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people trees

 There was a  walking  it started  to get up  from the ground and the tree 
started. To fight it and then everyone started to fight one big wooden tree. 
Everyone started to fight everyone in the world and my family Went. 
To  Rio  and the trees started to get a long and we all had a party.  
We all went hang gliding  and all of us went petting zoo and every one got a 
pet. And all of us went  to the ​amazon​ is  real wild they got ​mosquitoes 
that suck your blood like a straw. And snakes that can swallow  you hole. 
And flesh eating ​piranhas​ eat meat there cool  animals and creatures. 
 Avery one got bit by a ​puma​ and they ran like  girls  and they never went 
back again. And they got a lot of ​gold ​we went to the beach the trees had 
fun and we did not we went everywhere to the park beach. 
We all had lots and lots of fun we want to the vet and we saw  a lot of 
parakeets and we saw to species. And we and we went back to america we 
all went back home. I got home and i played my games i stayed in my 
house night after night day after day playing games. I go back to Rio to get 
my family and friends we all went to Walmart.  I got crabs and a lot of food  
 and then i went to bed.  


The Adventures of Fitz and Leandra

Our first writing project is an original adventure story. I enjoy writing my own essays as my kids are writing.  It helps me model the lesson and the focus for the day.  This is my adventure story for this year.  I kept the ending of my story off of my graphic organizer so it would be a surprise for them.

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Back in 2015 there were 2 classmates, Fitz and Leandra.  They were in the 5th grade together at Daly Elementary.  They both loved adventure and had dreams of being rich!

One day at recess a strangely dressed man appeared on the slide.  He passed Leandra a map and walked away.  He was definitely a strange dude. Leandra called Fitz over and they looked at it together out of site from their classmates and teacher, Ms. Gracie.

Fitz immediately realized that it was a treasure map and that the treasure was hidden deep in the Amazon rainforest. Leandra and Fitz decided to leave school (without permission) and head to Brazil.

Since Fitz and Leandra left home so quickly they realized they weren’t ready for the climate of Brazil.  The weather was hot and super muggy.  They started to sweat immediately.  Leandra was fussing already and they had only been in the country for three and half minutes.  Their first stop was an outdoors store where they would buy the correct clothing.  They both picked out tan “adventurer” outfits.  Leandra picked out a funny looking hat that had a fan built in to it and a net that covered her face to keep the bugs away.  Apparently she and bugs don’t get along.  Fitz picked out a less dorky version of the same hat.

Now that they are dressed correctly they needed to find a guide.  Leandra was good with maps, but Fitz would prefer to just bush whack his way through the jungle with his machete.  Leandra asked about finding a guide at the clothing store and they were on their way to meet Cleatus their guide.

When they walked up to Cleatus they were a little shocked.  He was 8 feet tall and weighed about 450 pounds.  Needless to say, dude was big and was going to really help cutting through the jungle.  Plus, he would scare the biggest predators away just by looking at them.

Leandra and Fitz and their new guide Cleatus came up with a plan.  They were going to head into the jungle immediately.  Since Leandra hates bugs, they didn’t want to stay overnight. They rushed into the jungle after quickly looking at their map. Cleatus led the way.  He cleared a trail just by pushing the trees that were in his way to the ground.  Fitz came behind him with the machete to clear the smaller branches away from the new trail.  Leandra, meanwhile, just walked and looked around and didn’t have to do any work.

Leandra stopped the group because she believed they were getting closer to the “X” on the map.  The group looked around and suddenly Leandra noticed a dark spot in the jungle about 200 yards away.  Fitz and Leandra knew that it was a cave and also knew that Cleatus needed to go first in case there were any predators around that were hungry for kids from Maryland.

As they approached the cave entrance they started to get really nervous.  The cave was very dark and looked wet and slippery from the outside.  Cleatus lit a torch made out of palm fronds and led the way.  After just a few steps into the cave they knew this was where they were going to become rich!

After about 1 hour of exploring the cave, Leandra found a long narrow passage in the rock.  She had to crawl on all fours to get through the passage.  She yelled louder than we ever thought she could.  Fitz crawled through quickly but poor Cleatus wouldn’t fit in the passage.  He sat outside the passage and cried a little.  

Once Fitz made it to Leandra he found her standing next to a wooden box that looked like it came from a pirate movie.  Maybe it was Jack Sparrow’s box…. I doubt it.  

This was the moment that they had risked getting expelled from school for.  Leandra unlocked the lock with a pin from her hair and slowly opened the box.  

Fitz’s jaw dropped to the floor.  Leandra stood there shocked and silently.  In front was millions of dollars of Incan gold.  They were rich, filthy rich!  They swear they heard the stereotypical angel’s “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”.

Now, how do they get their millions home without losing it or losing their lives?  It took 3 hours to pass the money through the narrow passage.  It was a good thing that Cleatus was a strong dude.  He carried most of the gold back through the jungle for Fitz and Leandra.  

The goal was to get back safely, but the jungle was a dangerous place.  They had seen some shadows that were made by some large predators on their way to the cave. The group came to a stop and the end of a calm river.  The river’s surface was covered with lily pads.  The lily pads prevented them from being able to see the bottom.  They had no idea what was lurking beneath the surface.  

Cleatus went first, of course, and made it to the other side of the river.  Fitz went second and also made it across the river.  So far, most of the gold was still safe.  

Fitz and Cleatus turned to watch Leandra cross.  She was freaking out big time.  She took a couple of worried steps into the river. She was starting to get more comfortable until she saw a swirl of water next to her leg.  Suddenly, Leandra was nowhere to be seen.

Fitz and Cleatus stood on the shore stunned.  Then they saw that tell tale markings on an Anaconda.  They knew that Leandra was gone.  And even worse, the gold she was carrying was also gone.

Fitz and Cleatus decided to carry on the mission and return to city where they started.  Neither one of them talked while walking back.  They were still in shock that Leandra was gone.  

Once the guys made it back they counted the treasure.  They carried back approximately $47.5 million dollars of gold back to where they started. Because Cleatus carried most of the treasure and did most of the bush whacking, Fitz gave him $5 million in gold.  Cleatus was very happy and wouldn’t stop thanking Fitz.  

Fitz was ready to return to Daly Elementary to share his story and to let Leandra’s family know about her demise.  He also knew that he was going to be in big trouble for skipping school.  He boarded the plane sitting on the runway bound for Maryland.  He found a seat next to the window so he could look at the jungle one last time.  

