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Eva’s speech

Eva’s speech

Good morning honored guests, Staff, parents, Teachers, Mrs.dietz, Mrs.German and 5th grade students of 2015-2016 . It is an honor to be here today.

My name is Eva and today I will be telling you four stories from my life that I have only told a few people in my life. My first story is called Being to four different schools my second story is called meeting and losing friends my third story is called Mr. crazy Fitz and my fourth story is called Back to a new start. I have worked really hard throughout this year and without all of the support that I get from my parents to keep learning I wouldn’t be here today saying this speech.

This is my first story and second story combined Being to four different schools and meeting and losing friends.

My life has been hard throughout the years. I use to live in the apartments but first I lived in a townhouse there was gonna be a hurricane and our basement was gonna flood so before the hurricane we moved to an apartment to be safe so I had to go to gaithersburg elementary school. I started making friends everyone was nice to me I was off to a good start.

When we lived in the apartment for a few months we went back to our old house to repair it and take the carpet to the trash because the basement was flooded so when I went to gaithersburg elementary school I had friends and I lost them because I had to go to Fox Chapel elementary school for kindergarten.

I had no friends just because the way I looked but I didn’t care I kept on trying to make friends until I came along to someone named Leandra we became friends. When I got to first grade I wanted to be friends with a girl she was mean to me but nobody wanted to be her friend so she asked me if I wanted to be her friend and I said yes because she stopped being mean to me and we became best friends.

When I started third grade I did one week at Fox Chapel I told my best friend that I was leaving she was sad she began to cry I hoped to go to middle school with her then I moved again I went to a school named Lake Seneca I was sad again because I started off and I had no friends I started making a couple of friends it was a tough time for me because we had been starting to write essays in third grade and when I moved they expected me to know how to write a lot that is why now I can’t write a little I have to write a lot. Since that day.

Then I came Here to Daly Elementary school and I met a few people named Daniella, Gracie, and Abby Gracie was the first person I became friends with People started to accept me for who I am I have changed throughout the years in fourth grade I didn’t care what people said about me I just let go of myself until I let go too much and started to be a trouble maker I knew I had to make a difference and so I did.

This is my Third story Mr. Crazy Fitz.

I came to fifth Grade I began to be shy again I was meeting new people that I have never met before. Mr. Fitz is the teacher from room 231. Months passed I officially had a nickname Ms giggles I laughed all the time. He bothered us with jokes and I laughed for no reason I told my sister that my teacher was funny and she said she was scared of him I asked her why she said he’s too funny and sarcastic I wish I had a teacher like him in my life and I said too bad for you.

I never had the guts to tell him Mr.crazy fitz I don’t know why maybe because I was shy but now I do this is the nickname that I gave him and probably everyone would call him that if they were in his class he makes everything fun in class he has helped me get through fifth grade he has inspired me to keep on learning till I graduate high school.

My parents also support me he has made me realize that middle school is a big deal you have to be respectful and get good grades to be successful in school I wish all my teachers could do what he does to make learning fun.

This is my fourth story back to a new start.

I am back to a new start I can start a new life without worrying about moving because my parents said they will let me graduate high school and I can keep my friends I am happy now that I don’t have to worry about going to five more schools .

My goal when I grow is to be a doctor I am looking forward to being a doctor when I grow up and my parents inspired me to be that because when they get sick I can take care of them I know it sounds crazy what i’m saying right now but when you grow you can always be what you wanna be and they support me. Never stop believing in yourself.

Thank you everyone for listening and never forget to not let others get in the dreams that you are trying to accomplish.

Dentist career

Dentists have a very important job. Everyone needs to brush their teeth and keep their teeth clean. They can’t brush their teeth unless your teeth are made of chocolate. If their teeth are made of chocolate they will melt in your mouth. Dentist’s diagnose, and treat diseases, injuries, and stuff that include your mouth.

Being a dentist is a very tough job a dentist’s duties are important. They help your teeth they help them when malformations of teeth happen, Examine your teeth, and other dental tissues affecting oral hygiene of people’s teeth oral is taking control of something and hygiene is conditions or practices conducive to maintaining health and preventing diseases.

