the last thing that anyone heard from Donovan.

 

 

The boy who wanted to be mortal:part 1

The boy who wanted to be mortal:part 1 (T.B.W.W.T.B.M.)

Once there was a boy and his name was Donovan he was super smart and he made wings that he could fly with he also had super speed. But Donovan didn’t want to do all the cool things he wanted to be normal like  the other people. So what he did was to find the keeper who had all the history of people in it so he could find out about the person that cursed him when he was a child.  So Donovan went out on the streets to go find the keeper. And the keeper he found.

When Donovan walked in the keeper said, ”Hello my name is ricardo I’VE BEEN EXPECTING YOU”. He said it very loudly almost like he didn’t like Donovan.

Donovan asked, “Do you have the book of history?”

The keeper said, “Yes, yes I do why do you need it or what brings you here young boy?”

Donovan got the creeps and said “ well sir.  I have just come to tell you if you could show me the book of history I have to check something really important i’ve been trying to do this almost my whole life” Donovan said

Then the keeper asked what do you need to see that is so important  the Donovan replied “well it something” Donovan said The keeper said in a mad voice “ I KNOW AND I SAID WHAT IS SO IMPORTANT I DIDN’T ASK YOU WHAT YOU JUST SAID SO ANSWER MY QUESTION ANSWER ME NOW OR LEAVE!!”

Donovan said in a really scared  voice  “uhh i think i’ll come another time thank you though”

 

The keeper said go on leave THEN. So then Donovan was thinking why he got so mad and upset or something and Donovan had not done anything to him so what was the problem? Then at night he went to bed and slept until the next day. Then Donovan woke up and started surfing the web.  And he found out that there was a super spy that had the same last name as the keeper. so he looked more into that and found out she was the keeper’s sister.

 

And Donovan said very loudly “I KNOW WHAT TO DO”.

So Donavon went down the street and went to the keeper and he said very quietly in the store”s anybody here”

It was silent so Donovan went deeper on in the store and he saw giant metal doors it looked like a secret lair so he knocked on the giant metal doors and said “ IS ANYBODY HERE” but yet he couldn’t hear a thing.

So Donovan decided to go back but when he took one more step he herd like if somebody had opened a door or something he took a look and he said,

 

“Ahh” he got scared because he never expected to see a little girl. Donovan said to the little girl “ Are you lost?.

The little girl replied no im just come to look for some things then  Donovan said “OH what was it that you were looking for” he asked then the little girl replied back in a strange way like if she were hiding something.

 

Then after all that Donovan said  to the little girl “So what’s you’re name” the little girl replied “my name is Sophie how about you”

 

“ My name is donovan he said” Then Sophie asks Donovan “So what are you looking for” she said it but in a weird way then Donovan said “oh nothing i was just looking for the keeper i went to were he always is but he wasn’t there and i was wondering if he was here do you know where he can be” ? Donovan said.

 

Sophie replied no i dont no you should look for him another day Sophie said it in a nervous way.

 

Then Donovan said he needed to leave so he left but what Donovan didn’t know was that Sophie was  the Keepers spy. The next day Donovan woke up and got dressed for school after school he saw the little girl in the front of his school and tried to talk to her but she ran towards the keepers shop. And Donovan get very suspicious on why that little girl is so shy and sneaky . Then after days pasted Donovan was still trying to find out who had cursed him but yet he couldn’t find out who it was.

Donovan had an idea he said “ if the keeper doesn’t want to show me the history book then i will get it .

Then he had a plan but the problem was he didn’t want to disobey the the goddesses. Donovan had promised to never steal or lie or do bad things. But Donovan had been trying to find out who had cursed him. So he didn’t care he went to the keepers house and saw a window open he thought that was the only way he could go in the house so he climbed to get to the open window  and got in. He went to go reach for the journal but lazers got sent off and the keeper knocked him out

to be

continued….

 

 

Missile Mouse

Missile Mouse

By:Jake Parker

 

Space and different planets

 

the problem was that a evil king was enslaving creatures from another planet.

the solution was that they put robot 44 and Missile Mouse to stop the

the graphic novel was about a agent mouse named Missile Mouse tries to stop a evil king from enslaving other creatures. So he flies to the other planet to stop the king. But the king demands a bad guy to kill         Missile Mouse…

 

 

I loved it

Scotts myth

Who’s The Best At Parkour

By: Scott

Once there was a man named Vector. He was the god of parkour. He could do screwdrivers, back flips, front flips, epic jumps, and kongs. He was the master of parkour. The best of the best. The master of the masters. Until he saw Vinson. His mortal enemy.

