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Comment on Snowboarding Troubles by Abby

Abby — Tue, 05 Jan 2016 19:12:09 +0000

I was cracking up through this. This was one of my favorites! Good Job Leandra.

Comment on The School of Lies by Leandra

Leandra — Mon, 23 Nov 2015 19:23:14 +0000

In reply to Jasmine. You took what I said and said the exact same thing: I think that you need to fix when Lexcennea said “YOU LITTLE WITCH! SO WHAT IF LIKE JACOB TOO! HE OBVIOUSLY ME MORE!” you need to fix were they said what if like Jacob instead you should say what if I like Jacob and you should change he obviously likes me more. <- That is what you said

Comment on The School of Lies by Jasmine

Jasmine — Mon, 23 Nov 2015 19:04:52 +0000

I think that you need to fix when Lexcennea said “YOU LITTLE WITCH! SO WHAT IF LIKE JACOB TOO! HE OBVIOUSLY ME MORE!” you need to fix were they said what if like Jacob instead you should say what if I like Jacob and you should change he obviously likes me more.

Comment on The School of Lies by Paola

Paola — Mon, 23 Nov 2015 19:04:18 +0000

I like it.

But maybe try making the part where Lexcennea killed a bunny more detailed. It pretty confusing 🙁
But besides all that: GREAT STORY! 😀

Comment on The School of Lies by Jeremiah

Jeremiah — Mon, 23 Nov 2015 18:56:40 +0000

I get that every body is doing something your story

Comment on The School of Lies by Gracie

Gracie — Mon, 23 Nov 2015 18:55:50 +0000

This was a very interesting story Leandra. I was a bit confused on a few parts but the story was super cool.It would have been better if you had told where Lexcennea went when Athura had banished her.

Comment on Life as a Toothbrush by Mr. Fitz

Mr. Fitz — Mon, 09 Nov 2015 15:47:10 +0000

This is awesome! You made me smile. I will be more gentle to the water so I don’t hurt the toothpaste. 🙂

Comment on The Forest by 446950

446950 — Mon, 21 Sep 2015 18:53:25 +0000

The story ending is so sad but the rest is beautiful