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Harris Burdick Story – Rahmaan Anderson

March 23, 2016 room229 Leave a comment

warning might be scary Apothise once upon a time there was a doll named Apothises she was the best friend of a little girl named Alisa Alisa is 15 years old and she love Apothise but then……….Apothises where are you she said then she ran down stairs and Apothises was down stairs in front of the TV. Apothisesah ah ah swedy are you OK yes mom she said. then the next day when Alisa went to school before she got inside she threw apothises in the trash then at night time Apothises knocked on the door with a note that said play a game it’s hide and seek let’s see how good you are so Alisa looked in the trash at school but she was gone. So Alisa told her mom every thing then they looked all around town then they went back home and apothises was on the couch watching TV they screamed ah ah ah they said then they tried to leave but apothises shut the door. suddenly the house the floating the dog barked then Apothises killed the dog then the mother screamed at apothises then Apothises killed the mother then alisa grab the shotgun and shot apothises 12 times then the police came!

The End

or is it?

By:Rahmaan Anderson

characters

Apothises– Apothises is a crazy doll that kills people. Also she is very scary.and

she is coming for you ha ha ha.

the mother- rich mother

the daughter- fun/evil/nice.

warning might be scary Apothise once upon a time there was a doll named Apothises she was the best friend of a little girl named alisa Alisa is 15 years old and she love Apothise but then……….Apothises where are you she said then she ran down stairs and Apothises was down stairs in front of the TV. Apothises ah ah ah z are you you OK yes mom she said. then the next day when Alisa went to school before she got inside she threw apothises in the trash then at night time Apothises knocked on the door with a note that said play a game it’s hide and seek let’s see how good you are so Alisa looked in the trash at school but she was gone. So Alisa told her mom every thing then they looked all around town then they went back home and apothises was on the couch watching TV they screamed ah ah ah they said then they tried to leave but apothises shut the door. suddenly the house the floating the dog barked then Apothises killed the dog then the mother screamed at apothises then Apothises killed the mother then Alisa grab the shotgun and shot apothises 12 times then the police came!

The End

or is it?

By:Rahmaan Anderson

characters

Apothises– Apothises is a crazy doll that kills people. Also she is very scary.and

she is coming for you ha ha ha.

the mother- rich mother

the daughter- fun/evil/nice.

The house on

Maple

Street part 2

Apothisese revenge

Maple

Street part 2

Apothisese revenge

Harris Burdick, Inquiry project, Mr. Linden's Library, Narrative, Writing

Mr. Linden’s Library By Daniel

March 23, 2016 room229 Leave a comment

Mr Linden’s Library

One time there was a girl named kate . Kate has blue eyes and blonde hair and was 20 feet and she is 19 years old . Kate lived in a town called frost town . Frost town has lots of snow and has about 30 people living their and 25 houses . Kate has this friend called john . John has brown eyes and black hair and is 20 feet tall also he is 18 years old . John lives 2 houses up from hers .

Kate and john though they should go to the library so they won’t get bored . Kate and john walked to the library . When they arrived they both opened the door and walked in . Kate and john both said ,” Do you have any books about frost town and comics ? “ Mr. linden said ,” Yes the comics are in the graphic novels aisle and the town books are in the information aisle .”

Kate went to the information aisle and john went to the graphic novels aisle . Kate looked down and saw the book she wanted . Kate went to check on john if he found his graphic novel yet . Kate didn’t saw john so she went to the checkout counter . Kate saw john and said ,” John i found you so now let’s checkout our books okay “ Mr. linden said ,” Are you ready .” Kate said ,” Yes we are so here are our books “ Mr linden checked them out and kate and john went back to their houses .

Kate knocked on her door and her grandpa opened it . Kate said ,” Hi grandpa i just went to the library with john “ Kate’s grandpa couldn’t talk because he broke his mouth bone . Kate went to her room too go too sleep because it was night . The next morning she woke up and took the book and readed it . When it 1 hour passed she closed the book and got out of bed and walked to the kitchen to eat breakfast . After kate was done with breakfast she went back up to her room and readed again .

Kate opened the book and felt a little weird and when she looked at the book a vine came out of the book and squeezed her too sand . Her grandpa came up and saw the sand and heard help me grandpaKate’s grandpa went to magic much too get a magic stick . When her grandpa arrived at magic much he asked the owner ,” Here is my money buy “ . The owner did not care and went back to work . Her grandpa went to kate’s room and said ,” Hocus hocus bring kate back to life “ The magic worked and kate went back to life . Kate said ,” Let’s destroy the book “ Kate went to the backyard and brought a lighter . Kate burned the book and threw it out the window . The book burned and disappeared . Ash was on the ground and kate was glad the book was gone

THE END

Mr. Linden's Library

Mr. Linden’s LIbrary- Aurora

March 23, 2016 room229 Leave a comment

Name:Aurora ramos #18 3/17/16

Please remember to have dialogue, genre characteristics and check spelling and punctuation before turning in.

