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Uninvited guest By: Carlos

WARNING it is to scary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He lived in  a house that was haunted that was green out side of it was full with grass it had a grave behind it.heard something in the basement and the basement had eyes from the doors and it was all dark and he started shaking. Also heard the door hitting the wall 6again and again so he went to the basement with a bat. When he got down.  One day there was man named Jose he had blue eyes and blonde hair  and hated to read and he was really brave. he lived in carlosland in a rainy day and he lived in a creepy house!! That was haunted before he moved in a man died named Carlos. harris small doorSo Jose was watching his favorite show teen titans go and he was eating popcorn at the same time he felt like someone was in his house watching him. Until he  there he found nothing!! but he only saw a bag moving. Then when he saw that the bag was moving he got his bat and hit it and it was still scared and he heard voice in hismoving so he opened the bag and found nothing so he got scared to then the lights turned off and the doors was locked. So then he called for help screaming out no one heard so he got his phone out but as soon he got it out it disappeared.   So then jose got really  ear. So then he remembered that he had a room in the basement for if a tornado comes near his house. Also he tried to go to the room in the basement. He carried a bat for nothing can touch him. So the ghost was    following jose and the ghost kept touching him and that’s how he found out his house was haunted. so he tried to look for his phone and flashlight and his bat so then he found his phone on the floor. and tried to use the flashlight on the phone but the flashlight on the phone wasn’t bright enough. So then he tried to look for the flashlight  but he couldn’t find it. So he tried to call someone to help but he forgot that his phone was off because he forgot to pay for he can get service. So then he tried to find the light switch. so then he found it and turned it on and went to go get the holy water. but then carlos went to go break the light bulb. so carlos didn’t get the holy water so he just walking without no light so then he found the holy water and the ghost

carlos did not even know that he had the holy water. So then he felt the ghost touching him and sprayed it on him and he did not feeling the ghost no more so walked up the stairs and the day after he moved and lived happily in his no him.

Uninvited Guests By: David J.

 One Day a man named jack he was 23 years old and he had black hair and black eyes and was 6 feet tall and jack had a pet cat and the cat’s name was a.j . jack was going to buy a new house he was excited . He saw a house that was really big and he saw a man standing in front of the house  jack asks the man “does someone live here” jack says.                                                                                        The man says “no.” jack says “how much for the house” the man says “16,000 dollars” He pays for the house jack went inside his house and it looked big inside the house. jack went in the bedroom it had a nothing in it he had all of his stuff outside and jack went to put the stuff in the house all by himself.                                                                              jack said it’s going to take a long time. after he put all his stuff inside it was dark to dark he  heard a voice say 16 then jack fell asleep. in the morning jack went to go buy food after he went home and ate breakfast then storms happened then the a.j went crazy he was meowing loud and running all over the room                                                                                                   

 

 

jack said calm down a.j.                

 

a.j stopped running and meowing a.j was still and then a.j started walking calmly jack looked at a.j with a confused face then a.j fell asleep next jack heard noise he ran to the basement he saw a  old board game then he heard something upstairs. Jack heard something jack saw the doorknob turning and the room was empty the door started opening slowly and he saw a ugly monster with big teeth and red eyes started running to jack he ran to the basement as fast as he can he went behind a big box the monster looked around the room when the monster found him jack saw a rock and hit the monster and knocking the monster. tharris small door

The monster fell on the floor the monster disappeared and the sky turned blue and he looked around his house and it was back to normal. He called his mom to talk about the house.                                                                                                                                                                     

 

                The end               

Uninvited Guest by Jasmine

There once was a girl named Lily. She was 18 years old. Lily had medium blond hair, who wearing a furry dark grey coat with a black long-sleeve shirt underneath her coat and  blue skinny jeans. Her eye color was icy blue, the color of icy water.  Lily likes to drink vanilla milkshakes: with cherry on top!

 

Lily died because of a demon. Let me tell you how it happened. It was March 3,2o16. Lily was in her bedroom texting her friends (Olivia, Alexis, and Lacey.). Until her mom told her to do her chores. Lily refused to do it.

“Lily! DO YOUR CHORES NOW!!!”Lily’s mom yelled .

“NEVER!”  Lily replied, yelling back. They kept yelling at each other until …

“Fine, I will do my chores.” Lily said, calmly.