The payment is important in a job nobody wants to work for free. The average annual salary is $163,240 the average hourly pay is $ 78.48 and the total employment is 93,580. It is important how much money you make in your job because nobody wants to be working in a job that pays you 1 penny a day unless you don’t care. You need enough money that you can maintain yourself and your family.

Education is required to be a dentist you have to have practice and you have to know how to use tools you do not want to kill your patient. There is a small formal education required for these occupations. It can also require graduate school. An example is they could require a master’s degree and some require a Ph. D.D.,M.D.,or J.D. (Law degree).

In conclusion, Dentists will be around forever because nobody wants a robot talking to them or touching their mouth with sharp objects. Robots and machines can not get wet humans will always be needed for something and Dentists will always be around they need clean teeth healthy teeth and a white smile.

The House on Maple Street by Eva

A cold winter night of 1940 at 11402 Maple Street Germantown Md, there was a family. Four people lived in the house.  Katherine bluelies was a strange looking girl with green hair and blue eyes she had a hairy foot and a messed up back with messy hair people called her the grinch . The dad was named Bob, their son was named  Billy. And the daughter was named Frankie.  Katherine was a strange looking girl with green hair and blue eyes she had a hairy foot with messy hair.

Before they lived in a small apartment.  The school that frankie went to was bad. It was bad because she got bullied just because she had no friends the school was called Educationlandia.  

After the bluelies family moved into Maple Street they have been having a good life frankie doesn’t get bullied anymore.   A commercial came on about a rocket that only costs  $ 5.00 and billy was awake he saw the commercial Billy started whining.  He was whining because he wanted the rocket and he thought that his mom was gonna say no.

When billy was still watching the commercial on the rocket. The TV paused for a second. Then billy had his ear open and heard that it works. It makes real noises and it will have to be taken care of like a pet.

The man announces his name his name is Richard.  Richard  announced that a warning with the rocket which was don’t leave the rocket near an open flame.  The second warning was don’t expose the rocket to light or you’ll have to deal with the consequences.

The next day billy woke up as soon as he could to tell his mom if they could go to Walmegarus to buy the rocket that they had seen on Tv the day before.  Billy was patiently waiting for a response from his mother.

Katherine paused to think of an answer she came up with an answer which was yes she asked billy to clean his room before she left to go buy the rocket.  Billy cleaned the room as fast as he could he forgot that he cleaned it last night so he walked in his room for a second then he came out in a second and he walked out in a split second his mom walked into his room and it was spotless.

Billy and his mom got into their red 1940 Chevrolet Convertible it was new and spotless.  Katherine got to Walmegarus they got out of their car.  They had gone into the store and a man was just standing on the roof of Walmegarus he looked like a sketchy guy he had a long beard, black jacket, long hair, black pants, and brown flip flops.

Katherine ignored the man and just walked in the store.  Billy walked to the toy section and found millions of rockets.  They came in every color violet, pink, red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple, aqua marine, teal, and more.  Billy choose one that he really loved he choose the aqua marine rocket. they bought the rocket and it cost $ 2.50 . They gave them a blanket with the rocket so that they keep it away from the sun and light.

Billy brought the rocket home. He looked at it very closely and saw a face carved into it. Billy really didn’t care billy wanted to sleep early so that he can wake up early and play with his rocket for a long temporary of time.

katherine gave billy supper before going to bed. Billy ate homemade cookies with nice and warm milk he ate about 20 cookies because he didn’t want to be hungry during he was sleeping he drank 5 cups of milk. He was very full billy had walked up the stairs.  Billy uncovered his bed and layed down on it the milk got him very sleepy so he fell asleep the second he touched his bed.

Katherine got the rest of her day off she got to sleep more and relax.  Since it was a cold winter day Katherine made hot cocoa. Katherine quickly went to the store to rent a movie that she could watch while Billy  was sleeping.  Bob and frankie were at home the whole time they were watching Home Alone the movie.

Billy woke up for a while and stood looking at the ceiling.  He left his Rocket near the big clear window with sunlight coming in.  He turned his head and stared at the rocket he thought in his head that he was doing something wrong.  Billy stared  into the carved face on the rockets eyes.  The eyes were red and black they had a small glow inside of them.  He stared into the eyes and fell asleep.