 

Vinson had the strength of a bull, speed of a cheetah, the jumping power of a kangaroo and frog mixed together. He had bulging muscles. He had a huge chest, Biceps as big as a stomach, calves as large as a head, abs as big as bricks. He looked like the strongest man in the world. Vector never challenged him to parkour, in fright of losing. He would be killed instantly being beaten by a mere mortal. Vinson was almost the best at parkour.

 

Everyone jog, run, or walks away from Vector. They see Vinson doing parkour.  Vector is so very mad at Vinson. He  goes to a different place. His house is filled with parkour stunt supplies. That is where he goes. He turns on the news and sees Vincent, he throws his 64 by 64 inch plasma screen TV out his 120 foot tall building window.

“Thats it.”Vector says “I’M GONNA GET HIM”.

He goes over to the place where Vincent is and challenges him to a parkour race.

 

Vinson says “Yes and I will CRUSH you”.

So they made the map of where to go. It was filled with parkour on the way. It will take them 1 hour and if one of them can’t do it, they lose automatically. They agreed that whoever won will be the parkour god. The race would be taking place at Cunningham Falls. It had rocks and trees everywhere it would be perfect for the race. Vector thought he would lose. The race is tomorrow and it was going to be put down in history.

 

It was that day. The day of the great race. Vector woke with a start and put on his tight athletic suit. he put on his super jump shoes. He practiced trained all morning. The race came at 12:00 that afternoon. Vector was there and so was Vinson. They were starting. 3…2…1…GO!!! Vector was in the lead, Vinson left too late and was far behind.

“First obstacle coming up” said the announcer.

Vector side flipped up and back flipped off. Vinson jumped on to it and flipped off. It was epic to watch this race. People from CHINA CHINA were there just to watch Vector and Vinson go head to  head. The second obstacle was coming up. It was a tree. Vector climbed right up it and swung from one tree to another doing back flips each time. Vector got farther ahead by doing that. Vinson was strong so he jumped right over the trees. Vector was losing his balance. He got to the last tree jumped off parkour rolled and started running. He was a good 50 Feet away from Vinson. The last obstacle a house. Vector jumped through the window and slid right under the closing garage door. Vinson climbed to the top of the house and parkour rolled off and started running. Vinson was running so fast, he was right behind Vector. Right next to Vector…now in front of Vector.

This is ENOUGH, I’ve had ENOUGH He thought. He started glowing, Then… BAM

I WON”!!!!!

He won the race and is so happy. He felt like the richest most happiest man in the world. He could be a god and live his life happily.

 

He left with a giant trophy in his hands. He got home and saw his performance on the News.

“I am the one and only parkour god and nobody can take that place away from me”

He thought. He was right. He was even put into a game, it is called Vector. It is a parkour game that many people play. He is very famous. Whatever  happened to Vinson, well there was one thing I didn’t tell you about the deal. Whoever lost was going to be sent off to work for Hades.

 

The morale of this story is always believe in yourself though you might not achieve victory you’ll achieve something, and you’ll find out once you get there.

 

Malachi’s Myth Of The Knight

Once upon a time their was a little warrior named toro he is born from a rich family

toro was born in the castle while the dragon burning the castle and village his mom and

dad got killed by the dragon  then he was adopted by a caring woman named athena.

 

Meanwhile he was raised proper and trained well and soon he got older and his mom

told him about his original parents had died by an evil dragon and she told toro that he

had minions the great 3 headed chimera then the cocatrice thats roar can turn you to stone.

 

The great sandworms the kraken the legendary colossal squid that feasted on humans

the cerberus the guardian of the underworld then the 8 headed hydra then the.

Last but not least the evil dragon that breathes all elements so i started on my adventure

i was headed towards a cave in the north he encounters some rabbits  he shoots them with his bow they had longer feet and was bigger than a rabbit stuff these rabbits were called jack rabbits so when you eat them they.

 

are good protein  meat then, he roasted the rabbits then set up his tent then he went to sleep then the next day he woke up the went fishing then caught some large tuna he roasted those for

breakfast then he packed up and left 2 hours later he found the cave and entered it  as he.

Entered in a deep voice a ??????? said your visit is unwelcomed here then Toro was spinning in circles with his elven blade out then he heard a lions roar and a gust of wind then he barrel rolled out of the way then a strange 3 headed creature pounced out of the dark shadows. Toro  said “what are you.”