“Thank you, Lily.” Replied Lily’s Mom. “I’m going out. When I get back, you’re chores should be done.”

Lily’s list of chores are:

  • clean her room
  • clean the bathroom
  • clean mom’s room
  • clean mom’s bathroom
  • clean living room
  • clean kitchen
  • cook  food
  • laundry

 

Lily was done with cleaning her room and it took her 3 hours just to do her room. Lily was tired of doing chores.  Lily took a nap by the time her mother came back . She saw Lily taking a nap.

“Lily! WHAT ARE YOU DOING TAKING A NAP?!”Lily’s Mom screamed.

“I was sleepy and tired of  doing chores.”Replied Lily.

“Deal with it, Lily.” Lily’s mom said, in a rude tone.

 

Lily went to go clean the living room. After cleaning the living room, she took a one hour break . She went to do the last chore, which was to do the laundry but the washer and dryer was in the basement. Lily thought that the basement was creepy. So instead of going to the basement, Lily put all of the dirty clothes under her bed . When Lily’s mom went upstairs to check on Lily.

“Lily? Did you do all the chores?” Asked Lily’s mom.

“Yes.”Lily lied .

 

Lily’s mom was surprised that everything was done. “Okay. Here, take $1,000 to buy something at the mall”. Remember: Buy something under $1,000 dollars.” Lily’s mom said, giving Lily $1,000. Lily was so happy that she lied to her mom for now on! After a few days Lily was caught red handed.  Lily’s mom told Lily that  she has to do chores for 4 weeks and give her the $ 1,000 dollars that she used to buy high heels and a dress.

 

Lily had  4 times the laundry Lily finally went down to the basement and when she was going down the basement she saw the knob turn and got scared  and  dropped the laundry on the basement floor and ran up stairs.

Lily went to go tell her mom that she saw the doorknob turn down stairs in the basement   Lily’s mom didn’t believe her.  Lily told her mom to go in the basement and see it for herself. Lily’s mom  went down stairs  and  she  saw nothing.  Lily’s mom said  “Lily just do the laundry, please.”

 

Lily went down stairs. Her heart was pounding.  She was sure she seen the doorknob  turn .when Lily was  going to find out what was in the little room and when she opened the door she saw a demon and the demon saw her.  The demon went into Lily.  
When the demon was controlling Lily he made Lily kill her mother. Then Lily killed her father  and her brother and sister lily killed most of  the people in the town. The most people in the town  were scared.  Until Lily finally got the demon out of her body.  Lily trapped  the demon in magical box. Lily  called some angels and she told them about the demon so they came  to find the demon  and they did.  The angels took the demon and  put him in jail  forever and everyone that died are alive again and they never seen the demon again.

Uninvited Guest BY: Jeremiah

First day  the  Khan’s family  moved Raiyan was sigh little boy on first day of  4th grade  his first friend was  Stefan E. Rich  suddenly  they been best friends suddenly Andresses  Smith came all became the best of friends.

Suddenly one day he heard  a loud noise suddenly it got louder spoken louder suddenly  it stop Raiyan went back to sleep suddenly  it did it repeatedly  little boy.

Raiyan didn’t know what to do so he went down open the door  after his mom spoken dad told him not to.

Open the door but he opened it any way came out he didn’t know will happen so he just closed the door suddenly suddenly  he turned.  

Around spoken saw  some glowing lights so ran spoken closed the basement door spoken ran upstairs to his mom spoken dad’s room told him that him saw some red lights.

They  didn’t believe him so he went into his room went spoken  tired  to go to sleep but he couldn’t so he went down stairs.Uninvited Guests 

right

 

Spoken  got some warm milk he turned around spoken that demon was there he was screaming  so loud  spoken  house he lives in pink blue cylinders are red door wood.

He spoken it’s day spoken  went back down stairs scared ran up the steps spoken closed the basement door ran straight  outside told.

Andreeses spoken  Stefan that he has a demon in his house so they went his to find out if he has a demon or not in his house so they went down stairs to.

the basement spoken  Andreeses spoken Stefan went spoken  saw the red lights zoomed up the steps spoken out the door.

“Andreeses said what is going on in your house I don’t know man don’t know ”  

“ Stefan said the double    thing”

Suddenly I came they told me that  a new kid named Raiyan that I thought they was trying get to away from me.

