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Month: February 2015 (Page 2 of 5)

JUST DESERT…. WILL THEY SURVIVE….

JUST DESERT….
WILL THEY SURVIVE….

 

So one day their was a lady named Candy And she lived in puerto rico. And it was a few days away from halloween. 21

So Candy went to the store to get her costume for a halloween party that she was supposed to go to.

 

Than she got into her car to head off home. So then when she got home the first thing she did when she got inside she got her huge pumpkin out and her little pumpkins out and started carving.

 

She named her biggest pumpkin Victor, and then her little pumpkins name’s were Alice,Ashley, Amy, and Amanda. She started to carve her biggest pumpkin first so she could get it out of way.

 

She felt weird about carving her pumpkins because she remembered every halloween her mom told her stories about what happen when people carved the pumpkins their spirit haunted them until they know it was real.

 

When she was carving her pumpkins she song a very strange song and it went like this “ PUMPKIN PUMPKIN WHERE ARE YOU THIS IS TIME FOR YOU TO COME TRUE I AM WAITING FINE I’LL COUNT TO 2 YOU SHALL GIVE ME A CLUE” So the pumpkins started to shine real bright Candy couldn’t see so she didn’t see what was going on.

 

That’s when she figured out that her mom was telling her the truth about the evil spirit of carving a pumpkin. Than the biggest pumpkin called his squad Alice,Ashley,Amy, and Amanda. They all came and started to chase Candy when she was running and it was dark so she fell in a deep dark black hole. When she fell the pumpkins fell with her and then that’s when they got into a big circle and sucked the soul out of her body and the 5 pumpkins turned into Candy DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!.

THE LESSON IS NEVER RUIN FROM EVIL PUMPKINS!!

                                             THE END    

Fight For The Top Of The World

Fight For The Top Of The World


I believe that Denmark should have Antarctica. It is closest to Antarctica. It also has the most area near Antarctica. It is 20X the size so it needs the area. The 230 mile limit allows the closer you are the more are you can claim. Denmark shows scientific proof that their territory extends closer to Antarctica than anybody else’s. Lomonosov Ridge is connected to GreenLand Denmark so thats more proof that Antarctica belongs to them. Denmark governs green land which is Denmarks biggest island. That gives them 350,000 miles in Antarctica. I believe that Denmark should have Antarctica.

Mr.Linden’s library

Mr.Lindens library

[The book that came back]

by:Amanda Carpio

One day a girl named Adriana wanted to become an illustrator. Adriana told her mom Kim that she wanted to go to the library.

And her mom mumbled as she rolled out of bed at 8:30

AM “I don’t have anytime this week maybe next week Adriana,”.

 

“You’re crushing my dreams of  being an illustrator! Fine, then i’ll go to the library by myself,” Adriana said in a very frustrated and whiny way.

 

So Adriana went to bed and in the morning she brushed her teeth as quick as she could and got a purple top with jeans and headed to the library. Adriana arrived at the library and was looking around for something inspirational when she found the famous author section she was amazed by all the interesting books.

 

Up came the librarian and she said, “What are you looking for my dear?”

Adriana whispered back “Just an inspirational book. Do you know where the pre-teen books are by any chance?”

 

The librarian whispered back, “Of course sweet pea.  They are at the end of this hall here and I hope you find that special book. TA TA,.”

 

Adriana replied “Thank you for your help TA TA.,”

 

so Adriana made her way down the hall making sure she wasn’t missing any good books. She went down the hall and found the pre-teen books.  Adriana saw one that looked old and dusty and like it had been read over and over and over again. She thought it must be good and then  Adriana turned around and there was a strange man.

 

He said in the creepiest voice possible, “Stop you imbecile. Do you want to get cursed for life?  Put the book down.”

 

Adriana said “What is your name sir?”

 

He replied, “My name is Mr.Pigwart isn’t that neat?” Mr.Pigwart said cheerfully.