You look very odd said the Goat said in a funny chuckling sheep voice. “We are the 3 headed chimera.”  the great beast said to itself. “I heard of you before.Athena told me about this creature. The snake said in a hissing voice prepare for your doom Toro. Laughed the chimera charged a Toro and swiped at toro with its large paw and broke the cave wall meanwhile Toro leaped up in the air then came down with a thrashing slash and cut the tail of the chimera of which was the snake the chimera roared out in pain Toro got on the chimera’s back and its neck started bleeding. The goat was eventually having a slow and painful death then Toro hopped off and went face to face with the lion and it knocked him down,pounced overtop of him then quickly Toro pulled out his sword and then stabbed it into the chimera’s heart. The battle was over.Toro yelled out victory and he took out his mini dagger and took the black lion’s claws,the goat’s horns, the lion’s teeth, the snake’s fangs,poison sack and scales. Toro put the items in his bag then he left the cave. Toro set up his tent,made fire, and then caught some food and warmed it up on the fire.

 

Roasted. it then went to bed the next day he woke up and something was odd he opened the tent

and he was in the air! he looked up he saw a gigantic rooster headed creature with the body of a

black beast he went in the tent took out his sword it screeched at him he said you are one ugly.

Bird! its neck was getting big he said oh oh and covered his ears  and it roared he climbed its back and was cutting its neck then it let out a groan and died it was crashing into a desert! then it crashed he gets off the carcass and he a huge gust of sand came and next thing the carcass was gone! toro looked backed and said to himself something was not right he said to himself.

 

the cocatrice carcass just had meat on it then the ground started rumbling then a colossal insect called a sand worm

appeared then it groaned toro said nope not dying today he was very fast it dived under the sand

after him it knocked him up in the air he fell then he got stuck under the sand torso first it got.

Back under the sand and was headed toward toro finally got up and rolled out of the way of a devastating gulp meanwhile he grabbed on to the beasts and climbed on it it was trying to knock

him off but it didn’t tro was getting  dizzy he felt like the world was shaking he was going to puke.

Then he just gave up of balancing and the sandworm knocked him up in the air and snap he was eaten alive then the next thing he wakes up and sees a tongue some razor sharp teeth and some weird liquid called stomach acid he saw the cockatrice skeleton and lots of human. Skeletons and he also saw the heart he said oh my gosh i have been eaten alive! he had to use

its tongue to flip him in the chest of the beast he stepped on its tongue with his steel boots it screamed  and flicked him in the top of the chest he grabbed on to the walls in its belly and.

Was holding on with one hand and grabbed on with his other hand and his feet then with no mercy he jumped on its heart then the sandworm was making err err sounds then he impaled it

in the heart! it roared so loud that the village that toro lived in heard it and alerted athena that he.

Killed the 3rd beast! then the sand was disappearing it was turning into water very slowly he started dashing toward the mountains there was a friendly beast called a griffin she was guarding her nest at the very top of the mountain was a giant flat piece of mountain 5 hours.

Later he arrives at the top of the mountain a male griffin lands toro also arrives at the top in

a decent voice the male griffin says are you trying to harm my wife and kids no said toro

i need a ride to that village over their ok get on my back and the griffin took toro to the village.

Toro asked athena i need to slay the kraken but i can’t do it alone right wen toro said i need for

of the villages most famous and top bounty hunters came and said well come with you  ok said toro just what i need so the griffin had came back with his wife there were too people on each.

Griffins back but then athenas guards had a boat docked at the station with cannons and a room

below the upper floor of the boat was a clean and herbal smelling bunk beds some of the guards came so they set sail at the bermuda triangle one week later they encounter a strange place a group. Of guards had dropped some cannon balls that sank under the water fast then they hit the ground in a gigantic circle and it made an underwater earthquake meanwhile under that earthquake unleashed something huge a dark shadow with a triangular head a large eye and 10

large slimy barbed tentacles on of the guard was doing a dance then suddenly a huge tentacle.

Emerged from the water everybody had a horrified face on that guard was like what guys what is it? then suddenly a guard yelled out kraken! kraken its the legendary monster! that guard got scooped up and dropped in its huge star like beak that could bite through metal toro and the.

Hunters were sleep then one of the guards went down and tried to wake them up but they

where snoring like pigs but then the guard threw buckets of water on their heads they woke up

they were like mommy where’s pony? i thought you had it oh just a dream no time for sleeping.!

