Past, Present, Future

Good morning, parents, teachers, families, staff, and fellow 5th graders.

I want to share something that is only the beginning.

It all started 12 years ago. In 2002, my mom and dad had came from Guatemala in Central America. It became really hard for them.

One year later, on April 12, 2003 to be exact, a girl was born. During my early years life was a disaster, bad events happened between my parents, and they divorced.

My mom and I went to live with my mother in law for a few weeks. After that my mom decided that she had to get married again She started thinking about my education.

The hard part for me was the start of Pre-k to the end of 1st grade. No one in my family knew, spoke, or even understood English or what my homework was about.

The years passed by and I wondered what people might say about my future. To be honest, now that I think about it, I don’t know what I was thinking. I wanted to be a surgeon when I grew up. But now, in 5th grade, I know exactly what I want to spend the rest of my life doing.

Last thing that I want to share with you is my plan for my future.

I want to studyAstronomy in the future. I want to graduate from High School, College, and become an Astronomer.

For me education is a big thing in my life. It’s big for my family and for my future……..

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Thank you parents for coming and for helping us. And fellow 5th graders have a great summer and let’s not think about 6th grade yet.

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THE SEVEN CHAIRS

It was a lovely day in Paris so far. The forecast had an alert of having a thunderstorm.

Ariana was getting ready to go to the Eiffel tower with her mom.

“Ariana are you ready to go to the Eiffel tower!” Mom said.

“Yeah mom” Ariana said.

Mom saw the weather on her phone there was an alert for a thunderstorm.

Mom didn’t want to disappoint Ariana so she decided to wait for the thunderstorm to pass.

Mom thought in her mind Ariana is going to be disappointed because the thunderstorm was coming and she wasn’t going to be able to go to the Eiffel tower.

“Mom are we going” Ariana said.

“Ariana I have to do some work from the office it will only take 15 min.”

Mom thought that by then the storm would have started so that Ariana wouldn’t be so disappointed.

“It’s ok mom I can wait” Ariana said, thinking that she wasn’t going to talk badly back to her mom like other kids would do.

15 min. past and the storm hadn’t come yet.

So Ariana thinking that her mom was done she went down stairs.

Mom was worried so she thought that they could only go for a half an hour to see the Eiffel Tower and that the storm was not going to catch them there.

“Ariana are you ready” Mom said

“Yes Mom”said Ariana.

So when they got to the Eiffel Tower the thunderstorm started so they went to a safe spot near the Eiffel Tower a café to be exact. Ariana yelled  “MOM LOOK”Ariana took  picture     Effiel Tower                             

Mom was surprised because no one had ever taken a picture when a lighting bolt struck the Eiffel Tower.

Ariana thought, I’m ganna be famous.

So Mom went the White house to declare the photo that Ariana took.

The photo was famous but, Ariana felt like something was missing.

She thought that they forgot to go to Eiffel Tower so when the thunderstorm pasted they went.

When they got there they went all the way up and they saw a nun. The fourth one appeared in Paris

Ariana had done some research on the first, second,third,fourth,and fith just to see were the nun had been appearing.

She found out that the fith one was going to appear in France.

 

A week later Mom was watching the news and Ariana was on her laptop, and on the news said that the fith one ended up in France.

So Ariana was right about the research that she had done.

She was proud of her self to see the lighting bolt hit the Eiffel Tower and also, researching about the fith chair.

BY:Marlin Salazar
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“jUST DESSERT”

Attem Avenue was a weird place where there was NO GRASS, barely any trees .There was a green house. The owner’s name was Lauren.

Lauren was 28 years old had one child named Lindsey. Lauren speaks Italian, but not much English, she had long blonde hair. Lauren was a widow.

Lindsey was a girl with long curly blonde hair. She was 7 years old but Lindsey spoke perfect English not much Italian. She goes to Dipson Oak Elementary School.

Lindsey had a field trip to the Roseville’s pumpkin patch.

Lindsey had to learn a lot about the biggest pumpkin in the world. Halloween was coming up, that’s why.

When Lindsey got to the pumpkin patch she found out the largest pumpkin weighs 911.27 kg and that it takes 105 days for a pumpkin to fully grow.

When Lindsey came home from school she asked her mom “Mom, tomorrow can we go to Roseville’s pumpkin patch.”

Lauren said “Yes.”The next day Lauren woke up extra early for a surprise.

When Lindsey woke up she went down stairs and she didn’t see her mom. So she decided to go back to bed. A few minutes later Lauren came back.

She called Lindsey and said that she had a surprise for her. But Lindsey had fallen asleep. So Lauren let Lindsey sleep a little more.

Lindsey woke up and wondered if mom was back?

She saw a pumpkin on the counter, it was huge and it looked really rare.

“MOM!” Lindsey yelled.

“YES!” Lauren shouted.

“What is this huge pumpkin doing on the counter?” Lindsey said.

“Well when I came home I yelled out your name and said I had a surprise for you but you were still sleeping” Lauren said.

“When I had woke up you weren’t home so I went back to sleep” Lindsey said.

“Oh, but I guess you already saw the surprise I got you” Lauren said.

“Yes, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you,” Lindsey said giving Lauren a big huge hug.

10 days had passed. It was October 30.

“1 more day till Halloween.” said Lindsey.

Lauren and I went to the store to buy Halloween costumes and Halloween decorations on Sunday. When they got home they put up the new decorations. The house looked dark and scary.