Jeremiah , Andreeses , spoken  Stefan ask how old are you Raiyan said I am 12 years old suddenly they said I am 12 years old to suddenly  he.

Said no way suddenly they  went to Raiyan”s house spoken  sat on there sitter’ s spoken  talked about school spoken  suddenly Andreeses.

Said hey guys here comes the new girl her name is Nyima Tucker spoken her friend to her name is Jasmine spoken  her other spoken  friend spoken her name was Lisset spoken Leandra.

Spoken  we was all the double  age. So Jeremiah asked all of the  girls if they wanted to come over his they yes so came on in to Jeremiah’s house.  

 

Suddenly his dad’s heart was pounding. He suddenly  he went down stairs spoken turned seen what he never seen before suddenly  the doorknob turned something popped out he was scared to death.

Suddenly Raiyan Khan said I want your soul his parents didn’t know so they trapped him in the basement his parents went spoken got the church pastor to get the devil out his life.

the Church Pastor to put god in his life spoken  get the devil out so he won’t have go to  another school spoke  specially a private school spoken me  spoken his dad isn’t going to pay for that so Church Pastor”.

Please get the devil out of him so he go to school because he is about to be late to school suddenly  the Church Pastor spoken this well take like a few minutes or 12 hours.

Will Raiyan be done bye 9:00 or 10:00 at least because he is about be late how many times do I have to say it you spoken 12 hours and been like 12 minutes now he is late because off you this his first time missing school.

 

The Uninvited Guests

uninvited house guest is in kate house kate woke up and heard

noise downstairs and saw a person looking  for some someone

 

or something going down stairs and disappearing  and she thought it was a shadow but it was a soil or a ghost and it was

 

an uninvited guest

and their were more uninvited guests

 

and their were 5 more ghosts in the house and they were

Uninvited guests to she started to hide from them

 

One by one and it was hard to do they we’re every

Where all  around the house they we’re in the

 

Bathroom in the bedroom and everywhere an

Round the house in the

 

Living Room in the garage upstairs in

Her room and

She tried to get them out but she could

Not get them out

At all because they are see through.  

 

                                                                 

 

Uninvited Guest

One day  in a creepy house in 10278 Quail Creek Pl Ijamsville MD. The family Smith was just moving into their new house. They  unpack and put all their stuff away like winter stuff and old carpets, he looks around and sees a door he goes and opens it and it leads to the parking lot where the trash can is and their Cadillac with black and silver rims with blue lights.

 

He tells his son John, the boy with black hair and style of  Cristiano Ronaldo, “ Go choose your room because after you choose you won’t change.”

John replied, “Ok.”

John chose the big room because he said, “He needed more room for his video games.” His sister Jasmine replied by saying, “I need it for the sleepovers with my new friends.”

 

“Hahaha,” laughed  John, “ You’re acting like you are going to get friends.”

Then their mom Jessica came in to separate the fight and she asks “he was here first?”

 

John slightly raises his hand.

Their mom Jessica tells Jasmine to go to the other room.

 

“Haha” laughed John

Jasmine got mad so she stuck her tongue out John. After they all unpack they order 2 pizza and the toppings were pineapple, Ham, Pepperoni, Sausage, and cheese crust with mountain dew and 30 hot wings. Then they remember that the super bowl between Patriots and Seahawks was that Sunday. They invite their friends and they say they’ll be there in 30 minutes. Finally their friends arrive with more pizza. It was the 4th quarter 27-28 the Patriots are champions and the Smith family with their friends get real mad. They also called the last play of the seahawks the worst play of the year.

 

The next morning everybody is out of the house the 2 kids are at school and the parents at work. Meanwhile at home these little creatures named Murfets. They were created by the evil scientist neighbor in Mexico to be evil but they didn’t want to be evil. They traveled to their cousin’s, the Smurfs, world so they could create a world just for them. They started feel lonely so they came the human world to make friends but people get scared and try to kill them.  Now they can’t get to their world because the evil scientist and they need a river to get to their world. The Murfets sometimes get so they 3 diamonds and a rock to crush. They crust the 3 diamonds and the rock (woosh) the invisible Murfets house connects to the door in the basement. All of the Murfets come out to party in the Smith family house the eat marshmallow, Drink Mountain Dew and watch the Smurfs 2 and play Fifa 15. When the Smith family are parking they run down the stairs and Juan hears footsteps down the stairs so he follows the sound with his family down the stairs and stops them. Juans heart was pounding. He was sure that he’d saw the doorknob turn.