The plane taxied down the runway and lifted off into the sky.  Once the plane was in the air the cabin crew came around to serve drinks.  The stewardess asked the passenger behind Fitz what she would like to drink.  She asked politely for a Coke.  Suddenly Fitz stood up on his chair and turned around.  He was amazed to see Leandra sitting behind smiling.  

He asked her how she made it out alive.  She said that Anacondas are apparently allergic to gold.  As soon as she and the gold she was carrying made into the snake’s stomach it threw them up.  She was slimy and a little disgusted, but she was alive.  She said the snake died immediately and pointed to her shoes.  Fitz looked down and noticed that she had on different shoes than the ones she purchased at the store.  She said they were made out of Anaconda skin.

They flew home, got suspended for 10 days, grounded for 3 months, and had their passports destroyed.  However, they were rich.  Of course Fitz divided the gold evenly and they lived happily ever after!


The Adventures Of Nim

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Nim lives on an island. She loves to read books written by her favorite author Alex Rover. All she has is her animal friends to a company her. Her dreams are to meet her favorite author Alex Rover live.


Nim was reading a book. Alex Rover is on a camel in Egypt then out of nowhere these mysterious guys in a black cloak attacked him Alex Rover. Alex Rover never has fear so he did a backflip off his camel and he fighted back. Dad came in and nim closed her book and she turned off her lamp and went to sleep.

Next day nim was playing with her animal friends and her dad was chatting on the computer with nim’s favorite author and nim didn’t know. That same day in the afternoon nim’s dad left her in charge of the house which he has never done before. So the dad was leaving because he needed to do some science work. Dad yelled,’’Now parties.’’Well you know how kids are. She had a party and celebrated with her animal friends. Which are a ,lizard , a snake , and last but not least a chameleon and those are very rare.

Next morning Nim was waiting outside laying down on the seashore for her dad. One hour past and Nim still waiting but then Nim got very upset because her dad didn’t come back!!!! Nim didn’t know what to do but then this loud noise came out of nowhere,’’gruuuuumble’’. And that noise wasn’t no ordinary sound it was the sound of THUNDER!!!!!!! So Nim quickly gathered her animal friends and ran as fast as she could to her house. And there she stayed gazing at her window by herself in the night well not completely by herself cause she’s got her animal friends with her so she’s not completely alone.


The next day Nim woke up and changed into her clothes as fast as a cheetah. Then she climbed out of her house and climbed up a tree and she thought she saw a tree and but she really didn’t know what it was because she was like 24 feet away. So she ran to the nearest tree that’s close to the beach. So then she saw that it was a ginormous pirate ship and on the side it said The Buccaneers Nim nervously in shock with her mouth open for about 5 seconds she went running to her house.


Nim was curious of why The Buccaneers came. Nim is upset because of her mom’s past. So her mom was just playing in the water when this big ginormous ship came towards her she didn’t see so she got crushed!!!!!! Just kidding she almost got crushed but because she can swim under water she was perfectly fine. Until….. a big fat maybe 20 feet wide whale came and then chomp chomp CHOMP!!! The whale ate her!


So at she was at her house she was thinking of a plan to get The Buccaneers away but what she thought wasn’t exactly what she thought it was you’ll find out anyways she finally finished her traps and her massive plan. So her massive plan was to climb a volcano on her island and make it erupt so her other traps were pretty simple she just needs to tie a net to some trees and you know whoever tries to enter the forest they’ll get trapped.


Her other trap was that she would tie nets to trees and put snakes on them and sling shot them in the air where the target was the beach. Well here’s the thing Nim didn’t know about on the boat that almost crushed her mom it said Buccaneers but she didn’t know it was just a guide that pretends to be a pirate and be very funny. And so Nm was kind of mad because you know she didn’t know it was just a guide so while she was sling shoting snakes the people on the beach were screaming and yelling that there were snakes on their heads.


Nim couldn’t stop laughing but she also couldn’t let her laughter go cause she didn’t want to be heard. Then the people started to panic because there were snakes everywhere nim stopped laughing and focused on her plan.


’’Now I can finally get The Buccaneers away’’.She cried out loud to herself.


She uttered happily then nim was going on this dirty path to the volcano. But then this chubby boy named nick that was wearing a tuxedo was following her but then nim felt like someone was watching her so she looked back so he hid behind a tree and nim saw nothing so she kept climbing the volcano so then she reached the top and she saw the boulder she was supposed to use that she left ready so she pushed the boulder towards the center of the volcano…..


Then suddenly everything started to shake and nim almost fell but thank god she didn’t. But then out of nowhere another boulder came towards nim and nim fell off the volcano and she’s lucky the boulder didn’t fall on her but her knee got badly injured and she was crying to the death she tried to run home as fast as she could even if her knee hurt so she finally reached her house.


So then she got a lot of paper and put water on the paper and wiped on her knee let me tell you it wasn’t easy to wipe all the blood away so then she got a lot of bandages and put them on her knee and then she got a cast thingy and put it on her knee then she tried to walk and then when she got used to it so she ran to the volcano and nick came from behind the tree he was hiding told nim that if she was the one who made the volcano erupt.


Then nim replied,’’Yes.


and nick in surprise blabbed out loud,’’Are you CRAZY’’.


Nim didn’t care but nick asked where her family was and nim replied she didn’t have one and that her dad never returned back from doing his science work so nick was in shock and said,


’’So you’re alone and you live here’’. nick anxiously uttered.

Nim replied,’’Yes’’.


Then nim asked if he was part of the buccaneer ship and he said yes and nim was scared of nick and she backed up a little bit after words nick said it’s just a local guide ship and then suddenly nick heard his parents calling him and he had to go then he left and  nim ran to her house. On the other hand nick was telling his mom that he met a girl that lives on the island.


Nick’s mom didn’t believe him she thought it was one of his stories again so then nick’s dad dragged him to the ship and they left.

So then nim went home and saw that Alex Rover which is actually Alexandra Rover sent her a message on the computer and it said,


’’Nim who are you’’.

So nim replied, ’’I’m 11 years old and I got hurt by climbing on a volcano’’.


Alexandra was speechless in shock so she went to the airport at once. So then she got to the island and nim saw her and she was surprised because she thought she was a man but she didn’t care on the other hand her dad was still alive and his ship had a lot of water.


Then a goose came with the dad’s tools and the dad in his head said,


’’Is this one of nim’s friends’’?


