Category Archives: writing

clear spring park, opinon, social studies, writing

Clear Spring Park

clear spring park

 

I think Clear Spring Park is a good park because It has a papilla with a little grill and benches so if it starts to rain people can be safe their.

 

Clear Spring Park is a park that is in maryland that is across the road from Daly elementary.


It is a small park it has swings for every age 5th,3th Kindergarten it has a big slide and small slide for if you are small and you don’t want to go on the big slide and their are low monkey bars and tall monkey bars for old and young kids.

Harris Burdick, inquiry project, Movement Essay, writing

Just Desert

On a late Halloween night somebody was cutting a pumpkin in a old neighborhood once she lowered the knife it glowed she looked outside every pumping was glowing she looked at the sky she saw a  sending out a energy beam to all the pumpkins and turn them into pumpkins into space pumpkins warriors.These warriors were the best warriors of space and earth they can melt steel walls and brick walls with their asiad spray and cut through mountains with their razor sharp claws and they can destroy buildings when they blow up and they can blow up the earth if they blow up together.The women called the military,police,air force the navy and army they were about to start the pumpkin war. Pumpkin guts everywhere fallen soldiers their were too many pumpkins but their leader came.

 

Come my minions we shall destroy this planet.The army,navy,air force and the military amid for the pumpkin king so they can not destroy the world or the galaxy. 20 Minutes later their was something in the sky a shooting star or a spaceship it was take off day the tanks of gas fell on top of the pumpkinn king and its minions pumpkin guts everywhere It was the most weirdest and funniest victory ever and they made the worlds biggest pumpkin pie.

 

But after 39 minutes later they went to the bathroom and when they left their toilet  turns into working helpers to the humans.

Harris Burdick, inquiry project, Narrative, writing

Under the Rug

Narrator:this story starts on a stormy night

 Dug:(brushing teeth) time for bed it been a hard day of work for me

 rumble,rumble

 Narrator:  What was that said Dug.He went down and cheek he saw something it was a bump

 Narrator: He grabbed a chair and lifted the rug it was a little robber so he ran for it.later that night police showed up and dug noticed that his TV was gone.

 Dug: aw man that stuff was worth a fortune who ever that person will com back for more because I have a deluxe flat screen TV in my room.

 Narrator:later that week the robber came back.

Dug:hee (evil laugh) I got a chair for you robber

 Robber: Dang someone is coming I better hide

 Narrator: Dug came down looking for the robber he was hiding behind the couch

Narrator : Dug found him ran after but the robber went running but Dug got a security system it looked all the doors so the robber was trapped he got beaten up by a chair till the police showed up and he went to jail for the rest of his days.

 Two years later

Robber: That lousy guy got in my way at least I got a escape tunnel.ha I’m free I’m free  I’m free.

2nd Quarter, Myths, Narrative, writing

Lion Tail

Adam and Douglas are soldiers ,they always wanted to live forever to keep on winning their wars
one day they went out into a cave near a beach and Adam went in the cave and Douglas stayed outside to see if anyone came.

Back at the cave Adam saw a floating ball he knew it was immortality then he dropped to the ground and twisted and turn. He grew whiskers,fangs and became brown and yellow.

Zeus knew that Adam was a greedy person so he him turned into a lion because lions are greedy and filthy.

After Adam left as a lion than guards attacked him so he fought till he won he ate all of them and got bigger and bigger till he was tall as 10 men he had no idea what he was doing and he kept eating all of them using bones as toothpicks and he went on looking for more prey than he ran into Douglas the lion had Adams clothes on Douglas thought that the lion ate Adam so Douglas wanted to avenge Adam so he went to the lion head to slay the beast and he was victorious he slayed the beasts head off and he never knew that Adam was the beast.

Then when Douglas got back to his camp. His captain asked where was Adam.

He said that a lion beast killed him and ate him.

The captain said are you sure. Douglas said that the beast had Adams clothes on and then the captain waked Douglas in the head Douglas you fool when have you heard of a lion beast put on clothes a god must have turned Adam into a lion for a punishment you know that he is greedy for any things that is rare and what were you guys looking for.

