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speech By:Edwin Torres

Hello everybody my name is Edwin Torres and it is a great honor to be here. I would like to thank Mrs.Dietz and Mrs.German also all teachers, staff, families and 2014-15 5th grade students for supporting me. I am going to talk about how I got so far in my life.

First is as a kindergartner I thought school was going to be easy and fun but is I started to come more and more it would become harder and boring. I learned to read and also learned my numbers which now it’s helping me a lot in my past years. I have met a lot of other students in kindergarten like My friend Little that has black hair very long hair wears glasses and cool, also Matthew that has black hair kinda short small head always wears Under Armor and wears a lot of Jordans.

 

Now I am going to talk about how being in 1st and 2nd grade  helped me and affected me. First grade was when I started to add bigger numbers together.  For example in 1st grade I would add 2 digit numbers such as 23+43=66. Also in 1st grade was when I had the big event of my past years being in elementary school. The big event was when I got suspended. The reason I got suspended was because I brought a something serious to school. The reason I brought it was because my friends told me to bring it to school. But I sometimes still wonder why I listened to those friends. But I’ll tell you why. Those friends I used to hang out with told me that I should take it because other people will steal it from my house.

 

One kid always stole kid’s toys that were outside, and I would keep my toys outside as kid. After a long time, they finally convinced me to take it. I took it to school the next day to school. But I didn’t take it out of my backpack until the end of the day and we were on the bus.

But one of the patrols saw that I took out so they took out of my hands and gave to the bus driver. The next day I was called out of the bus to talk about the situation. They called my mom and they told her I was going to be suspended for 3 days. At home my mom told to watch out with I hang out with because I can lead to the same bad road as them. After that I have never hung out with those kids. 2 of them moved and the other one still lives in the neighborhood.

2nd grade helped to prepare for 3rd grade. In 2nd grade was actually pretty easy for me. In second grade I met a lot of people and at the same time a lot of my friends left.

 

When I started 3rd grade I started to be more responsible and more mature than I was all then all the other years. 3rd grade was the year that I started to learn to multiply and divide. In 3rd grade I was very bad at dividing and very good at multiplying. But then I started to practice more and more on my division until I got better and I was successful in 3rd grade.

 

In 4th and 5th grade was the year that I started to feel like the kings of elementary school. In 4th grade we practice our multiplication a lot especially in Ms.Shaffers class. One thing that i Liked about Ms.Shaffer was that she would make learning fun. For example when we were just starting to learn our double and 3 digit numbers she made A multiplication tournament and the winner would be able to get a turn in the prize box.

 

In fifth grade was a lot of fun. I learned that stuff could be hard like math reading and all  the other subjects in school. My teacher Mr.Fitz has been giving us advice for middle school. For example he said “that if you think this school work is hard just wait until next year” which meant that middle school is going to be harder.

 

In middle school I am hoping to meet new people. I also hope I don’t get into any trouble like I did this year. In future I will try to graduate high school go to a college or become a Soccer player If i don’t become A Soccer player I hope to make a company or A be A Scientist.

 

Thank you, everybody for supporting me have A great rest of you summer!

 

If Doctors are going to be here in the future? By:Edwin Torres

The job of a doctor is kinda complicated because you need to be smart and know what body parts are inside your body. You need to also know what can cause a disease. Another thing you need to know is that what treatments and current tools are used for. To be a doctor you need a Doctoral or professional degree.

The duties in the job are very important because people are taking their time to save people and make new treatments. They have to prepare the tools for the passenger. If one thing goes wrong it can cause a death or your job. But to get this job you have to be responsible.

The reason is because you have different duties such as, kids, register, surgeon and all that stuff.

I would recommend this job to you because it is fun cool and it helps the people and world. You do get payed well. With this job you will be able to make a living. You will make friends and have a wonderful life and family. Also if your child is sick you might now what cuased it.

 

I believe there would be doctors in the future because more people will be born and a lot of people will be sick. I also believe there would start to make companies and more doctors will be needed. They will have more treatments and technology will be used a lot. I also believe is that they might start to use robots. They will also start to make more and more buildings to have to go farther away.

200 years of a cobbler: Edwin

Back then they did not have many options. They had some ugly shoes. The same things are that they still sell shoes, some styles are the same. They also had to walk to the closest shoe maker. For some people the closest shoe maker was about 3 hours away.  It was also hard to afford shoes for your family back then. The reason it was hard to afford was because if you worked for the whole day you would earn about 1 dollar.

In 1815 when the company started the only way we could tell the world about our shoe company is by paper. But the good thing was that I was the only cobbler in Lebon Shanes dr. Which meant more money for me. Also some families have about 4 members.