Frankie and Bob were in the living room. Just watching Tv they were watching Home Alone with katherine.  Home Alone is Frankie and Bob’s most favorite movie of all time.  Bob loved homemade cookies because Katherine made cookies the size of a big table Bob was upset because Billy ate all the cookies that katherine.  Bob had remembered that frankie had a stash of katherines cookies in her closet.  

Bob had ran up the stairs to the second floor.  Katherine was spying on him across the hall Frankie had forgotten that she had the cookies in her closet for five years already.  Bob might find them with fungus or mold nobody knew what they were going to have if they may also look like cookies but taste bad nobody knew what had happened to the cookies over the years no one will know what they look like until Bob goes up the stairs and see’s them with his own eyes.

Bob got up the stairs and walked into frankies room he looked into the mirror and he was full of sweat as if he was running or worried.  Bob walked over to the old,  black, and big closet it had spiderwebs all over it as if it were from the 1700’s.  Bob had never actually seen the closet but Bob didn’t care he just was scared to open the closet they had been living there for four years and he didn’t know what could be in the closet.

Bob went into the closet and the cookies looked perfectly fine as soon as Bob reached out to get one of the cookies he felt a something go through his body before he could even grab a cookie he felt a large sound go off it sounded like a bomb the noise was BOOM!

Billy was playing with the toy while he was playing with his toy he heard a ruckus going off in his room.  His mom walked into his room to see what was going on.  Katherine walked into Billy’s room and all she saw was fog she couldn’t see anything at all.  After 5 seconds of being in the room scary music came on from a horror story. She was very frightened.  

Katherine went away for a while then she came back she saw that the fog and music was gone.  She found  Billy playing with the rocket the rocket started talking it was telling billy what to do it almost felt like a nightmare.

A few hours later Katherine called Billy down for dinner.  Billy brought his rocket with him he didn’t want to leave his rocket in the cold dark room it was scary at night because when a tornado came Billy would cry at night.
Billy was so scared one day.   Billy woke up from his DREAM.  Billy was so relieved that it was all a dream.  

Clear Spring Park

In my opinion Clear Spring Park is a positive human characteristic of Germantown.  It is positive because children get to play and they have many choices.  They also don’t allow smoking, they provide you with a place to sit, and a safe place to play.

 

Clear Spring Park gives you many choices to play on.  Some of the choices that they give you are swings, seesaws, slides, monkey bars, and park sets the swings come in many sizes for kids, teens, and babies.  There is only one seesaw so people take turns.  The park is a safe place to play and I am confident to go to the park and having fun with my family. Clear Spring Park is also an amazing place because they do not allow smoking so smaller and younger kids don’t get sick.

 

In conclusion, I feel confident to go to Clear Spring Park because I feel safe with all the rules at the park and barely anybody breaks the rules.

Raises In Jobs

In my opinion Business owners should give their employees a raise like McDonald’s, and they should get a raise so that they can afford things like healthcare, food, and transportation.

 

People in McDonald’s should get a raise because they are getting paid really low except for the managers cashiers get paid 8.41 and a shift manager gets paid 10.15 and a cook gets paid 8.13 and managers, cooks, and cashiers should all get paid equally and a large amount like the managers or more.

 

Raises in jobs are important because people need to pay for health care.  Health care is important in people’s lives and health care is also expensive and you need money to pay for health care which includes jobs.  Health care that is efficient is expensive and most people want good services.  Health care will help people with knowing if they have something wrong with them or if they identify anyone with diseases.

 

Food food is important for everyone because if you don’t eat food you will starve to death.  Raises are important for food because most food is expensive and you need money for food. When you eat a balanced diet, your body obtains the fuel and nutrients it needs to do various bodily tasks.  For example, your body needs minerals to make hormones, and to build bones and improve your heartbeat.

 

Everybody needs transportation.  Transportation is important you need it to get from one place to another.  Transportation in needed all over the world.   

You need to get a raise in your job because if you don’t have enough money to buy a good car then you will buy a bad car that doesn’t work.  If you have a car that doesn’t work you will be late to work or other special places and your car won’t function.