Douglas said immortal maybe Adam found it and was going to keep it for himself and that was why he got turned into a lion beast. Then for years and years Douglas got old and older lonely with no friends or family and till he died when he was 92 years old when the beast attacked him because it remembers what Douglas did.

But when than the beast head grew all of its parts back and it was wild and ate animals in the wild animals or humans that trespass it territory at any time and any day.

2nd Quarter, inquiry project, Movement Essay, social studies, writing

Alejandro tobacco movment

Tobacco safety
by Alejandro castillo
Smoking Tobacco started in 1650 and people found out that tobacco was unhealthy and it is 2014 so it has been 650 years of people were dieing of tobacco. People can die when they are jog they could die because your heart gave up because they smoked to much tobacco your heart gave up and you are lying there helpless and die in 3 minutes late.These are things you will learn in this information about tobacco safety and the person who invented cigarettes was washington Duke in 1865.
After math
People who have used cigarettes think it is ok but it is not ok because when you smoke tobacco you hurt own lunges and die and before that your skin start to peal off and your teeth start fall out and your skin start to dry up and get so wrinkled that is when your skin starts to fall off here when you smoke your skin will look like bad but before that you look good because you didn’t smoke back then 1 year later and you have to get pulled over and get arrested for fraud because your driver license picture because you look different from your picture.
What is in a cigarette
Places that make cigarettes put a warning on each one and a picture what could happen to your lungs. warning label are important because it could have something really dangers in it and tobacco also contain tar and poison gas carbon monoxide oxide.The ingredients that produces the effect people are looking for an addictive drug and one of the harshest chemicals in tobacco smoke and 43 known ingredients you give cancer and people could not find a cure and die or if they find a cure and when you leave the hospital and you will probably start to smoke tobacco and it will start all over again.Did you 43000 people die of smoking tobacco and 53800 die of second hand smoke?

Disaster

when you smoke you can get pulled over and get arrested for driving and smoking at the same time.When you smoke you could pass it on to your child and it could pass on to your child and it could get past on and on it will go on forever. In your life you will know someone that died by smoking in your family and you will smoke to remember that person but don’t you will die as well.

end
These are things that will happen to you if you so dont smoke or all all of these thing will happen to you. If you don’t smoke none of these things will happen to you. End

whale debate, writing

Whale debate

20301 Brander mill Drive
German-town MD
November 12 2014
Embassy of Japan
Dear sir or madam

My name is Alejandro and I go to Daly Elementary in Georgetown MD.I am writing to you because Japan needs to stop whaling.if whales go extinct how will people of the future know what whales are and how will people now if their mammals Japan has killed around 3600 whales is that not enough?

sincerely Alejandro

kg3, social studies, writing

kinggerogeIII

Dear King George III

 

I am a colonist from maryland. I am leaving england to go to the patriots because youre  tax for tea is too much and I do not want to buy it from a certain place and because of the boston massacre killed seven innocent people and I want my rights and freedom and that is why  I am going to the patriots.I am going to teach  kids my culture when I leave england  and how I live because kids should learn new thing  about differe that is why I am leaving england.

 

From Alejandro

 

Adventure story, writing

mystery

Alejandro Castillo                                                      mystery

Ben summer was great because he won the spelling bee. That wasn’t the most  amazing thing  that happened to him. He went to the woods  for a plant but when he tripped he bumped into  a tree he  noticed it  wasn’t  dent so he  opened the and found a  journal in it after he read it he found out the journal had all the secrets of his hometown Brownsville.

When he got home he read all of it. He found out someone wants the journal he knew what he had to do. Ben left Brownsville but on his the way out a bird tried to take the the book  but it missed and got hit by a bus ben got in the bus. The bus drove him to the next country Florida. He met the guy who wanted to steal the journal the guy that wanted to take the journal was named bill ben was trying to run away from him but he accidently dropped the book.Bill turned around and saw the journal laying on the floor he ran and grabbed it then he started running and there was a police dog helping people and Ben called the dog and told him to chase bill and the police dog ran to bill and bit him.

and ben stayed with the book.But bill came back on the cliff the man came running at Ben but he missed and fell down the cliff and no one ever saw him again and ben could go home. fin