The kraken is here! say what yes the kraken toro and the bounty hunters got their weapons and

armor and rushed up the stairs they saw the gigantic squid one of the bounty hunters was using

her crossbow and the 2 one was using her dagger and short bow the 3rd one was using his.

Sword to cut off the many arms of the squid but they were regenerating! the 4th one was using his daggers  and longbow that man wat on its face rapidly cutting his eye but it slaps him off

one of the girls was aiming for the mouth the other girl was shooting the part of the arms that.

Makes it regenerate it had no arms because she destroyed the shells that made it regenerate

toro leaped up and shot it in the mouth then took his turpentine and lit his sword on fire then it

ate the sword and it was odd because instead of orange fire it was blue fire then his sword.

Came back at him like a boomerang they yelled out victory! then they were celebrating by

eating the fried squid toro and the hunters got most of the food and they also had apple cider.

 

And some whisky meanwhile the next day the ship sailor is trying to sail the ship in a different direction but the current was too strong they were headed mega cave then a huge wave came

and washed them in the way wen toro and the hunters woke up it was just them four poseidon had. Sent that monstrous wave the boat was empty! they were like who sent that wave! a deep

voice came rising up from the water and also poseidon i did why said toro because you killed my

kraken we are deeply sorry said all five of the hunters athena told us to do this who is this athena?.

Said poseidon my step the goddess of wisdom and my step mother said toro bring me athena we shall have a talk about this so poseidon sent a boosting wave against their boat and they were their in 10 minutes  they said

athena poseidon wishes to speak to you ok said athena so she hopped on the boat and they took. Her to the center of the ocean and poseidon said so you are athena yes said athena why

did you tell these hunters to kill my magnificent kraken the dragon made your kraken its minion

to try to kill toro and the hunters so is this dragon you speak of real ? yes said athena asked poseidon so that was why i smelled smoke twenty five years ago i and i still didn’t know why.

This very day until you told me what happened toro said it killed my parents so thats why i am on a quest to kill its minions and the dragon oh i know now said poseidon use this water flute too call me when you are in danger or need help and take this icy water sword. And shield poseidon said you must travel to the gates of the underworld and tell cerberus.

That we are his friends then kill the 20 headed hydra that is blue with horns on the side on its heads.

In the colosseum. along with karinos and the white and black twin giant pythons so poseidon gave them the ability to breathe underwater so he brings them deep deep

below the water to the underworld they walk in it is a maze they find a half torn map in a.

Large square in the wall it shows x marks on dead ends and a check mark in the middle

as there heading to the gate they encounter a large black 3 headed guard of the gate called Cerberus it leaps out at him but toro dodges toro doesn’t wanna hurt it he wants to.

Tell it what happened to it it jumps and knocked him down and its trying to hold open 2 of its mouths meanwhile his hands are bleeding but when he is bleeding the dog senses

the scent of toro it stops and backs up and sits down and it pulled the lever to open the.

Gate as it was opening up there was a giant ring with people millions of people sitting down at the top of the circle the gate closed! and the four hunters were left with the cerberus it was sniffing its way out of there they had to go back the way they came.

Without the map but good thing they had a dog then after an hour they found their way

out then the find the walls of the colosseum and asked the guards if they could watch

then meanwhile toro is fighting gladiators with spears,swords,shields,bows,crossbows.

Maces,daggers, and more he killed all of the gladiators then they sent out the minotaur

he killed that then the cyclops he shot an arrow at its eye then then they sent out the

manticore  killed it by cutting its head off then they sent out 2 giants this was unusual.

He ran away to the walls of the colosseum they shifted spikes at the walls quickly someone called out look out toro spiked walls quickly he jumped out of the way

the giants were walking towards toro he yelled now! the giants got stabbed in the chest.

Toro had won but 40 to 60 men were walking out pulling something huge that was hissing

as it came out all you could see was blueish greenish 20 heads with horns on the side

it broke loose and the beast was loose it ate all the men and slithered into the sandy.

Colosseum it looked at toro toro was horrified it was bigger than anything he fought

he started to dash at one of the heads he climbed on its head and used his turpentine to burn the cells that make its heads regenerate the cut 19 off but there was one more he cut.

That head off and the battle was over they gave him truckloads of money and he left the colosseum and told the hunters then he told them there is one final monster i have to slay the giant  dragon that killed my family after traveling back to the village they told.

Athena that it is time to kill the dragon athena said you must get zeus to help you athena

summoned a portal to mount olympus they fall out of the portal then they introduce them

selves to zeus then they asked him to come with them on their journey to the dragon as.

