Winter break.

It was new years eve of 2015 when Derek arrived at this party in New York. Of course he didn’t want to go but his mom forced him. He was like a feral bear, he didn’t want to interact with people. Anyways when they entered the party they were greeted by alot of people, most of witch Derek didn’t know about. After some time of just watching people do stuff people do at parties Derek decided to go sit at the corner and play on his cellphone. When everybody was counting down to new years Derek just ignored the people and kept playing, and when the countdown was at zero and everyone was celebrating Derek said: “Yes I got a new record!”

 

His mom was as unhappy as when a monkey losses his banana so then she snatched the phone. For awhile Derek was just a tree, he was motionless and watched everyone else. His mom finally gave him his phone back but after 15 minuets it ran out of battery. Thankfully his mom was about to leave or he would’ve rest in peace.

 

Simile: He was like a feral bear.         As unhappy as when a monkey losses its banana.

 

Metaphor: he was just a tree.

 

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