 

Adriana said shaky and scared, “I have to go bye.”

 

Adriana went to go check out the book and went home . She started to notice that the book was moving from place to place by itself.  She wasn’t that worried she probably forgot that she moved it from one place to the other.

 

Adriana went to her mom and said “Mommy the book is moving but I don’t think that its moving by itself because I probably moved it.”

 

So she left the book on the coffee table for a month or two and saw if it moved on its own. So when she left it on the coffee table and opened it she saw about a one foot vine that came rolling out.

 

She screamed “MOMMY!!!!!!!!!!!.” Kim replied “WHAT WHAT ARE YOU BEING KIDNAPPED IS THE HOUSE ON FIRE?”

 

Adriana said sarcastically “ yeah mom i’m on fire while being kidnapped.”

 

Her mom screamed”i’m coming for you Adriana don’t get so burned.” Her mom said.

Adriana replied very frustrated “no mom the book has vines in it and it didn’t have vines in it before you imbecile.”

 

she replied very dumbfounded “oh i know that hehe yeah definitely”

 

so Adriana was wondering around the house. Thinking and thinking how those vines got in the book . And then right before her eyes she saw it she saw the vine growing and grabbing hold of a flower pot and smashing it to the ground.

 

“Why does everything happen to me I have the worst luck ever,” Adriana said very disappointedly.

 

She just was pacing back and forth trying to figure out why that would happen. And then without noticing she bumped into the wall and it hit her. She knew why the vines were coming out of the garden through those months she has been in the garden a lot so she probably laid vines in the book. And that was very reasonable for her because without books she’s all about the garden.

 

Adriana said to her mother very relieved “i’ve been in the garden all the time that i left the book i was probably putting vines in there now i know why.”

 

Adriana’s mother replied sarcastically “Sure honey that’s exactly what happened. Makes perfect sense.” She went to bed and read a chapter or two of the book and put it on the side of her table and went to bed and without noticing the vines grew bigger and bigger and bigger and it strangled her to death and that was the last anybody heard from Adriana. And something or someone came up through the window and said “I TOLD YOU.” and that was Mr. Pigwart.

The end

 

Brooke Smith, Girl Wonder

Brooke Smith, Girl Wonder


Have you ever heard voice? Well this is a story is about a girl who heard those voices.

In the small town in Maine there lives a girl named Brooke. She was asleep and she heard a tiny voice asked.

“Is she the one?” said a tiny voice. “Yes you must make her believe, now do what you must.” said a low voice. “(sigh) Okay. Psst hey wake up now come on wake up. WHY WON’T YOU WAKE UP!!!”. The tiny voice was covering his mouth.

Brooke woke up and thought it was one of those town meeting’s about how to get money to fundraiser for the school. She was so startled when she was saw the boy with the tiny voice.

“Who are you and what you do want with me. Did I pick on you when we were smaller, please don’t hurt me.” Brooke cried. “Hey I’m not going to hurt, since you woke up we now have to talk face to face.” said the tiny voice. “You always were a believer. So we appeared and now we live in the abandoned library in town square.”

Brooke was about to call her mother. She looked at him really closely and then said she looked at her grandpa when he was little.

“Grandfather is that you as a little boy. I can’t believe it you died when you 78 years old. Why are you here?” Brooke cried. “ I must hurry, so this is what I looked like when I died, and now you have to stay up late tomorrow night and believe in us. Got it,” said Tiny.

Brooke went to sleep and thought of what it was like being a ghost or spirit from the underground world.

(Tweet Tweet Tweet) A bird singing a lovely song. Brooke had woke up. She went downstairs and saw her mother cooking her favorite breakfast, sausages with her Colorado Omelet and a strawberry smoothie to go. Her mother humming the song she always sang to Brooke when she was little. Her mom turned and around and had the face of Mystic Man who even scarey than Miss Tolly with a mole and a snaggle tooth.