They summoned poseidon and zeus summoned a portal to the dragons lair when they

fall out they see the giant dragon saying come forward toro come get your revenge toro

said dude why did you have to kill my family i did it because i wanted to test your skills.

Yea right you did it on purpose so if you say it was on purpose come forward and get your revenge zeus zapped him with a bolt poseidon poseidon sent water warriors fire was

not effective so he tried electricity it worked zeus tried angelic warriors but the dragon.

Used dark fire breath and it consumed their souls it was no use zeus called all of the of

the other gods Athena,Hades,Ares,Hermes,ApolloArtemis,Hestia,Demeter,Aphrodite they

all were summoned they all were using their powers but the dragon was too strong toro.

Jumped on its chest and started whacking it until their was a few lathen their was layers of skin left located on the heart and it was glowing red with many human hearts inside toro jumped and was hitting it then the dragon was weak it fell to its knees and elbows.

Toro tried to whack at it but its was very hard toro and the hunters and the gods and goddesses all used their powers and boom the dragon was a large pile of crisps

toro yelled victory! the hearts turned into real people and they thanked toro and.

Made him whatever he wanted they went to mountain olympus and toro and the

hunters came gods and goddesses the 3rd hunter became the goddess of nature

the 4th hunter became the goddess of fire and the 2nd one became the goddess of.

Plasma the 1st one became the god of saturn toro became the god of all the elements

so meanwhile the gods and goddesses all became rich and happy with their life

The End

 

 

 

I FUNNY(A Middle School Story)

IFUNNY is from James Pattersonand Chris Grabenstein. In IFUNNY you’ll hear about Jamie mission to win the Planet’s Funniest Kid Comic Contest. You’ll meet his insanely un-funny stepfamily, you’ll meet Pierce and Gaynor, a amazing person called Suzie Orolvsky, and the world’s worst bully, who is Stevie Kosgrov and he happens to live in the same house as Jamie. If you stick with Jamie, you’ll learn Jamie biggest secret. My favorite part was when Jamie won the Trophy and got a big party for his honor.

 

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Aniyah’s Myth

THE 6 WEIRD KIDS AND HOW THEY GOT             STUCK IN A TINY CLOSET!!!

 

One day there was a group of kids that was very weird and their name’s was Aniyah,Tejoin,Amanda,Edwin and Kentrell,Dayanara. So one day they were taking a walk with each other and they went past a huge house. So Tejoin said “ Let’s go in the house” Amanda say’s um no!!!! because what if something bad happens    ” Edwin said “ nothing bad is going to happen to us unless you are a big wimp

” Amanda said “ no i’m not let’s go in.

then”6 weird friends went inside of the house and took a walk and then they saw a very small door and went inside of the door Amanda said

 

“ I don’t think we should go in there because something bad is going to happen and then we are probably going to stuck you never know what is going to happen ”  Kentrell said ”yeah whatever because you know you

are scared why won’t you just admit it” Amanda says I am not scared ok now let’s just go in so we can just get this over with ”Tejoin says ok whatever you say”.

So the 6 weird kids went into the tiny closet and the door shut. The 6 weird kids screamed Amanda’s said

 

“I told you something bad was going to happen but you just don’t listen to me do ya just because I am really weird”      So the 6 weird kids yelled for help but no one heard them”. So they gave up. So Edwin says “what do we now I told you that something

bad was going to happen Amanda but you just had to prove that you wasn’t a wimp” Amanda says

 

“ WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT WAIT ya’ll are the ones that said I was a wimp and I told ya’ll that I was not so you need to keep your mouth shut Edwin” So they all just prayed for help and the next 2 hours a god showed up and said “Kids are you okay and do you need any help” but they couldn’t hear him so he yelled even louder and then Kentrell said “ sh sh did ya’ll hear that” Edwin said “NO I didn’t” Kentrell says  “see watch sh sh” The god says “ Little kids are ya’ll okay. The 6 weird kids says what the god says “ Are ya’ll okay” The 6 weird kids said yes we are but can you help us get out of this tiny closet Amanda is claustrophobic and Edwin says “I think i need to throw up”. The god says “ok i will try to help ya’ll try” because i don’t know if i can do it or not i will try as hard as possible.