 

“Ahhhhhhh” the family yells

 

They all run up the stairs into the parents room and hid under the covers

“Should I go back down to the stairs?” asked Juan

 

“Yes you should but first clean the living room and the kitchen while we’re at Chipotle having a wonderful time”, said Jessica

 

“No I don’t…” said Juan

 

“Oh you said yes thank you DON’T have a wonderful time” Interrupted Jessica

 

“But but but I’m hungry” said Juan

 

“Bie” yelled Jessica

 

“Haha,” laughed the kids in the car

 

While Jessica and the kids were having fun. Juan had just finished cleaning the room and kitchen. Juan was getting prepared so he got a bat, shin guards, helmet, elbow and knee pads. He walks carefully down the stairs. He finally arrives at the very creepy door he finds a smoking pot with 3 diamonds and a rock he scrubbed it on the doorknob and he opens the door and a mysterious house appears. He doesn’t remember the house when he opened the door on the first day he arrived at the new house. One way or another he was going to protect his family. He searches around the creepy house and he finds another closed room door. So he opens it slowly and he finds small creepy green creatures

 

“Ahhhhhhh!” everybody yells.

 

Juan gets so scared that he smacks them with a bat.

 

“Owww” says one of the green creatures.

 

Then one of the green creatures says, “Calm down”

 

“Ok” replied Juan

 

“We good cuz yea we good or nahh?” said one of the green creatures

 

“Yea we good,” said Juan.

 

“Who are you people?” asked Juan

 

“They replied we are Murfets the cousins of the Smurfs” said the Murfets

 

“We are here because we find the most rocks and diamonds in yard.” Said one of the Murfets

 

“Wait what, why do you need a diamonds and rocks?” Asked Juan

 

“We need to connect our room to this door.” Replied another Murfets

 

“Who created you?” asked Juan

 

“The evil scientist next door.” said a murfet

 

“WHAT, I HAVE AN EVIL SCIENTIST NEXT DOOR?!” said Juan

 

“Yea, we can defeat him with a super duper powerful wand that we are creating” said a Murfet

 

“Is it ready?” asked Juan

 

“Why do you want to know” said a Murfet

 

“I want to get rid of the evil scientist duhh.” said Juan

 

“True that,” said the cool Murfet

 

“All we need is some rubies and coral reef water,” said a Murfet

 

“I have a friend who used to be in ICE COLD GOLD who lives in 5289 Mussetter Rd

Ijamsville, Maryland,”said Juan

 

“Ok what are we waiting for let’s go” said another Murfet

 

The gang enters the Bugatti Veyron that Juan just bought. They arrived at his friends from ICE COLD GOLD. Juan asks his friend Josh Feldman if he can have a rubie.

Josh Feldman replies “ok but you owe me”

“How about I tell you that Smurfs are real and they have cousins,” said Juan

 

“Yea thats enough,” said an a surprised face.

 

“Yes,” Juan said in a happy voice.

 

They drive back to the house that the Murfets live in. They start to finish the wand.

“Ok it’s ready Juan,” said a Murfet in a happy voice

 

“Then what are we waiting for lets go!” Said Juan

 

“We are actually waiting for the plan,” said another Murfet

 

“Oh,” said Juan

 

One hour later…

“Now, After an hour i have finally finished,” said one of the Murfets.

 

“Lets go get that evil scientist,” said Juan

 

“OK!” Yelled all the Murfets

 

They are walking to the evil scientist house when they see him come out the front door.

 

“This is going to be easy,” said a Murfet

 

“Lets get him!” Said Juan

 

“Ok, ready or not shoot!” Yelled a Murfet

30 Minutes later…

“I thought it was going to be hard,” said a Juan

 

“Oh yea, we accidently used the send to another dimension wand,” said a Murfet

 

“Lets check where dimension he got sent to,” said another Murfet

 

So they check were the evil scientist got sent but it turns out he was at the Smurfs Dimension. They become good friends and go everywhere together they became famous and met new friends.

 

The End.