“Ahh, what was that,” yelled Brooke. Brooke was terrified  she went to the bathroom to brush her teeth and wash her face. When she was done she put on her bunny slippers and then smelled her little brother Brian eating blueberry oatmeal. Brooke came down stairs her mother gave her a cheese omelet with 3 sausages, fruit salad ,and orange juice.

“Honey hurry because your brother wants to go the ice skating rink so please get dressed brush your teeth and make you lay nice clothes when we come back ok,” Her mom exclaimed. “Where we going?We don’t have church because the doors are too FROZEN!” Brooke talking with food in her mouth.

Brooke’s mother smiled and she finished cleaning the dishes.  When Brooke and Brian were finished they went up stairs and did a challenge.

First one to get your clothes gets to throw a snowball at the other person who LOSES,” Brooke and Brian said at the same time. They shook hands and went in there rooms.

Brooke came out of her room and looked in her brothers room and he had his bathroom light on she thought must of been in the bathroom brushing his teeth and washing his face. Brooke ran down stairs and her brother was drinking a cup of hot chocolate and was watching tv. Brooke was so mad that she was going to get hit with a snowball, BY HER BROTHER. Her brother, Brian went to baseball camp and he was the pitcher because he had good aim.

“Brooke let’s go outside so you can get hit with the mega snowball I made outside,” said Brian with a evil smirk on his face.

Later that day Brooke and her mom was smashing the potatoes while Brian put his dinosaur pajamas on. When Brooke finished mashing the potatoes she checked on the mac-n-cheese then pulled it out.

“Brooke would be a dear and set the table up and make sure you feed your hamster before you eat,” Her mother told her. Brook went up stairs to feed her hamster, Mr. Giggles.

Brooke finished eating her dinner and watched tv. Her mom told her to take her dishes in the kitchen and clean your dishes. Brooke was really mad she did that but the dog wanted to have her leftovers. So Brooke made sure she did her part of the dishes. Brooke went up stairs and got ready for bed.

“Time to go to bed, time to go to bed, time for everyone to play in my head. Everyone skips, everyone jumps, everyone’s ready to eat the candy stumps.” Brooke sang while she was brushing her hair. Her window blew open when and Brooke stopped brushing her hair and closed the window door.

“Hmm it’s pretty windy tonight,” Brooke said. And Brooke went to sleep

10 minutes

Later

“Hey wake up it’s time,” said Tiny.

Brooke woke up and followed Tiny to the window door and he flew so did she because she believed and they flew to Never land.

No just kidding they went to the clock tower where Tiny been ever since he died.

“Where are you taking me and why are we headed for the clock tower,” Brooke whined. “Brooke please, just trust me, you’re meeting the boss,” Tiny had said

Brooke had let go of Tiny’s hand she had looked around looking for the boss.

“Hello is anywhere here? Tiny where are you, please show me the way to the “BOSS”! Brooke said wiping her eyes.

Brooke looked up and saw the other spirits with Tiny. All the spirits and Tiny flew down and all looked at her.

“Is that really human flesh. I haven’t seen it since my Julia. You guys remember her?”

Mystic Man came down and said. “I’m the one that sent you here and now I shall have a body to control and I will be able to live like I always wanted to live. With a great friends, go to school, and have a family of myself to have and play with,” He said.

Brooke ran away but the spirits pulled her back.

“Ugh let go of me please! You’re making a mistake let go now, Brooke screamed.

Mystic Man came closer to Brooke and he put his hand on her shoulder and then he sucked his way in. Then Tiny flew up real fast and pulled Mystic Man out of her body. Mystic Man was really furious and he was about to hit Tiny. Brooke struggled and struggled and she got loose.

“Go ahead take my body instead“you monster”!” Brooke said with a mean face. “Brooke no you will die and you will live the life I always wanted to live,” Tiny said.

Brooke knew he was right so she looked around and saw a old candle with candle matched. She ran over and grabbed the matches and flicked one on. And put out after she lit the candle. Mystic Man screeched so did the others but Tiny told her to bring closer to him and she did as she was told.