“The 6 weird kids says” we need to get out of here because some people got to use the bathroom here” Dayanara says “yeah i got to go and i got to go real bad so you either get us out or you just let us suffocate you got 5 minutes mr.” The god says” alright alright I will try my best okay just give me some time to think”

 

. So after that while the 6 weird kids were waiting the god finally got an idea. The god says “hey guys I found a way to get ya’ll out of the tiny closet. I will just call the fire department”.

Tejoin said okay but you better hurry because I am about to go crazy in here because I am claustrophobic. So the fire department came and got the 6 weird kids out of the tiny closet and then Amanda said

 

“I told ya’ll something bad was going to happen to us”. And then Edwin said “ Be quiet at least we are out  of that wacko thing”. So the 6 weird kids went home and went to sleep so they could go to school the next day and they lived happy for the rest of their lives.

THE END

 

 

Eve and the Bandit King

Eve and the Bandit King

Eve was a young lady it was time to her to move out of her mothers house. She was childish.

“No one will marry you if you be so childish.” Her mother said.

“Mother you need to relax I’m fine being a woman without a man. Now I’m going to the village of Athens to get crops and food, okay?”

So Eve had made it to the village of Athens and she was excited to see that everyone was too busy to notice that the markets are open and they could start buying.

“ You young lady you look eligible for King Hans.” said a old man who was holding her by the arm and taking her to the pedestal. “Young lady what is your name”? said a middle aged man.

Eve ran home and told her mother of what happened. “Mother mother I’m going to be the next Queen of Athens.” Eve cried out. “What is the matter you will have riches and glory.”

Excitement came out of her mothers voice. “But I shall not be queen if me and the king had any connection together.” Sobbed Eve. “Come on you have a big day tomorrow.” Eve and her mother had supper and Eve cleaned the house while her mother was in her room.

“Three cheers for the Queen.” her mother was playing aroundwhile Eve was putting her gown on.

“It was kind of the king to let you use one of the gowns. Eve and her mother got a knock on the door. “I’m Sergeant Jones and I’m here to collect your things and to take you to the palace.” He said. Eve and the sergeant were putting things on the carriage.

“Excuse me miss but you don’t need to help with package.” said Sergeant Jones. “Honey it would be best if you just sit down okay?” said Eve’s mother.

So Eve sat down and she was waiting for the carriage to leave.

Eve had arrived for the big ceremony in the village Athens .She was really surprised when she exited out of carriage. There was a whole crowd waiting for the new queen and she was worried she was going to do a poorly job at being queen.

”Mother I change my mind being queen is the worst thing ever. Remember that time when I was so shy to make a speech for the new children’s area?” Cried Eve.

Eve was so worried at being queen what if she will always have to complement the King when she doesn’t feel like it. There was so much pressure one Eve she couldn’t bear to hold on.

“My dear young lady I shall call you my wife for tomorrow’s big ceremony.” The King greeted her and her mother.

“Henna is going to show you to your rooms for my lovely mother-in-law you will have the view of a healthy green forest and with a lovely bed made from our seamstress Madeline. For my fiance I will give the forest view, the lovely bed, and you shall have anything you desire to have in your room.” The King said.

Henna escorted them to their rooms.”Eve this is my stop hope you get something twice as best as this it’s enormous and so gorgeous.” Her mother said in grief.

“Here you go ma’am your room awaits the bags will be coming up shortly.” said Henna. “All clear thank you my good sir.” King Hans said.

Eve looked outside and saw that it was a red velvet float that had a banner on that said Queen Eve of Athens. Eve was worried King Hans would never give her respect as he never gave to his old wife. Eve’s mother invited her to have some tea and snicker doodle cookies to have for a snack. So Eve and her mother had a lovely evening talking and sitting about the parade they will have in town.

Meanwhile all the way on the top of Mt. Olympics the great Gods were having a very important meeting about how Eve should have a special guest at her royal wedding and parade. That special person was… Aphrodite god of beauty!

“ I say we send her out to sea and then Poseidon can take her across sea.” Medusa said with glee. “No then if I accidentally throw the ship over then what.” Poseidon himself said. “How about we… never mind it was a stupid idea” C.A Cupid said with I want my mom to get there safe.

“Arr! Why is this crown so big on me”. King Han complained. “My great sir it was fitted on you just last week with the dummy.” Henna insisted to tell him. “Are you calling me a dummy you going to banishment hall GUARDS TAKE HER AWAY!!! He commanded. “Wait wait I mean the fake doll see.”

Henna was a poor girl who was the only trade her family could trade for and the most variable trade they ever had. She was only little when she first left her  home and she never saw her mother or brothers and sister ever since she left. Her father works as the seamstress.