 

Now, In 2015 we have more technology. We also use the internet to tell the world about my company. We now sell shirts, pants, shorts, sports gear. Now we also have more options like colors, type, size, and if you want to customize. In 2015 we also make the shoes faster and you can order them and they will come to your house quick.

 

I believe that the past years there is a major change in my company. They have more tools and internet. I also believe that in the future shoes will be made faster. Now they’re selling more than shoes. Back then it took about 3 hrs took make one pair.

Fight for top of the world

I think nobody should take over the north pole because  it is a natural habitat and because the polar bears, walrus and all the animals won’t have a habitat to live and get extinct. If they get extinct we will not have fancy warm cloth to wear in the winter. That would also affect the food source they would be to much walrus fish and other animals.

 

They can also share if the want to but Russia and U.S.A  because Russia put their flag and Alaska is part of the U.S.A.

This is why I think they should not take over the North Pole.   

Uninvited Guest

One day  in a creepy house in 10278 Quail Creek Pl Ijamsville MD. The family Smith was just moving into their new house. They  unpack and put all their stuff away like winter stuff and old carpets, he looks around and sees a door he goes and opens it and it leads to the parking lot where the trash can is and their Cadillac with black and silver rims with blue lights.

 

He tells his son John, the boy with black hair and style of  Cristiano Ronaldo, “ Go choose your room because after you choose you won’t change.”

John replied, “Ok.”

John chose the big room because he said, “He needed more room for his video games.” His sister Jasmine replied by saying, “I need it for the sleepovers with my new friends.”

 

“Hahaha,” laughed  John, “ You’re acting like you are going to get friends.”

Then their mom Jessica came in to separate the fight and she asks “he was here first?”

 

John slightly raises his hand.

Their mom Jessica tells Jasmine to go to the other room.

 

“Haha” laughed John

Jasmine got mad so she stuck her tongue out John. After they all unpack they order 2 pizza and the toppings were pineapple, Ham, Pepperoni, Sausage, and cheese crust with mountain dew and 30 hot wings. Then they remember that the super bowl between Patriots and Seahawks was that Sunday. They invite their friends and they say they’ll be there in 30 minutes. Finally their friends arrive with more pizza. It was the 4th quarter 27-28 the Patriots are champions and the Smith family with their friends get real mad. They also called the last play of the seahawks the worst play of the year.

 

The next morning everybody is out of the house the 2 kids are at school and the parents at work. Meanwhile at home these little creatures named Murfets. They were created by the evil scientist neighbor in Mexico to be evil but they didn’t want to be evil. They traveled to their cousin’s, the Smurfs, world so they could create a world just for them. They started feel lonely so they came the human world to make friends but people get scared and try to kill them.  Now they can’t get to their world because the evil scientist and they need a river to get to their world. The Murfets sometimes get so they 3 diamonds and a rock to crush. They crust the 3 diamonds and the rock (woosh) the invisible Murfets house connects to the door in the basement. All of the Murfets come out to party in the Smith family house the eat marshmallow, Drink Mountain Dew and watch the Smurfs 2 and play Fifa 15. When the Smith family are parking they run down the stairs and Juan hears footsteps down the stairs so he follows the sound with his family down the stairs and stops them. Juans heart was pounding. He was sure that he’d saw the doorknob turn.

 

“Ahhhhhhh” the family yells

 

They all run up the stairs into the parents room and hid under the covers

“Should I go back down to the stairs?” asked Juan

 

“Yes you should but first clean the living room and the kitchen while we’re at Chipotle having a wonderful time”, said Jessica

 

“No I don’t…” said Juan

 

“Oh you said yes thank you DON’T have a wonderful time” Interrupted Jessica

 

“But but but I’m hungry” said Juan

 

“Bie” yelled Jessica

 

“Haha,” laughed the kids in the car

 

While Jessica and the kids were having fun. Juan had just finished cleaning the room and kitchen. Juan was getting prepared so he got a bat, shin guards, helmet, elbow and knee pads. He walks carefully down the stairs. He finally arrives at the very creepy door he finds a smoking pot with 3 diamonds and a rock he scrubbed it on the doorknob and he opens the door and a mysterious house appears. He doesn’t remember the house when he opened the door on the first day he arrived at the new house. One way or another he was going to protect his family. He searches around the creepy house and he finds another closed room door. So he opens it slowly and he finds small creepy green creatures

 

“Ahhhhhhh!” everybody yells.

 

Juan gets so scared that he smacks them with a bat.

 

“Owww” says one of the green creatures.

 

Then one of the green creatures says, “Calm down”

 

“Ok” replied Juan

 

“We good cuz yea we good or nahh?” said one of the green creatures

 

“Yea we good,” said Juan.