One day in London there was a girl named Linda who loved to read. It was her birthday and she made a lot of money over the days sh

e was working. Linda was old enough she was 21 years old she had brown hair, blue eyes and 7 feet tall to go get a book to read.

Linda knew a guy who had a library so she went to a guy named Mr.Linden. She wanted a library card to get a book that she wants so Linda payed 20$. Mr.Linden was 8 feet tall, black hair, 32 years old and his eye color was green.

When Linda was looking for a book she saw a book on the floor that had a lock on it and a key she thought she should take it. It might have scary stories in it so she took the book to check it out.

When she was checking it out Mr.Linden said “do you really want this book, it is really dangerous you should not take it”.

Linda said “yes I want it I don’t really care” so Mr.Linden gave her the book and then she took the book to her sister’s house. When Linda showed her the book.

Carla asked her “Why is there a lock on the book”

Linda said “I do not know?” so Linda took the book to her house at 10:31 P.M.

When Linda got home she read the book because she was tired then she fell asleep. Linda woke up she was in a random place and she saw a boy that had a name tag from a store that said Zach he had black hair, brown eyes and Linda thought that he was 6 feet tall.When Linda saw that Zach was in the light she eminently saw that he was a ghost. Linda asked the boy “why am I here”

The boy said “Because you read my book no one can read it or else they die”.

Linda thought in her head she should of have leson to Mr.Linden.

The next day Carla called Linda all night but she did not answer so Carla went to her house but she was not there. Carla called the police to look for Linda and they did.

4 hours later

The police called Carla and said that they found Linda and when Carla got to the place she saw her sister not breathing or noting. Carla knew that Linda was not going to come back so Carla said her last bye then she left with tiers on her face. He had warned her about the book . Now it’s too late.

Uninvited Guests

Uninvited guest By: Carlos

March 23, 2016 room229 Leave a comment

WARNING it is to scary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He lived in a house that was haunted that was green out side of it was full with grass it had a grave behind it.heard something in the basement and the basement had eyes from the doors and it was all dark and he started shaking. Also heard the door hitting the wall 6again and again so he went to the basement with a bat. When he got down. One day there was man named Jose he had blue eyes and blonde hair and hated to read and he was really brave. he lived in carlosland in a rainy day and he lived in a creepy house!! That was haunted before he moved in a man died named Carlos. So Jose was watching his favorite show teen titans go and he was eating popcorn at the same time he felt like someone was in his house watching him. Until he there he found nothing!! but he only saw a bag moving. Then when he saw that the bag was moving he got his bat and hit it and it was still scared and he heard voice in hismoving so he opened the bag and found nothing so he got scared to then the lights turned off and the doors was locked. So then he called for help screaming out no one heard so he got his phone out but as soon he got it out it disappeared. So then jose got really ear. So then he remembered that he had a room in the basement for if a tornado comes near his house. Also he tried to go to the room in the basement. He carried a bat for nothing can touch him. So the ghost was following jose and the ghost kept touching him and that’s how he found out his house was haunted. so he tried to look for his phone and flashlight and his bat so then he found his phone on the floor. and tried to use the flashlight on the phone but the flashlight on the phone wasn’t bright enough. So then he tried to look for the flashlight but he couldn’t find it. So he tried to call someone to help but he forgot that his phone was off because he forgot to pay for he can get service. So then he tried to find the light switch. so then he found it and turned it on and went to go get the holy water. but then carlos went to go break the light bulb. so carlos didn’t get the holy water so he just walking without no light so then he found the holy water and the ghost

carlos did not even know that he had the holy water. So then he felt the ghost touching him and sprayed it on him and he did not feeling the ghost no more so walked up the stairs and the day after he moved and lived happily in his no him.

The House on Maple Street, Uncategorized

The House on Maple Street

March 23, 2016 room229 Leave a comment

It was a rainy afternoon. John and Alex and Max were skateboarding after school. John had white shoes, green eyes, red hair, blue shorts,and a red shirt. He was 5ft and 6in tall. Alex G had black hair, brown eyes, orange shoes, a rainbow shirt, and green pants. He was 5ft and 6in tall also. Max had green and brown eyes, green hair, purple shoes, black shorts, and a black shirt. He was 5ft and 6in tall too. John, Alex, and Max are in 9th grade. Then they went to an abandoned house. The house had a sharp point on the top, four wings on the sides, and four rocket boosters on the bottom. It was all white. The 3 teenagers went inside.

Max went to the basement. It was small, dark, and cold. It smelled like puke. Max Found a Big, red button. He pushed the button. At the same time, Alex and John went to the attic.

The attic was very dark, super cold, and super dusty. When they got inside, they found Jason and Alejandro, the 2 people who had invented the rocket house. The house was heading toward space. It almost hit 10 stars and 9 asteroids. The 2 inventors took control and tried to land on the moon.