Mystic Man was stuck because he couldn’t go through walls. Their not ghosts their spirits. Mystic Man got sucked in by the candle light. Everyone was surprised and now that Mystic Man have no control over the spirits. Everyone looked up to Brooke now she defeated the “Big Man”.

“Brooke thank you Mystic Man was the worst person I ever met,” Tiny exclaimed. “I hereby decree Tiny to be the “Boss of spirits”. She said proudly.

Brooke now had to go home, Tiny and the others took her home and she went to straight to bed.

When she woke up the next day what happened last night it felt like a nightmare to her.

That was the story of Brooke Smith, Girl Wonder the spirit tamer.

THE END

THE SEVEN CHAIRS

THE SEVEN CHAIRS!!!

BY:EMILY SOLORZANO

 

This is a tale of the seven chairs,which one of them ended up in france.There was a woman her name was Lucy Bob her husbands name was Billy Bob her daughter’s name was Julie bob.They are the bob family.And one day they all went to church and once they got there they all went to have a seat to listen about the good lord. There was only one seat left and Lucy wanted it she was heading towards the chair and so was an women they both touched it with there buts.

 

They were both trying to push each other off.  And so the woman’s eyes turned really red. Lucy sat down than…THE CHAIR FLEW UP!!! Than she had realized that that women possessed the chair! Lucy was scared of hights. She was scared to look down or jump down.  Lucy called Billy.’BILLY HELP ME . Billy did not know where she was. she yelled out I’M UP HERE. Billy Bob looked up and said HOLY MOLY HOW DID YOU GET UP THERE? Lucy said  it was that which standing behind you. she possessed  my chair and I can’t get down. Billy bob reacts and gets a later and tries to reach for lucy. And just when he was about to grab her leg and… The chair flew up and went alllllll the way to france. And that is when Jule had realized that moment her precious mother was gone to an different country. And she started to cry Waa! mommy why did you leave me heer  alone  with daddy!!!!!!!!  Billy was like heyy.  So they quickly got their passports and flew to france it was a  12 hour flight!!! Billy bob was really scared  about what will happen to lucy bob. Once they got there julie and billy searched the whole entire country and the place she was at was Paris near the tower.

 

when the chair  spotted him it quickly made its move and flew to near a  bakery and… IT HAD POSSESSED Lucy!!! :( Billy bob ran to the bakery and found his wife crying from the pain of the possession.  Julie turned her head and she saw something terrifying.  Something she had never seen before. A  woman with red,dark,bleeding,eyes. You could see her bones. Jule had fainted from the hideous of the possession.

 

Billy bob could not do more.  He had lost the love of his life.  The peanut butter for his jelly, The key to his soul, The L to love.    She was gone. “ Billy Bob said.  “No she is not said a perast behind him. “what?! “come with me said the priest said. I can get her back there is still time.  BIlly Bob picked up lucy. And the priest cared jule.  And of course the chair followed.

 

They went to the church and sat Lucy down on an different chair.  And tied her up so she won’t ascap.   And lucy on a bench. She was still knocked out.   “Allow me to introduce myself my name is Harry Duce. Your wife has been possessed by that chair she was on.  “I can help her. He got his Bible his cross and his holy water.  And “he said to Lucy come out you spirit  and leave this woman alone! “Ok so beit he threw water on Lucy and … She came out!

 

Billy Bob went to go give Lucy  an kissy. Julie had awaken and she yelled out Mommy your back! Woo Hoo!  The chair was furious.  He went and picked up Lucy. UP UP UP in the sky they went.  Lucy said not again. She got up looked down and she jumped off!! wee she said and fell in the juno beach centre. She got up underneath the water and said NOT A GOOD TIME TO GO SWIMMING!