 

In conclusion, people should get raises in their jobs so that they can afford objects like, food, utilities, cars,and more that is why everyone needs a raise.

 

If My Parents Didn’t Pick Me Up From School

                        What would you do if your parents forgot to pick you up after school?
If my parents forgot to pick me up from school. I would tell my sister to come pick me up and take me places because she is fun and she likes going to places. I would tell her to take me to Walmart so that I can buy whatever I want like games accessories for my home and my room.  I would go to the mall to buy clothes and I would buy stuffed animal emoji’s.  I would take my sister to dinner because she is always hungry because she does not eat at school.  I would get all those accessories because they would help me in life the games would help me when i’m bored.  Decorations for my house and room would help me make our house look fantastic.Screenshot 2016-01-14 at 2.02.52 PMScreenshot 2016-01-14 at 2.02.01 PMScreenshot 2016-01-14 at 2.00.32 PMScreenshot 2016-01-14 at 1.58.51 PM

My Winter Break

 

It was the first day of winter break and Eva had just woken up from a nice nap it was Christmas eve December 24, 2015.  Eva had to get ready for Christmas eve that she was going to spend the day at her house with her family.  She had to get dressed and go buy a few things for the day.  Eva was going to be very slow as a turtle by the end of the day.

 

Eva had gotten dressed to go out to the lake forest mall to buy chicken with her family Her sister Sonia also, needed to go buy presents so everyone was separated.  It was very hot in the mall that Eva was as sweaty as a gym coach.   Eva and her mom both went to a perfume shop and bought her father a perfume for Christmas.  Eva’s dad did not know that they went to go buy him a perfume because Eva’s dad was at work.

 

After the mall Eva, Alejandro her brother, Her mom, and her sister Sonia went home.  When Eva opened The door to her house both of her female puppies raced to the door and licked slobber all over Eva’s face they were so excited to see her Nala and Lova the two dogs were not excited to see the others because when Alejandro, Sonia, And Eva’s Mom went to pet Nala and Lova the ran under the table.

 

It was already afternoon when people started to arrive at Eva’s house.  Before anyone arrived which was before the mall Eva and her family cleaned the house they cleaned the table, Cleaned the kitchen, passed vacuum,  fixed the living room, Everyone cleaned their rooms, and washed laundry.  The house looked spotless and there was so much room.

 

It was afternoon about at 5 in the afternoon Eva’s brother named hose brought a cake just o have something sweet for Christmas then he left.  A few moments later his girlfriend walked in with her two kids her name is Jocelyn and her first kid is a girl and her name is Arlene her second baby is a boy and his name is Christopher.  Jocelyn came into the house to wrap gifts.

 

Eva was wearing a red dress her mom was wearing a blue dress and her sister Sonia was wearing a white dress.  Alejandro brought up that them all together looked like the the american flag of the united states.  Jocelyn left to go buy a few more presents and she left her children at Eva’s house because she had to go buy more presents.

 

Eva’s dad got home from work and when he got home he ordered pizza.  He ordered one box of pizza with pepperoni and stuffed crust he ordered another pizza with chicken and all of the pizzas had stuffed crust so he ordered one last one which had tomato’s  black olives and green pepper.

 

At eight everyone had arrived to Eva’s house Alex her other brother brought Chinese food and Eva’s other brother brought more pizza and the also all brought gifts.  The Christmas tree was over flowing with gifts some were also ripped.

 

Three hours passed and it was eleven and Eva and Everyone else were still partying hard.  Everyone was waiting for the clock to strike midnight to open presents.  Fifty nine minutes passed and everyone was counting down and it was midnight everyone ran to the tree and ripped their presents Eva was very excited for what she got she got a scrap book that she could make she got a scarf a shirt and a wallet and perfume.

 

Eva and her family love that day and they still do to this day.   They all had a good time spending time together.  Eva and everyone was grateful for what they received for Christmas.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Simile:

Eva was going to be very slow as a turtle by the end of the day.

Eva was as sweaty as a gym coach.

 

Metaphor:

I was a rock on a bed.

 

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