Lauren decided to bake a pumpkin pie because Lindsey decided not to put the big scary pumpkin outside.  Lauren got a knife to cut the pumpkin. It began to glow but Lauren hadn’t seen it.

When she lowered the knife it grew even brighter.

Lauren got scared so she yelled out,” Lindsey!”

Lindsey came quickly and jumped.

Lindsey was scared. She got a large and sharp knife and she stabbed it into the pumpkin.

The pumpkin just shrank and it turned into a mini pumpkin.

Lindsey was scared at the moment but, she knew that it was Halloween tomorrow. She was worried that she was going to dream about the pumpkin.

Lindsey slept great. She woke up and ran downstairs, and had her breakfast. She went to school dressed as a dark angel. She had the scariest, but greatest Halloween ever.

 

                                                                                                                     By: Marlin Salazar

 

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The Third-Floor Bedroom

 

It all began when someone left the window open, on a spring morning on April 12, 2003.

A boy named Dylan was eating breakfast, when all of a sudden the bus came. He ran to the bus stop. When he ran he felt like something was missing. But, he wasn’t worried.

When he got on the bus he had remembered that something it was that he had left his window open.

Meanwhile at Dylan’s house the doves that were painted on his wall wanted to scare Dylan because Dylan has bad dreams about the doves.

The doves wanted revenge. One by one each dove was getting off the wall to steal Dylan’s heart and mind. So that Dylan could turn into a bad child.

After school he was fine he played video games and ate dinner, and then it was time for him to go to bed.

He dreamed badly about the doves again but, this time his dream was worse than the last one. He had dreamed about him going to change his personality. When he woke up he was scared and also worried.

Dylan thought, “Could it be my friends who are going to change my personality?”

When he got to school his friends said “Dylan come with us.”

Dylan didn’t answer instead he ran.

“DYLAN” said his friends again shocked.

“What’s up with Dylan” said Lucas one of Dylan’s friends.

“He’s acting different” says Kevin.

“We have never seen him like this” says Lucas.

“What should we do to help him?” say all of them.

During lunch Dylan didn’t look at his friends he had moved far away from them.

Then all of the doves flew into his mind but, in spirits then Dylan starts acting different then he was before.

His teacher asked Dylan, “Dylan why are you acting differently you haven’t even started your work.”

Dylan didn’t answer.

His teacher says again “Dylan I’m talking to you!”

The bell rings. Dylan leaves class.

After class Dylan’s teacher talked to the principal about Dylan’s behavior. The principal promised Dylan’s teacher that she would talk to Dylan’s parents.

Before school ended Dylan’s principal talked to his parents and his parents said that they would talk to Dylan as soon as he got home from school.

When Dylan came home from school Dylan told his parents what had happened with the doves was wondering if he should tell his mom about the whole personality changing thing.

His mother said “Why didn’t you tell me before like when you were dreaming about the doves?”

Dylan didn’t answer.

Dylan’s dad asked Dylan “Dylan, do you want to go to a psychiatrist”.

Dylan said “Will that help me with anything?”

Dylan’s dad said “They will help you to try to forget about the doves and also will help you change your personality back to the way it was before”.

After 3 weeks of Dylan going to the psychiatrist he got better and he could hang out with his friends again.

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Scared

water,

very cold,

see something sharp,

try to get away,

what am I

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New Year’s Resolution (Goals for 2014)

It is important to set goals because it gives your life a challenge. Also, because when you  are trying to complete a goal you are wanting to just give up but at the same time you are saying  that you  are going to complete that one simple goal. Besides when you are done with your goal you will see it was just fine.

  1. To pay more attention in Writing because it’s to…. boring.
  2.  Change my first name.
  3. To be more polite with my mother.
  4.  To do my spelling homework even if no one dose it so.. that I get a good grade.
  5. To graduate from Elementary school and go to Middle school.

How I feel about 2014 is that I want to be a differint person I want to feel like go to Middle School. Also, I want to learn more things and discover more things than I have never learned or discover. I want myself to realize that this is a new year not 2013 it’s 2014!!!!!!! A year that we all need to remember,and I will remember this year by reaching all of my 5 goals it will be tough but fun.

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book blog

Tittle:Camp Babymouse

Gender:Fa

Author:Jennifer L. Holm

What the story is about is that babymouse was going to camp and her team was in a copatition but babymouse was making mistakes so her team lost.But, they won the last copatition and they were really happy but, her team didn’t win all the copatitions so there team lost wah wah wah………….

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Tittle:Shipwreck on the pirate islands

Gender:Fa

Author:Edizioni Piemme

What the story is about is that this man is going to hawaii and he lives in califonia and wanted to take a ship to go to hawaii and in my opinion is that, that is a really weird idea. well and on his trip he hadn’t seen a rock that was in the water and so the rock made a hole in the ship, so it was not far from were the rock was a island. so.. the ship could still wait till it would go to the island. then, when they were at the island they fixed the ship and left to hawaii.

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book blog

Tittle:The Journey  through time

Gender:Fa

Author:Edizioni Piemme

What the book is about is that there is a man named geronimo stilton and he goes in a time machine to go to the past and it doesn”t go so… good because he got chased by dinosaurs so he has to find a way to escape the dinosuars to go to the time machine.

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#forlikeingcake

#forgoodhealth

#formyfamily

#fornothavinganybadstuffinmybody

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