The Nearst Star

One day in a little village lived a girl named Ingrid  Galvez. It was dark and there wasn’t a cloud on the sky or  nether  thousands of stars. But when she turned her face she saw a star so bright it was brighter than the moon.

 

Ingrid  wondered about that star and finally she thought of something. So Ingrid  ran to her parents’ bedroom, and said” Dad…Mom I was thinking that if tomorrow I don’t have school then we can go on an adventure to see were a star leads us to”. Dad and Mom say” Ok but only because we would love a good adventure”.

 

So Ingrid and mom and dad go out and follow the star. On their way to the star they find a bear and the bear wasn’t happy cause the bear could smell there snacks. When they had lost the bear they looked at the sky in front of them they hadn’t seen the star so they looked behind them and there was the star behind them so they had to go back. So when they got under the star they saw  a  x on the ground so what they did was they digged with some spoons they had.

 

They had reached it. Then they found a bracelet with the name yasmine, Ingrid was shocked. After that, they went home. Ingrid was happy she had looked outside of the window. But, still Ingrid  wondered about why would the bracelet be there, probably there was a girl that had  lost her bracelet   But,Ingrid had forgot about it what happened with the braclet .

 

Then the next day Ingrid and her mom went out for a walk not far from where they had found yasmine’s  bracelet,and while they where walking  her friend yasmine crying because yasmine had lost her charm bracelet . Ingrid  was sad because yasmine had lost her braclet.But, Ingird  had to do the right thing .So Ingrid went to ask yasmine if that was the  bracelet. Yasmine said thank you but, she didn’t want it anymore yasmine said “You can keep it since “.Ingrid said “Thank you but it doen’t say my name on it”. Yasmine said “you cane say to all your friends that i gave it to you so that you could remember me, but where did you find it”. Ingrid  said” When I was getting ready for bed I looked out the window and I saw a star in the sky it was the brightest and decided to see where it leaded me to so when we got to the bottom of the star we found a letter x on the ground and we started to dig with some spoons we had and we found your bracelet “.”  Wow “. Said yasmine. But at the end Ingrid  and yasmine where happy.THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

 

 

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