They make it to the moon. Jason and Alejandro put on space suits to go out to see how long it would take to land back on Earth. using binoculars to check how many meters. The 3 kids explore to see what space is about.

They all climb back into the rocket house. The 2 inventors click the purple button to start up the rockets to go home. It didn’t turn on at first. The inventors worked on fixing it and after clicking the purple button 3 more times, it worked.

They flew back to Earth. Safe and sound. Jason and Alejandro talked to Max about the clicking button without asking and Max he would never do it again THE END.

Another Place, Another Time

Another place Another time By Christopher

March 23, 2016 room229 Leave a comment

Long time ago there was a small village and there was 3 son’s 2 daughter 1 wife so they were living there wonderful lives. Telling stories to kids and the dad was leon wife was leyzly and the kids where melissa jennifer rahman andreese and carlos leon loved his children they were so kind and playful he would never want to loose them and especially the wife lezley was important to her to so they went to the park and went to go play some ball or some football. and so one day there was a huge tsunami like 2 miles away and there were going to abandon the villaso when it was coming it was 50 miles per 30 seconds and it was fast so they were on the boat And they left.So the dad was counting and said”wait where is your mom”and they said “ they did not knowshe was still at the island.

And when the tsunami hit the island so she was gone and they were so depressed and they were crying dad was also crying but sounded weird. so the villagers went to go and find a different island. so they looked and looked for a island but they could not find one then suddenly…they found one and they felt sad for their friend and leon’s wife and they did not know what to do they felt lonely and sad that there mom

gone. so as they were on the island they were just living there live as normal again. And so they missed her mom but they had to learn to let go THE END.

The Third Floor Bedroom, Uncategorized

harris burdick story-andreese smith

March 23, 2016 room229 Leave a comment

warning might be scary hahahaha

one upon there was a guy name leon and this one day on july he moved in a new house and he did not know that the third floor room was haunted and it was on feb,15,2016… the next day on feb,16 it was leon first time sleeping in his new house…when leon woke up he heard this loud noise bom bom bom and leon got so scared.

in the after noon on a sunny day the andreese the farther called his family.so after they called the family andreese got this wall paper to got to his bed set and it had eagels on it and just one eagles look diffrent .so after they put it up they called animal controll because they seen a wolf and before the animal control can get there the wolf beat up leon and andreese the dad tryed to save leon but he bite leon and leon turned into a zombie and andreese got so scared .latter that day leon went to the basement because he was a zombie and then the animal controll came and set traps for the wolf and latter that day the trap got the wolf and leon went to the hospital for two day and when he went into the hospital the doctors was scared.but the next day on march 2 they gave leon a pill and he came back to a ragular person…

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

the end of story

hahahahaha.

Uninvited Guests

Uninvited Guests By: David J.

March 23, 2016 room229 Leave a comment

One Day a man named jack he was 23 years old and he had black hair and black eyes and was 6 feet tall and jack had a pet cat and the cat’s name was a.j . jack was going to buy a new house he was excited . He saw a house that was really big and he saw a man standing in front of the house jack asks the man “does someone live here” jack says. The man says “no.” jack says “how much for the house” the man says “16,000 dollars” He pays for the house jack went inside his house and it looked big inside the house. jack went in the bedroom it had a nothing in it he had all of his stuff outside and jack went to put the stuff in the house all by himself. jack said it’s going to take a long time. after he put all his stuff inside it was dark to dark he heard a voice say 16 then jack fell asleep. in the morning jack went to go buy food after he went home and ate breakfast then storms happened then the a.j went crazy he was meowing loud and running all over the room

jack said calm down a.j.

a.j stopped running and meowing a.j was still and then a.j started walking calmly jack looked at a.j with a confused face then a.j fell asleep next jack heard noise he ran to the basement he saw a old board game then he heard something upstairs. Jack heard something jack saw the doorknob turning and the room was empty the door started opening slowly and he saw a ugly monster with big teeth and red eyes started running to jack he ran to the basement as fast as he can he went behind a big box the monster looked around the room when the monster found him jack saw a rock and hit the monster and knocking the monster. t

The monster fell on the floor the monster disappeared and the sky turned blue and he looked around his house and it was back to normal. He called his mom to talk about the house.

The end

The Mysteries of Harris Burdick

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Harris Burdick Story – Rahmaan Anderson

Mr. Linden’s Library By Daniel

Mr. Linden’s LIbrary- Aurora

Uninvited guest By: Carlos

The House on Maple Street

Another place Another time By Christopher

harris burdick story-andreese smith

Uninvited Guests By: David J.

jack said calm down a.j.

The monster fell on the floor the monster disappeared and the sky turned blue and he looked around his house and it was back to normal. He called his mom to talk about the house.

Daly's 5th Graders solving the mysteries left behind by Harris Burdick.