But then he started rebuilding the holes on his ship and finally he finished so he set sailed to the island. Then nim was happy she saw her dad and she ran up to him and gave him a big hug and then nim showed her dad Alexandra Rover and they both shook hands and they both said nice to meet you. Next day all 3 of them were walking on the beach holding hands and now Alexandra is part of nim’s family now:)

The Forest

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It was 2017 and Katy, Andrew, Jack, and Emma were on a train to Sydney. The four of them, all 16 years old, are circus performers. They perform in the Cirque de Soleil  that is known throughout Australia. They had been best friends since kindergarten, and had planned to stay that way.

“Why does it feel like the train is rocking side to side?” Emma announced.

“I don’t know,” Jack replied.

“But we better get back to our own cars.”

“I agree,” Katy shivered, “I feel very scared.”

The train started moving more violently as soon as they got to their own car. Katy and Emma started crying hard, and Andrew and Jack began to become scared.

Then it happened, the train tracks broke, the cars separated and each car  went in different directions. All you could hear was screaming and things crashing into each other. It was pandemonium, they didn’t think they would make it out alive. Everybody doubted everything, but they shouldn’t have doubted it this time. It was miraculous, the train cars were a wreck yet they each only came out with a scratch. They were all alone in the forest with no way of getting home.

As Jack was wandering in the forest hungry and delusional he saw an old man walking through the forest, he was wearing a raggy brown cape and had a beard so long it touched the ground.  Wondering if what he was seeing is real, rubbed his eyeballs until it was red.

“ There is a place with endless food and water, to get there you must follow my directions.” The old man whispered,

“Follow the forest path to a stream, cross the stream and when you see the eagle of Azarath, you will turn right. Your friends will be there waiting for you.”

As Emma was walking to the mysterious place the strange old man told her to go to, she heard a little boy crying from a far distance. As confused as she was to why he is in the forest alone, ran to him as fast as she could to see if he was hurt. Tears of joy ran down her cheeks when she saw his face.

Katy had been prepared for this her whole life, her dad always used to do practice drills in case something like this happened. She found wild berries to eat in case she got hungry. she built a campfire and ate fish for dinner. She was happy that she was so close to finding her friends, and possibly finding a way home.

Jack had seen the  eagle of Azarath hours ago, but felt like he was even farther to reaching his destination. Then he saw it, food as far as the eye could see, sweet water from a lake that sparkles in the sunlight. He didn’t see Emma, Katy, or Andrew, he was saddened to see that his friends weren’t there.

“ Well, there won’t be any leftovers for them!” Jack shouted as he dove into a pile of bananas.

 “Andrew is that really you?” Emma asked as she picked him up from the ground.

“Yeah,” he sniffled.

“It is.” He looked up to see her, but she was gone.

“Come on!” she shouted.

“I just saw the eagle of Azarath!”

“JACK!! EMMA!! ANDREW!!” Katy screamed,


“Oh my gosh!” Katy shouted “I miss you guys so much!”

“Yeah yeah,” Jack muttered,

“Now hurry up and eat.”

“Today we’re going home.”

“Remembered that old man who told us to come here?” Jack informed them.

“Well I stole a map from him.”

“Way to go Jack!” Emma exclaimed.

“Let’s start packing, we’re heading home today.”

“WOOHOO!!” The gang shouted.

They were halfway home when they encountered the deadly animal.

“AAAAHHHHH!!!” Emma screamed.

She was face to face with a tiger, she tried to run but the tiger caught her leg. She screamed with agony as the tiger was crushing her bones. It growled at the frightened teenagers then ran away. Luckily Katy was also prepared for this, and bandaged up Emma’s broken leg. She built a wagon out of wood and pushed her through the forest since she clearly couldn’t walk.

“We’re home!” Andrew exclaimed,

“We’re finally home!”

“We have to get Emma to the hospital!” Katy announced, She’s barely even breathing!”

“What are we waiting for then?” Jack asked,

“Let’s go!”

                                                    TWO WEEKS LATER

“She didn’t make it?” Katy sobbed?

“No…” Jack muttered,

“She didn’t.”

“Emma was barely alive when she went to the hospital, the hospital couldn’t have saved her, they didn’t have the right medicine and her leg was infected for too long.”

“Oh,” Katy whispered.

                ONE YEAR LATER

Every year the gang comes together to remember the year of Emma’s death, and to also remember the time they spent in the forest. They quit the circus but still remain friends.


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It was 2005 and i was on a cruise with my family, i was with my brother Brad, my dad Jim, my mom Mary and i Alex. The cruise was going to be a week long.

BANG!!! I dropped my suitcase in my room it was night time the boat was as quiet as a mouse, i was soo exhausted from the long ride to the cruise ship, i jumped into the bed and i fell asleep.

The next morning i woke up from the sunlight and the sound of singing birds.It was the first day of the cruise, my family had already woken up so i went to the top of the boat, there was a pool, my family was sitting in chairs eating breakfast,  i saw a extra plate and i guessed it was mine so i went to sit down at the table.

I finished eating about fifteen minutes later, my family was talking so i went to my room and got my bathing shorts and went to the pool, a bunch of people had left since i started eating so i jumped into the pool, i was swimming for ten minutes then my family joined me in the pool, we were swimming for about an hour and then we got tired so went back to our room and i was still really tired so i went back to sleep.

I woke up, “ALEX!!” “LUNCH TIME”  my mom was calling me, I looked at the clock, realizing it was one o’clock i went out of my room i saw my mom she said it was lunchtime,I went to eat i was eating chicken when the boat started tilting everyone got scared but the captain said to calm down after a few minutes it stopped tilting everyone calmed down after lunch it was three o’clock we went to the side of the boat and looked at the water the the boat started tilting again we got scared so we went back to our room we stayed there for an hour watching tv and then we went out again.

We went to the captain to ask him what was happening he said that it had never happened and that they were gonna call another cruise ship to get us on that one so he told us not to worry about it and just enjoy the cruise so we got bored and went to the pool again me and my brother Brad were racing to see could swim faster he won the race.

We had fun at the pool so my dad called us to go back to our room but my brother brad said he didn’t want to leave so he stayed but I left my dad asked where Brad was and i told him he didn’t want to come but my dad told me to go get him so I went to get him he finally decided to come so we went to our room my dad said to start packing our things up to go on the other cruise ship so we all started packing things up then we ate dinner and went to sleep my.