 

“Who are you people?” asked Juan

 

“They replied we are Murfets the cousins of the Smurfs” said the Murfets

 

“We are here because we find the most rocks and diamonds in yard.” Said one of the Murfets

 

“Wait what, why do you need a diamonds and rocks?” Asked Juan

 

“We need to connect our room to this door.” Replied another Murfets

 

“Who created you?” asked Juan

 

“The evil scientist next door.” said a murfet

 

“WHAT, I HAVE AN EVIL SCIENTIST NEXT DOOR?!” said Juan

 

“Yea, we can defeat him with a super duper powerful wand that we are creating” said a Murfet

 

“Is it ready?” asked Juan

 

“Why do you want to know” said a Murfet

 

“I want to get rid of the evil scientist duhh.” said Juan

 

“True that,” said the cool Murfet

 

“All we need is some rubies and coral reef water,” said a Murfet

 

“I have a friend who used to be in ICE COLD GOLD who lives in 5289 Mussetter Rd

Ijamsville, Maryland,”said Juan

 

“Ok what are we waiting for let’s go” said another Murfet

 

The gang enters the Bugatti Veyron that Juan just bought. They arrived at his friends from ICE COLD GOLD. Juan asks his friend Josh Feldman if he can have a rubie.

Josh Feldman replies “ok but you owe me”

“How about I tell you that Smurfs are real and they have cousins,” said Juan

 

“Yea thats enough,” said an a surprised face.

 

“Yes,” Juan said in a happy voice.

 

They drive back to the house that the Murfets live in. They start to finish the wand.

“Ok it’s ready Juan,” said a Murfet in a happy voice

 

“Then what are we waiting for lets go!” Said Juan

 

“We are actually waiting for the plan,” said another Murfet

 

“Oh,” said Juan

 

One hour later…

“Now, After an hour i have finally finished,” said one of the Murfets.

 

“Lets go get that evil scientist,” said Juan

 

“OK!” Yelled all the Murfets

 

They are walking to the evil scientist house when they see him come out the front door.

 

“This is going to be easy,” said a Murfet

 

“Lets get him!” Said Juan

 

“Ok, ready or not shoot!” Yelled a Murfet

30 Minutes later…

“I thought it was going to be hard,” said a Juan

 

“Oh yea, we accidently used the send to another dimension wand,” said a Murfet

 

“Lets check where dimension he got sent to,” said another Murfet

 

So they check were the evil scientist got sent but it turns out he was at the Smurfs Dimension. They become good friends and go everywhere together they became famous and met new friends.

 

The End.

Clear spring park BY:Edwin Torres Clear Spring Park Scenery Dr Germantown, Maryland

Clear spring park is good place to chill and have fun. But can also be a little dangerous. In one way it could be dangerous is that they have too many thugs. The people Clear spring parks i s great place for adults to speak with people their age. wear their clothes in an inappropriately the also have to many fights.

 

I believe that clear spring park is a good place to be active. Even though that their are some bad things about the park. They have good slides, swings,and a basketball court. But it some people don’t like to share with others so they hog the court. They also sometimes share.

They slides are extra big for extra more fun. They also have ice cream.


In one of these days you should go to clear spring park to chill and have fun.   

Monster of the hill

Rob Harrell

 

the problem was that the the dragon has not been attacking

 

so the scientist goes to help but the dragon does not like to attack so they turn him into a hero.

stoker-on-avon

2014 was…

Amazing because we won the tournament in Rockville with 18 points.

I also scored more than 10 goals in the season. But we still have not totally won completely because we have a game on Saturday at 3:00 pm.

 

The biggest event for me was Real Madrid beating FC Barcelona 3-1.

 

The biggest event was brazil losing 7-1 to Germany and also Carlos Vela returning to Mexico.


I hope Mexico wins the copa de oro and summer olympics.

Missile Mouse

Missile Mouse

By:Jake Parker

 

Space and different planets

 

the problem was that a evil king was enslaving creatures from another planet.

the solution was that they put robot 44 and Missile Mouse to stop the

the graphic novel was about a agent mouse named Missile Mouse tries to stop a evil king from enslaving other creatures. So he flies to the other planet to stop the king. But the king demands a bad guy to kill         Missile Mouse…

 

 

I loved it

Los Evil Immortals Matadores

One day at  Greek Burritos in Toluca, Mexico  Cantinflas was eating burritos with his friend Chilindrina and their other friend Aniyah. While they eat their burritos in Greek Burritos all of them watch the t.v because their talking about the 3 of the most dangerous Immortals. Named El Ponchoco he was the Male of the group he was half God and half Immortal, Powerful, Evil, Strong, And ugly. The Female was named La chimichaca she was also half God and half Immortal, Evil, Strong, Powerful, And also ugly. Last but not least their daughter Aniyaina but they call her La Aniyaina she was just like her mother evil, But not so powerful, And not so strong, And ugly too. But she was half God and half Immortal. The 3 friends did not like what the 3 immortals did so they decided to put an end to all the trouble that the immortals have done so they put together the Los Evil Immortals Matadores(L.E.I.M).