Eve was putting her clothes on when she got a mysterious visitor waiting in the sitting room.

“Who are you, I was sent here to see you they said you were very important.” Eve worried. “I’m your mother Aphrodite God of beauty I came here for the wedding and parade.” She said.

Eve was crying in fear and wondered how she was her favorite god is her mother.

Ding Dah-Ding-Dong (trumpet horn blowing). It was time to start the ceremony of the marriage.

“Do you Eve Moody, take Hans Marlene to be your lawfully wedded husband.” said the priest. “I do.” Eve said. “And do you Hans Marlene take Eve Moody to be your lawfully wedded wife.” “I do.” said Hans.

“Congratulations on the wedding our dear King Hans, and now our new Queen Eve.” Congratulations you too.”

Eve was walking up the steps and then sat on the seat was sitting on when she was trying it out yesterday. She was walking with her King and then the doors behind them.

It was the afternoon and the King was in the bedroom putting  pajamas on. The king opens the door and Eve was walking past the room and saw something suspicious.

“Oh my goodness no beard.” Eve whispered. “You there, Guards sees her immediately.” He commanded.

Eve was sent to the prison room where all prisoners go when the King sends them there. Eve was crying and sobbing. But met a visitor while she was there.

“Here my child, I shall free for you can show the kingdom and the village that who the King truly is.” Aphrodite was there. “Thank you mother thank you for freeing me and helping me.

There was a celebration going on and the King wanted to look good since he just got married 2 hours ago.

“Thank you my kingdom and village for you have shown me that my new wife Queen Eve will be the best queen ever. Said King Hans. “Here is my darling Queen Eve.

Eve was walking up the stairs and said she wanted to talk to the village out loud.

“King Hans is a great man but he shall not be called King for which is a fake. He used to be a servant for King Tatar

.” Eve confessed. “Then how is he King.” said the children of Athens

“Ah, you see that is because he killed King Tatar. “Oh also guards take him away he is the Bandit Hans.

Eve was glad that everything was back to normal and she would never have to have an arranged marriage anymore.

“You’ll pay for it Eve Moody, I mean it soon you’ll pay!!! Said the Bandit Hans.

Eve was talking to the children of Athens and then a man and his son flew down with wings. And joined the celebration.

That is how Queen Eve came to be and the evil, sneaky, rude Bandit Hans left the town and cried home to his father, King Minos.

SLENDER HARDCORE PARKOUR

SLENDER HARDCORE PARKOUR

The story starts when a boy named Slender likes to
Zombie Parkour.So he starts off buy parkouring off the top of the school and then he landed his first frontflip,then he starts to do it off a fast moving car and jumps off in the front of the car and Slender hit his head on the street and got hit by the moving car.

Later on, he was in the hospital,he broke his arm and his head. he was hurt really bad.So then he had a concution and so they gave him medicine for it. His first zombie parkour was a little hurtful but he didn’t care that much. His live is all about Zombie Parkour so he can’t quit and if
he did quit this kind of ghost called the ZOMBIE PARKOUR DEVIL that if you do quit zombie parkouring then the devil will take over you but Slender will never quit.

The next morning he ran to his mom’s
house and his mom’s name is sharkesha so then when he made it
into the house his mom Sharkesha said, “Have you stopped,he lied and said no.And his mom said good. Because if you do one more trick he will take you.” The other day he did a trick to impress a girl and fell to the underworld.

It was the most dangerous thing on planet earth because he quitted ZOMBIE PARKOURING and he learned lesson to not quit zombie parkour.The Parkour Devil almost killed him with a long sword,but he thought not to.

Then once he fell into the underworld he didn’t even know what
happened to him so then he finally got of the dark and scary place
and so then he walked around a really scary tunnel and he hears screaming and then he started to yell mom mom mom,then nobody
answered so then he started to cry then he said I won’t quit
zombie parkour ever.

The ZOMBIE PARKOUR DEVIL came
and said you’re not going to quit Zombie Parkouring ever again Then Slender said yes that is right then the parkour devil said
okay i’ll take it then he took Slender back home and the parkour
devil said make sure you never quit zombie parkour than Slender
said you too and the SLENDER HARDCORE PARKOUR

The story starts when a boy named Slender likes to
Zombie Parkour.So he starts off buy parkouring off the top of the school and then he landed his first frontflip,then he starts to do it off a fast moving car and jumps off in the front of the car and Slender hit his head on the street and got hit by the moving car.