My dad woke me up and told me the other cruise ship was coming in six hours so i stayed awake about thirty minutes later I heard yelling so I went to see what was happening and overnight water had gotten in from an open window  so the ship was starting to sink I went to and saw that my family had falling back to sleep i tried to wake them up but they were too tired to get up so i left i saw that they were putting people on lifeboats.

They told me to get on a lifeboat i said that my family was still on the boat they told me that they would get my family but the the boat the boat started leaning they put me in the water and the boat was sinking faster i started crying i yelled ’’Brad!!’’ ’’Mom!!’’ ’’Dad?’’ the boat had sunk, and my family had died.

I was alone on a lifeboat in the middle of the sea there was food on the lifeboat and there was a paddle on the lifeboat so i grabbed it and started paddling after a while of paddling I saw shark fins and i got scared so i ducked into my boat i went back up and they were gone but the shark jumped out of the water i hit it with my paddle and it went back in the water.

I started getting hungry so i went to see what kind of food i had, there was canned peaches, bags of bread and water. Then i fell asleep, when i woke up i was in a house i thought it was a dream but then i saw a person and i asked them where i was they said they said New York.

I had survived.

Toad and The Evil Unlucky Boots

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In the year 5015…there was a quartz kingdom (far, far, far away from where you live)called “The Mushroom Kingdom”. There was a princess named Peach. Peach is  wears Pink long dress with puffy short sleeves. She also wears a gold crown. Peach liked  to do nice stuff to the world, especially the fruit peaches. One time, she bought diamond boots which bring good luck to her. When she putted on the boots, something good happens to her. “Hmm… I should put these on…if no good luck happens, I just wasted 1,000 gold coins!” muttered peach as she putted on the boots, at first nothing happened, but then something shiny sparkled: It was a gold necklace that she’d lost when she was 12. “Wow, these are good luck boots! I just found my necklace.” Cheered Peach, quietly.

At night, A thief came into Peach’s room. “Well, well, well, isn’t this the lucky boots?” Whispered the thief. “I’ll be taking these and give you the Unlucky golden boots…” In rapid fire, The thief escaped with the lucky boots… He’ll be lucky…for now…

When Peach woke up, She noticed that the boots are gold instead of diamond. “Gold boots? Are they lucky?” asked Peach. But once she putted them on…she slipped… down the stairs..”Nope…NOT LUCKY!” yelled Peach. Peach took of the boots and went back upstairs. “I guess I should leave this alone until I find my diamond boots.” Sighed Peach as she placed her golden boots and locked it in a metal treasure chest (,This chest is used for fun loving memories). “Whoever that thief was…I’M GONNA WHACK HIM WITH MY UMBRELLA!” Peach thought.

Toad was working on something that was suppose to be for Peach. No one didn’t know what it was…not even Peach!” ‘What does the princess like??? Peaches..? Gold..? What does she even like???’ He thought while making the wing of…something?(Like I would really spoil it for you? >=D )He lived in a Cellar under the castle…Well, you know, he caused tons of chaos during…well…now? One week ago he burned down the whole castle!…no wait, 1 eighth of the castle was destroyed! One month ago, he got fire power and started burning torches…by the time he burned 100,000 torches, he accidently setted the lilypad lifesaver on fire!! There’s 999,998 more to list…but I can’t list them all!

Then…came the meeting. Everyone was there…THE WHOLE MUSHROOM KINGDOM was there.

“Well…I bought these nice diamond boots after the accident Toad caused…” aforementioned Peach.

“But I’m sorry! I’m really, really, really, really, sorry!” Bawled Toad.

“Meh. It’s okay.” replied Peach just to calm down Toad “Back to where I was…I had diamond boots…They cost 1,000 gold coins…and they’re very lucky…Without those boots…I’ll be kidnapped…until either the kidnapper dies or I die. Whichever comes First…”

“No wonder why she had those boots…” Thought Toad.

“I’d also found a trail of footprints with a hole on both…That can’t be us…or Daisy’s kingdom…”.No body on both kingdoms combined have shoes with holes on both of them. But yet who has holes on both shoes?…That’s gross!

“Mind if we can give the unlucky boots to Toad?” Asked Peenub budder (,I made him up :D).

“NO.” barked Peach. She’ll know what will happen: He will fall which leads to the dynamite room…and the castle blows up…THE END for the “POPULAR MARIO GAMES”.

“For now this will be the end of the meeting. We’re still looking for more people to help find these boots, or I will be kidnapped for the rest of my life.” Sighed Peach.

“Now what should we do? I can’t let any bad guy take those boots!” muttered Toadette.

Toadette had a nice pink dress and works for both Princess Peach and Daisy.(I don’t know who she works for but I think Daisy.) “Toad, What should we do to get the boots back?” asked Toadette.

“I don’t know, but I think we should go and investigate…” Sighed Toad. “Are you sure?” Asked Toadette.

They been thinking for hours! Until Peach found out the bad guys name: LILO! “Um Peach? Did you figure out who is the bad guy?” asked Toad, softly (soft enough that it was almost a whisper!).

“Yes…and I know you are going to laugh…”answered Peach. “His name is Lilo…”

“Lilo?” Toad giggled.

Then Toad and Toadette laughed. “I knew it…”Muttered Peach.

“Lilo sounds more like dumbo!” hollered Toad.

“Toad stop laughing! I know it’s funny, but let me read the rest of the information!” Ordered Peach.

“Okay.” Promised Toad.

“Thank you. Now, it says that Lilo steals rare things…WOW. he even stole from bowser…” Explained Peach.

“WUT( {I mean,} What?)?! FROM BOWSER? Well, he deserved it anyways” muttered Toad.

“Nobody knows where he is…it says a cave…but I think it’s at…The jungle?” Peach confessed.

“Which Jungle???” Questioned Toad, wrapping himself with 10 blankets.

“Nobody knows…” shivered Peach.

“We’ll find it!” Answered Toadette happily.

“Wait, what?” said Toad quietly (but loud enough so Toadette can hear him).

“We’ll find the boots!” Said Toadette, who was really excited!

“Okay. But we have to take the unlucky boots.”

replied Toad.

“Why???” asked Toadette.

“To return it to Lilo. So he’ll be unlucky again.” explained Toad.

“Oh. Ok!” Said Toadette with excitement!

Their quest to the jungle started good, but while they’re in there…IT’S A DISASTER!!! So what happened to them?(Do you really want me to list the injuries thanks to those unlucky boots? If no, Skip it.) I’ll list the injuries.