 

But the group of friends figured that without powers they won’t be able to defeat the immortals. So they think but don’t think of anything good.

 

On the way home a small bird tells them to follow him. So they follow the bird and the bird leads them to the park where their is nobody, Then the bird says “Zeus has sent me to inform you that he would be meeting with you at the woods at exactly 15:00pm”

 

They reply “Ok”, And a wind blows (wooooosh) the bird disappears. They go over to Cantinflas house to play hide in greek. They played and played until they got hungry so they went inside and ordered grizza for delivery. They ordered 2 a hawaiian pineapple, Ham, And cheese crust with 26 hot chicken wings

 

Icarus showed up to to his door with their grizza and said “Did you order a hawaiian pineapple, Ham, And cheese crust with 26 hot chicken wings?”

 

“Yes” they replied and also said “It looks like you have improved your flying.”

 

“Yes, Thanks for noticing.” replied Icarus.

 

They invited Icarus in to have some grizza too. They talked and watched tv. 10 minutes later Icuras left because he had to go work. They look at the time it was 14:50 so they left because it took 10 minutes to get their. On their way they saw a lot of their friends, and said hi to them all but stay with them because they had to be with Zeus.

 

When they got to the woods they waited and waited until a big wind blows and then Zeus appears and tells them “I heard that you wanted to make a group of evil immortal killers”

 

They replied “Yes”.

 

Then Zeus said “ In that condition you don’t have powers so what powers do you want but you have  use them wisely and one power each”.

 

Cantinflas chosen the power of green fire, Chilindrina chose lighting, And last but not least Aniyah chose the power of water. So like Zeus promised to give them the powers they wanted, (Pssshhh) he gave them the powers they wanted.

 

Later that day they all wanted to have a sleepover so all of them went to each others house to get permission from their parents. Cantinflas Mom and Dad said “Ok”, Chilindrinas Mom and Dad also agreed but Aniyahs Mom said “It had to be at their house”.

So they left.

That night they were all excited to know that they did have powers to stop the evil immortals.

But they didn’t know when and where they were going to attack. Meanwhile in Nuevo Leon were the evil immortal El Ponchoco, La chimichaca, and La Aniyaina were. They were making a plan to attack Toluca but first they were going to stop by at the most famous restaurant in Toluca Greek Burritos. So their plan was to first rob the bank then rob the President then the Mayor. Also they added rob 2 houses, and rob a little girl and ask for $1,000 and last but not least to kill 1 person. Wait there also are going shopping for cloth, groceries, and weapons.

 

At Aniyah’s house they are all playing hide in greek indoors. But for some reason they didn’t find Cantinflas they looked in every corner. Until Aniyahs Mom yelled dinner time and we have noodles with chicken fried rice and for dessert we have apple pie and any kind of ice cream. They all finished and Cantinflas chose a waffle cone with a scoop of cookies and cream and another scoop of rainbow sherbet with cherries on the top, And Chilindrina got a waffle cone too but only one scoop of chocolate with caramel on the top, Last but not least Aniyah got a waffle cone with a  scoop of mint chocolate chip with hot fudge on the top with sprinkles and a dinosaur cookie shape. They were stuffed of food. Finally they got tired so they lay down and sleep.

 

That morning they turn on the tv and when they turned on the tv they see right away that the 3 evil  immortals are attacking.

They say “ let’s go and teach them  a big lesson”.

When they arrived the 3 yell “ stop right now”! “Or else” the evil immortals reply “what are you going to do” and started laughing (hahahahahaha). So Cantinflas got annoyed so he launched a green fireball.

“ahhhhhhhhhh” yelled El Ponchoco. “That burned and ‘cause of that I’m going to that little girl over their”.             

 

Cantinflas said is what is going to happen and launched a green fireball to El Ponchoco,

So he went up to the girl and offered her a lollipop the little girl took the lollipop not knowing that lollipop was going to put her to sleep and when it does they were going to take her, but it didn’t take long for her to find out because she took it right away and put in her mouth and fell asleep. They took the little girl and ran away but Chilindrina made lighting strike on the immortals except the little girl then Aniyah made a wave that takes the little girl to her family and before leaving Aniyah told the little girl never listen to strangers. But the immortals wanted to escape so they did a combination of their powers with a blast of overheated green fire, a thunder bolt and water pulse. (Boooooooo mmmmm) it hit the rock and big piece landed on 3 immortals. After that moment the 3 immortals broke a hand and got sent to greek jail for the rest of their life. The 3 evil immortals killers got the key to the city. Also got  $1,000,000,000,000,000. This was the way coal was made.

 

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