Later on, he was in the hospital,he broke his arm and his head. he was hurt really bad.So then he had a concution and so they gave him medicine for it. His first zombie parkour was a little hurtful but he didn’t care that much. His live is all about Zombie Parkour so he can’t quit and if
he did quit this kind of ghost called the ZOMBIE PARKOUR DEVIL that if you do quit zombie parkouring then the devil will take over you but Slender will never quit.

The next morning he ran to his mom’s
house and his mom’s name is sharkesha so then when he made it
into the house his mom Sharkesha said, “Have you stopped,he lied and said no.And his mom said good. Because if you do one more trick he will take you.” The other day he did a trick to impress a girl and fell to the underworld.

It was the most dangerous thing on planet earth because he quitted ZOMBIE PARKOURING and he learned lesson to not quit zombie parkour.The Parkour Devil almost killed him with a long sword,but he thought not to.

Then once he fell into the underworld he didn’t even know what
happened to him so then he finally got of the dark and scary place
and so then he walked around a really scary tunnel and he hears screaming and then he started to yell mom mom mom,then nobody
answered so then he started to cry then he said I won’t quit
zombie parkour ever.

The ZOMBIE PARKOUR DEVIL came
and said you’re not going to quit Zombie Parkouring ever again Then Slender said yes that is right then the parkour devil said
okay i’ll take it then he took Slender back home and the parkour
devil said make sure you never quit zombie parkour than Slender
said you too and the Zombie Parkour Devil said I don’t even parkour
I’m the Parkour Zombie Devil you’re lucky I didn’t keep you there to
the underworld then slender said yeah your right and they both said
bye to each other. As he went home to see his mom she said where have you been sharkesha said I was in the underworld slender said and saw the zombie parkour and then shakesha gave him a beating and said you should have listen to me.Okay goodnight mom.
And that is the story of SLENDER HARDCORE PARKOUR!!!!

Sincerely:Shia Mcclinton SLENDER HARDCORE PARKOUR

 

Save The Town

Save The Town

by: Matthew

One windy tuesday morning in a small town in paris 1948. A man by the name Seth Marks the 3 he is 24 years old he is the son of Seth marks the 2 one day Seth was sitting on his couch at home and writing a story about his life time and daly bases he does everyday because Seth likes to write stories about himself. Seth also like to workout he loves soccer his favorite team was Manchester united. in 1945 everybody in the small town named Seth the leader of the town. Everybody liked Seth because he never gave people taxes. The next day….. Nessus came to the town and told Seth to fight him.

Seth told Nessus no and said ’Leave us alone.‘’

Nessus replied ‘’I’m not leaving until you you fight me.‘’

Seth agreed to fight Nessus on saturday november 6.

4 days later… It’s the day of the fight Seth was double thinking about fighting Nessus because Seth does not like to fight people but he’s actually but then Seth realized he’s fighting a creature Nessus is a creature. A few moments Nessus calls Seth to come down and fight.

Seth said to himself  ‘’I have to do this for the town or we all are in danger’’.

Seth came down when he came out the door Nessus ran straight to Seth tried to get out the way but Nessus was to fast and grabbed Seth and threw him to the ground. Nessus punched Seth in the face Seth kicked Nessus in the face Nessus shook his head and got angry and kicked Seth in the face but on time Seth moved out the way before he was going to get kicked in the face. Seth got up and grabbed a rock and threw it at Nessus got dizzy in Seth head he said

‘’This what’s is going to save the town’’.

Seth grabbed several more rocks and continue to throw rocks at Nessus until Nessus was out and couldn’t do no more when Even was at his last rock. Nessus looked like he was almost out. Seth threw his last rock so hard he put all his power that he still had in himself and he knocked out Nessus once Seth knocked out Nessus started to bleed so much he made a pool. Something that Seth never thought could happen in his life he had to fight a monster like Nessus but be able to beat Nessus with rocks and saved his town.

Seth said to himself ‘’I hope dad is proud of me.‘’

Seth’s dad was the old leader of the town.

Once Seth defeated Nessus they took him back to hercules to put him in prison when came back everybody cleaned up everything from the fight. Once everybody was cleaned up it was late so everybody went back home and went to sleep because all of them know they have to go to work tomorrow. When Seth got home he brushed his teeth and put on a banded on his back that was bleeding when Seth was done he went to bed. The next morning everything went back to a normal life. 1 year later it was a beautiful sunny day Seth was helping farmers to grow food and vegetables then something big happened.

ZEUS arvids to town…

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