  1. Scars. EVERYWHERE. Mostly their arms
  2. Knife cuts. By accident…
  3. There is 98 more, but i’m not wasting our time on this “100 injuries” list...

“YOU STUPID BOOTS!!!” Toad thought. “I’d almost died! Please don’t give me something worse…”.Then, Toad took off the boots.

“I wonder what will happen…” Toad whispered to himself. “Where’s Toadette?”.But he realized that Toadette wasn’t with him.

Since he took off the boots, he saw a sword. And Toadette, trying to take the sword off.

“Toadette? What are you doing?” asked Toad.

“Well…I found this sword sparkling  on my face while you were K.O.(Knocked Out)” Explained Toadette.”Mind if you help me???” Asked Toadette softly.

”Fine…But If I get the sword out, you owe me 10 gold coins.” Demanded Toad. three seconds later…Toad took out the sword. Literally.

“You owe me 10 gold coins.” Insisted Toad.

“Okay…” Groaned Toadette.

So anyways…The sword Toad found was called The sword of Lilies…or (THE RICDICULOUS NAME): Lilybong. yup, The most dumbest name made it on this story…How pathetic…Then they went outside the cave.

”So…Now what?” asked Toadette.

”We should get the boots…But don’t put the on! Remember?” Ordered Toad.

“Oh yeah…I’m just going to carry them. “Replied Toadette.

Then they walked to somewhere where I call it Lilo’s Cave. “Wow. We just found it.” Said Toadette.

Then they walked inside the not-so hidden cave…

“So…did you find gold coins for me?” Demanded Lilo, Who was wearing a thief outfit.

“I looked everywhere, sir. There wasn’t a gold coin in sight.” said his henchmen, with a scared look on his face.

“WHY YOU–!!!” Screamed Lilo. The henchmen died…killed right in front of his best friend…who was evil.

“There it is…the diamond boots…” Whispered Toad, who was under the table with Toadette.

“If we can just get the diamond boots and paint the gold boots blue…then we can get outta here!” peeped Toadette.

“Foolish henchman. You could have just looked in the mushroom kingdom.

“Yeah, right” scoffed Toad silently.

Luckily, Lilo didn’t know Toad and Toadette was here…also, he didn’t listened to Toad. “Now, where was I…oh right! Putting on these diamond boots and take over the world!” screeched Lilo.

Then Lilo did an evil laugh “Mwahahahaha!” laughed Lilo (,Boo).

“Boo! Your evil laugh sucks!” yelled a mysterious voice, no wait…it was Toadette.

“Yeah! You sound like a Pig!” snapped another voice…which was Toad’s voice.

Then they laughed until they cried. “Who on earth was that? Well, whoever said that, is going to get beaten up…BIG TIME!” Screamed Lilo.

He grabbed the sword that he used to kill the henchmen. “Come out, Come out wherever you are…” Said Lilo in a scary tone.

Lilo didn’t who who said that his evil laughter sucks until he got cut by the sword of lilies. “Huh? What’s this? A cut…?” thought Lilo. “Wait a second…” Questioned Lilo.

Toad and Toadette were busted! Lilo looked under the table and found the two MPs, holding the lilies sword in front of Lilo. “Well, well, well…It was you two all along! You worked for Peach!” Insisted Lilo, who was about to stab Toad.

“Well…You  shouldn’t kill me. If you do, Everything that you want to have will disappear and will appear to Peach’s castle.” Warned Toad that Lilo shouldn’t kill him.

“Like I would not kill him! Say goodbye, stupid fat mushroom boy…” thought Lilo as he raised his sword to cut Toad in half.

“NO!”  screamed Toadette.


Toad dodged his attack. “You can’t even kill me!” hollered Toad as he bolted around. Note to you fast people: Toad is very fast. By the time you take one step, he’s at the finish line.

“But I had lucky boots!” Yelled Lilo as he swing his sword and missing. ALL THE TIME! The reason?  Toad had the lucky boots! He painted the lucky boots gold so it looked unlucky.

“YOU HAVE UNLUCKY BOOTS!!! HOW ARE YOU DODGING MY ATTACKS?!?!” Screamed Lilo at the top of his lungs!

THAT’S IT!!! You lead me no choice…” Warned Lilo. He stormed to the actually-they-are-unlucky boots and putted them on.

“This time…You will die, Fatty!!!” Screeched Lilo.

“Yeah ri–Wait…did you just called me Fatty?!” yelled Toad. Toad grabbed phat-lily sword and stabbed Lilo by the chest. Lilo collapsed backward and fell to a hole called the brutal death hole. A piece of red gas popped out.

”That’s what you get…for calling me fatty, Lilo!” Yelled Toad.

“VICTORY IS MINE!!!” Thought Toad.

“Toad! I’m glad you’re ok!” Cheered Toadette as she ranned to Toad. Just like I said, She’s fast too.

Then, the lily sword and the unlucky gold boots popped out from the brutal death hole.

“We should melt these gold boots. and repaint these diamond boots back to diamond blue.” Toad said to Toadette. “By the way, we need to get out of here…”

By the time Toad and Toadette came back to the castle. They placed the lucky boots to where the chest is, smelted the gold boots into gold coins, threw away the unlucky charm, and they were rich!

“By the way, you owe me 10 gold coins” ordered Toad.

“Fine…” Muttered Toadette and gave Toad the 10 gold coins she had promised.

Peach was never kidnapped again, which was good. and the thing Toad made for Peach was a floating fire flower. But she wasn’t lucky enough that she didn’t get to whack Lilo with her pink umbrella, Because he was dead! And Lilo was never heard from again!


Hack Life!

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In 2045 there was a man named Derek enjoying his life living in a house with a job until one day when he tried to check his bank account and it didn’t work .After sending a complaint to the bank he saw that he lost all his information. At first he didn’t know what happened but then he saw that  he was hacked.

“At least I still have my passport” Derek sighed,”So this guy is in Africa huh? Well i’ll need to take a plane.”           

After 7 days he got a ticket to Africa and got on the plane. In the middle of the flight he saw someone get up he was wearing a dark cloak with sleeves then he said some random speech ending with “now we shall take out the trash’’ then a window broke and the plane started tilting.


Everyone started yelling but for some reason no one came to stop this.  

“Why is nobody here?’’

But out of nowhere a fighter jet came.

“We are saved” a man yelled.


Then the speakers came on “stay on the plane do not go to the other plane”


But then everyone protested and started getting out, but Derek got  different idea.

“i’m not gonna do either, infact i can just glide to my stop”


Apparently other people had the idea. Luckily Derek got the last one but that’s when a guy with spiky golden hair a black sleek jacket and blue pants came and said “hi um mate your not leaving” “uh yes i am ser” Derek replied “3-2-1” then another guy wearing a white skull mask with the same shirt, tackled Derek of “are you insane” Derek screamed while falling with the skull guy “call me psycho and yes. Yes i am!”


Psycho kept preventing Derek from pulling the parachute “how do you plan on surviving the fall water won’t save you or are you that stupid” “water alone won’t but with your help it will. I’ve done this a million times” psycho said weirdly. they kept fighting until Derek kicked the psycho and pulled the parachute.

“ i-did-it…” well it turns out psycho grabbed Derek’s legs then after awhile the psycho let go.

“I let go cause i’ll survive the fall. like i said done this a million times”

   It wasn’t til after awhile that Derek landed in a train track. He then decided that he would hide in a train since it was night and he wasn’t a survivalist so he waited. when he saw one headed his way he decided to make the track switch that way he could get on. Apparently it was holding hay straw and other foods animals eat.

The next day…

Derek woke up to the sound of cars.

“That’s weird i’m on a train and that didn’t  wake me up.”

Then the cart door opened and about 10 people came out including the yellow guy.

“So you survived the fall huh,well doesn’t matter you won’t be surviving this.And if you’re wondering the names zack mate” zack said  mockingly

“Why are you doing this?” Derek said.

But instead of an answer a tall man about 7 feet high came in but he was actually psycho and he was alive and well (Derek doesn’t know that).

“He isn’t getting away with this one so because of that I will expose my identity. I’m the leader of the group and we hacked someone important… well we thought we did turns out we accidentally hit you so now we have to give rid of the evidence. I know you want my name so i’ll tell you… it’s Jeff.” Jeff explained.

Out of nowhere Derek started dashing towards zack he planned to trick them to jumping of, his plan was working till he tripped when he got up zack pushed Derek off but not till Derek grabbed Jeff’s legs and they both fell of the train. Jeff landed on the track but Derek fell down a waterfall…


“Ow…. i survived that, well As a can tell i’m pretty sure…”


After waiting to see if his pain neurons send any vibes he got up then he took in his surroundings he saw some cars up the hill.


“There still trying jesh live a little.”

He started to climb the hill it turns out those cars did not belong to Jeff but instead they were empty.


“Point for me ,at least i think?”

Then Derek heard someone move. Jeff was right there trying to stand up.

“You think this is victory you merely set me back”Jeff sighed.


Jeff panted as he tried to get up “why did you even follow through to this you would have gotten your personal information back either way.You risked your life for this!” Jeff screamed.

Just then Derek started sprinting for a train, leaving behind a very tired Jeff.


In a couple of days Derek finally got back to his home and sorted everything out (His boss was furious)

“It’s finally over thanks god”

Derek was in a subway when all the TV monitors turned to special news…

“The mastermind hacker Jeff is now in custody in reports come in saying that the quartermaster of the team ‘zack’ is now the new leader”

Everyone started clapping/worrying.But Derek just left with a half smile


“here we go”…   

The adventures of Lisset and Alexa

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        In 2015 there are 2 girls that are good friend. Lisset and Alexa they are in 5th grade. They always wanted to be rich. Then one day me and Alexa were walking to my house to do homework.

When we come in got started in are homework while  someone knocked the door I didn’t saw no one. But I saw a map for a treasure hunt and headed to the forest.                                                                                          

       We got to the forest and it hot but we had the correct clothing that are for adventurer like tan  shorts and shirt and a hat that is tan and. Next we saw that had Been 30 min that we walk later something bad happen it started  to rain so hard.

       We get so hungry so we stop to eat something then we started to walk  we saw a red x like 100 feet away for us.  later we got to the big red x we saw that it we buried in the ground and we thought it was in a cave .

    Than we started to dig to find the treasure then when we saw the Big treasure down in the hole we got so excited to like at the treasure in front of me and Alexa we got so happy. We started to walk with the big treasure it heavy and it is so hot we be walking for two hours we got hungry but last `time we eat the food so we did not have food to eat.

     We started to go to find food but Alexa didn’t wanted to go with me so I told her to say where she is they I went to go get food when I came from finding food I did not see her. Alexa is lost I tried to find her but I couldn’t so I went with the treasure back home I walk for two more hours. finally I got home I didn’t find Alexa so I have all the treasure so Im rich.



The Little Hero

                    The Little Hero


Untitled drawing          …As the masked man ran into the burning building, he was faced with fire at every path. Dodging the fire and rubble was not easy. After he saved almost all of the people in the building, he heard a frightened womans scream. With his amazing senses he could track down the scream half a mile away. The frightened voice led him to a broken elevator hanging from 1 weak wire. The woman had two children which were crying. As the masked man climbed down the creaking wire, the exit was filled with more and more flames. Once the masked man reached the wiggling elevator, he opened the trapdoor on the roof of the elevator. The moment he got in, the wire gave out. The masked man had to act quickly, so he grabbed- “Aiden!” yelled Aiden’s mom. “Mom, i was in the middle of reading the latest edition of the masked man” hissed Aiden. “But it’s supper time, it’s my special oregon soup!” hollered his mom “YES!” Aiden yelled happily.


The very next day, Aiden woke up, freshened up, and went downstairs. “Hows it goin’.” asked Aiden’s mom as she served him pancakes shaped like the superman logo.


“thanks mom, but do i have to go to school, i don’t want to have to deal with that jerk, jeffery.” aiden moaned.


“yes you do, honey. do you wanna be dumb? now get your backpack and go to school” said his mom. aiden moaned.


As aiden walked out of the house, he thought about if he had a super powers. “ice breath, super-speed,and flight!” aiden said


“but what should be my super-name. Super Aiden? Super A-”


“how bout` dork-a-tron!” Jeffrey taunted “OH, OH, how about Beaver boy!” one of jeffrey’s friend yelled.


“ At least i can fight you!” Aiden yelled angrily


“Oh really, you really think that a 10 year old can fight me?!” Jeffrey hissed.


At that point Aiden knew it was better if he ran away, or he would become oregon soup.

He waited at the bus stop for about 2 minutes, but when the bus finally came he realized he was at the wrong bus.


“Um bus driver, i’m supposed to go to Boring elementary” said Aiden.


so then the bus driver stopped the bus and Aiden got out. He realized that he was in a completely different town than before “what is this place”said Aiden. The town was as silent as a graveyard, the only thing breaking the silence was Aiden’s breath. The people in this town were dull, they just seemed to stare at aiden in his bright green clothing. He saw a nearby police car in the distance, only to find out is was a car crash. he heard whispers saying

“Earl Nightmarein a very dull tone.


he found a building labeled “Lost and never found” he went inside thinking he’d be safe.


He found multiple books labeled “earl nightmare” covered in vines. Then he heard a whisper that said “BEHIND YOU” as he turned around he saw a huge gold light. Aiden woke up. he was on the bus, covered in mud, it was not a dream (he could interact with items) , it was not real life, but he thought it was a vision. The bus driver asked “are you ok, kid? you’ve been staring at that book in the road for 3 whole minutes.”. Is this the bus to boring elementary?” asked aiden fearfully “yes” the bus driver said in a creeped out tone. Aiden was silently freaking out thinking what the heck was going on.


When Aiden came to school he didnt fell to happy,he kept thinking about that strange vision he had an hour ago. He thought who Earl Nightmare was, “what if he was watching me right now?!” screamed aiden. Then the most weirdest thing happened. Time seemed to slow down, but not aiden, it started raining, then he saw a man. The man seemed to be rich and fancy. he had pale skin, a white shirt, a golden suit, diamond boots, and an emerald top hat and cane. Aiden walked back and said “Earl nightmare…”. Earl was hovering above the ground , as if he was some kind of god. “YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHO YOU’RE MESSING WITH, AIDEN!” Screamed earl nightmare. Time came to a stop. “YOU DON’T WANT TO MESS WITH ME!!!”. Aiden woke up. He was in school, laying down on a bench. It was recess, and he wondered what had happened while he was out. It seemed as he could walk around while he was having the vision. As he got up and started walking across the blacktop, he saw jeffrey. “HEY LOOK! it’s dork-a-tron!” jeffrey taunted


“What a loser, he thinks he’s a superhero!”.


Aiden’s eyes started to fill up with tears


“At least i’m smart! you idiot! YOUR PICKING ON ME BECAUSE BECAUSE YOU HAVE NO BRAINS!”screamed aiden.


They were silent for a moment…then all of a sudden…BOP! Aiden was on the ground, weeping. Aiden had no other choice than to run away, he ran to the pine forest nearby. with tears in his eyes, he ran out the other end of the forest and ran into earl nightmare home. “No one would look for me here! Here i can be my own superhero! SUPER-AIDEN!”. He denied the fact he was lost, hungry, and scared. “You thinking you’re a superhero is so sad, kid. you’ll never be one.” a whisper said. Aiden clenched his fists and yelled “ I’LL BE THE BEST SUPERHERO EVER!”. A letter dropped to his feet that said “5-1-18-9  14-9-7-8-20-13-1-18-5” (figure out the code). Aiden asked a few people if he could help them with anything. He was rejected because he couldn’t understand his language. “Maybe if i read more about earl nightmare i could understand who his, what is this town, how will i survive, and how to become a superhero” Aiden said. he walked to the lost and never found store, maybe the reason the were lost was because no one read them. As he walk to the store the words changed, they said “30 years ago…it was a tragedy”. He walked in the lifeless store, he found out the people of the town speak in numbers. the letter A would represent 1 and B would represent 2. He saw purple smoke leading into a door in the back covered in vines. “do i dare…?” Aiden asked himself. He walked slowly. the mechanical door opened, and he was greeted with stairs. The broken stairs were very dangerous but he didn’t fall. He heard the same tune  over and over again “he’s here, he’s there, he’s everywhere. there is no stop to the rain of terror. check the mirror, he’s there. check the sky, he’s there.  never trust. never listen. unless it is to save…the town.”. He walked slowly, he knew the story of this town was dark and he didn’t want to mess it. The smoke grew larger and larger until he was met with a big room. A man sat on a chair, frozen. He was repeating the same tune “he’s here, he’s there, he’s everywhere. there is no stop to the rain of terror. check the mirror, he’s there. check the sky, he’s there.  never trust. never listen. unless it is to save…the town.”. he seemed…brainwashed. next to him was a glowing purple stone with a crack down the middle. He walked to the man who was brainwashed, he was holding a book.  Aiden took the book out of his hand and read the page he was on.


                               …30 years ago there was a stone in the basement of the bookstore in Namintown. The stone held a powerful being which could destroy the town easily. his name was EARL NIGHTMARE, something you do not want to mess with. One day the stone broke entirely and the pieces fell to the ground. Earl nightmare emerged from the basement. He flew in the sky and spread plague and fire. He demanded that everyone will be his slave in order to save the town, the townsfolk refused, so he took the life out of the town. the people were forever trapped, not able to control themselves, but they were controlled by EARL as if they were some kind of puppets . All they could do was watch the lifeless town go on with their lives. But there was one man who broke free from his curse. His name is unknown, but he fixed the stone and trapped EARL in the stone. The people were free but they could not leave the town, and everything is still dull…


AIden dropped the book. he knew he had to get out of there. once he got to the stairs the purple smoke reached him. He was being controlled by EARL NIGHTMARE! Earl got up…he laughed. He didn’t have the same voice Aiden heard in the visions. He had a less intimidating voice, but he is a force not to be messed with. “IT’S BEEN SO LONG” Earl said “THIS TOWN BRINGS BACK MEMORIES”. He got up to fly, but he couldn’t. “ AW CURSE THIS HORRIBLE BODY!” Earl screamed “ A GOD SHOULDN’T HAVE TO WORK UNDER THESE CONDITIONS! I MUST FLY!”. He jumped up in the air. but it was no use, he can’t. Earl walked up the stairs, he was disgusted of the walls. There was overgrowth on the walls. “FIRST OFF I NEED TO RUIN AIDENS LIFE FOR MESSING WITH ME!” Earl yelled. He ran out into the town, when he saw all the people, he grinned. “SOON THIS WILL BE ALL MINE!”.


He ran to boring elementary, everyone was looking for him. “There’s Aiden!” yelled a girl that was in the hallway. Earl knew this was his chance to wreck his life. “YOU SUCK AND I HATE ALL THE TEACHERS” Earl yelled. Then, he got a paper weight and threw it out the window. “what are you doing!?” yelled the girl. “I’M THE MOST EVIL PERSON IN THE WORLD!!!”. He grabbed the fire alarm and triggered it. Water was pouring everywhere, all the computers were now destroyed. Aiden was trapped all he could do was watch the horrors Earl was creating. He tried to get back into his body, but he couldn’t. Earl went to the boiler room and started to break it. The school was about to explode! Aiden tried to break out of his curse, but it was no use, he began to doubt his powers. Aiden weeped at the sight of the police and the fire truck coming, it’s over……….Aiden opened his eyes, he clenched his fists, he grinded his teeth. He knew he could not give up. He stormed to Earl and tried to take his body back. He may technically be a ghost but he tried. At that moment Earl realized he did enough damage so he got out. Aiden opened his eyes he was in the boiler room it was on fire…he put a handkerchief on his face to keep the ash away. Meanwhile, Earl was racing to Namintown so he could break the stone and hide it. He was unstoppable. “TIME TO FINISH AIDEN” Earl Hollered. He went to the burning school. Aiden saw in the smoke two glowing red eyes. This was it, a god versus a kid, it felt impossible. Aiden side jumped off of the generator and came into kick Earl in the face, didn’t even hurt. Earl got his emerald cane and smacked him with it. Next he flew to the air vent and shut it off, the smoke stopped leaving the room. The generator was about to blow up, Aiden tried to leave, but Earl locked the door. It blew up


The last thing he saw before it blew up was earl two glowing red eyes in the smoke. He woke up with a terrible pain. The police was coming to the school. Aiden got up and he started to run but the more he ran, the longer the hallway got. He looked behind himself and saw Earl with his torn suit and broken emerald cane. He was as angry as you could get, no doubt about it. Just then, Earl charged toward him at full speed! Aiden screamed and closed his eyes. He open his eyes thinking he’d be in heaven by now, but he saw nothing in the hallway. He ran outside and saw Earl in the sky, AND HE WAS HUGE! It’s started to thunderstorm and the lightning started to violently target Aiden. He ran hoping for the best, but he knew he could not keep it up. All of a sudden, BOOM! He was struck. He dropped to his knees, he felt a tingling in his head…he fell over. The police gasped at the sight, they couldn’t believe it, it was unimaginable, unforgivable, and something they thought never existed, EARL NIGHTMARE. Aidens mom ran to him trying to wake him up, there were tears in her eyes. Earl laughed when the entire school exploded. Then, lightning struck down from the sky and hit Aiden, he got up, panting. After that, he grabbed a huge rock from the rubble from the school and threw it at Earl. He was knocked out of the sky and landed in the side of the bank nearby, he had super-strength!  He got up screaming “IT’S NOT THAT EASY TO TAKE DOWN A GOD!”.  He shot some lightning at Aiden, He tried to run but he couldn’t outrun it (it was going at the speed of light). Just when it was going to get him, he disappeared, he also had invisibility. Then he reappeared right next to Earl and socked him the face. He flew away to the basement of the bookstore hoping he wouldn’t find him. “got you” Aiden whispered. Then, Aiden socked him in the face again and crashed in the wall. The god that everyone was scared of was defeated by a 10 year old. That just goes to show you, the littlest ant can become the king of the world!




“No” said the author.


“ Cmon! you can’t do this to your readers!” Aiden said.


“fine… then they all became friends and had a super loper uber happy fun time…The End”.


“do it better!” yelled jeffrey.


“FINE! gosh…” screamed the author.


Aiden mother ran to him tears. “MOM!” Aiden screamed. His mom came to him and hugged him. “Please don’t run away again, honey” his mom said. “i promise, after today i will never do this again!”


                         well that was deep…                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            



The Magical source

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                                              By: Abigail Burnham

Today’s year was 2020, I found an old map on the Watkins Mill high grounds. I called Carla.K, Paola.C, Lionel.M, Bryan.M, Devonis.N, and Brandon.C.

“I think I found a treasure map!”I said in excitement.

“Go to  Lionel’s room”

Carla, Paola, Lionel, Bryan, Devonis, and Brandon says “Cool, well go!”

We all went to Lionel’s room. I laid the old map on the desktop  I said “ Hey Lionel can you locate Piney Branch’s forest?”

“Sure… here it is!”

Declared Lionel. We all huddle around the computer and we went to the exact location.

Once we got their Paola gasped “I’m not going, don’t you guys know what happened here?”

“No?” I questioned.

“It was on every news channel!

“We don’t watch the news.”

“Well, kids just like us went in, but never came out!”

“But the map says we have to go in Paola.”

“Fine,I’ll go then.”Paola mummered.

We went to Home Depot with money from selling lemonade stand, we got supplies for camping and other stuff too! Once we were ready we went into the forest.

It was a dark, big ,cold,and we all were scared.

Carla said “alright we must go north for 90 miles than 140 miles east.”

After 3 days of being in the forest we were about to give up. But just then Devonis saw a huge cave!

“It has a face carved on it!” Brandon and Bryan said at the same time.

After 7 hours we finally got to the faced cave, we were all happy and we slept in the cave overnight. The next day we all woke up around the same time. We all were excited about the treasure, we got the flashlights, the helmets, and the first aid kit.

We found this old statue at the end of the cave. Devonis saw the heart on the old statue glow. We all tried to grasped at it at the same time, then we saw the glow split into sevenths. We tried to get our hands off of the statue but our hands were stuck! The glow moved onto our hands and it went into our heart, after that our hands got unstuck after a while our body’s started to change Carla, Paola, and I turned into FAIRIES!!!!!! The boys turned into PIXIES. After one step in the faced cave it started to shake,rocks were falling we all thought we were going to die!

Carla found a spell book in her floes, she yelled “magical shield!”

She thought it would shield all of us too, but it only covered her. We all vanished except for Carla, she found a spell that could revive us all. Carla said the words to turn us back. We all hugged Carla and thanked her so much! After a long time we all cheered when we saw light and our families. We all ran to them. Since we all were very happy we trance formed back into the fairies and pixies. And our parents were freaking out when they saw us different  than ourselves. They were about to turn us into the authorities.

But then my mom said “That wouldn’t be fair for us it might not even be our fault that we are like this, they…” She told the rest of the parents

“just like us when we were there age.”My mom mumbled.

After dinner we went to the metal orientation! We said Carla was the leader, Lionel is the genius, Paola is the artist, Bryan is the jokester, Brandon is the wild one, Devonis is the fighter, and I am the bait. We have our metal’s and we are proud of them too!


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