 

Billy Bob ran to Lucy picked her up and ran to the church.  Left her there the  chair was 3 feet above the ground.  Billy reached and got the chair and punched it and threw it in the nearest volcano. That chair was never heard from again. They lived happily ever after.

THE END!!!

Strange Day in July

A strange day in July

 

“ Go outside with your sister” mother said

you have been on that playstation for hours!. “but mom” brother said “no buts buts are for sitting.” mother said so brother got his sister and went outside to the woods to go exploring it was really fun and they had a good time  together they went to deer hunting and saw very cool one it went and decided to go take a ride strangely the deer did not fight it just stood there waiting for them once they got on and took them very far to a magical land they went and saw a king he said welcome to enhance iea please make yourself welcome please take a seat anywhere the children got off but the deer started whining  and the man started changing shape until he was  a creepy jacked up creepy disfigured inhuman form made out of water and said i have been waiting for you my master has told that you would be here brother scared he yelled for his sister to help him but she was already tied up and gagged  he freaked out and took out everybody that came near   he took his sister and went and got on the horse  and rode away he then went around a corner and hid hoping that nobody was following him then when they thought that the coast was clear they ran for it that a couple hours later they came across to another kingdom and were more cocchis and saw that the owner did not look as bad but he did not do anything bad   to him they have said that they were in safe heaven he said okay but we do not trust you because we almost got killed by letting yourself get help and be happy so we do not know if we should trust you okay random guy  he looked hurt and said we would not hurt anybody who comes in my kingdom yet they said we needed to get home and they said that they have a time machine to take them back that they were in the future the they took them and sent them  into their home where there mom was waiting for them.

 

 

Solorzano’s Site 2015-02-11 13:13:15

THE SEVEN CHAIRS!!!

This is a tale of the seven chairs,which one of them ended up in france. There was a woman her name was Lucy Bob her husbands name was Billy Bob her daughter’s name was Julie bob.They are the bob family.And one day they all went to church and once they got there they all went to have a seat to listen about the good lord. There was only one seat left and Lucy wanted it she was heading towards the chair and so was an women they both touched it with there buts.

They were both trying to push each other off.  And so the woman’s eyes turned really red. Lucy sat down than…THE CHAIR FLEW UP!!! Than she had realized that that women possessed the chair! Lucy was scared of hights. She was scared to look down or jump down.  Lucy called Billy.’BILLY HELP ME . Billy did not know where she was. she yelled out I’M UP HERE. Billy Bob looked up and said HOLY MOLY HOW DID YOU GET UP THERE? Lucy said  it was that which standing behind you. she possessed  my chair and I can’t get down. Billy bob reacts and gets a later and tries to reach for lucy. And just when he was about to grab her leg and… The chair flew up and went alllllll the way to france. And that is when Jule had realized that moment her precious mother was gone to an different country. And she started to cry Waa! mommy why did you leave me heer  alone  with daddy!!!!!!!!  Billy was like heyy.  So they quickly got their passports and flew to france it was a  12 hour flight!!! Billy bob was really scared  about what will happen to lucy bob. Once they got there julie and billy searched the whole entire country and the place she was at was Paris near the tower.

when the chair  spotted him it quickly made its move and flew to near a  bakery and… IT HAD POSSESSED Lucy!!! :( Billy bob ran to the bakery and found his wife crying from the pain of the possession.  Julie turned her head and she saw something terrifying.  Something she had never seen before. A  woman with red,dark,bleeding,eyes. You could see her bones. Jule had fainted from the hideous of the possession.

Billy bob could not do more.  He had lost the love of his life.  The peanut butter for his jelly, The key to his soul, The L to love.    She was gone. “ Billy Bob said.  “No she is not said a perast behind him. “what?! “come with me said the priest said. I can get her back there is still time.  BIlly Bob picked up lucy. And the priest cared jule.  And of course the chair followed.

They went to the church and sat Lucy down on an different chair.  And tied her up so she won’t ascap.   And lucy on a bench. She was still knocked out.   “Allow me to introduce myself my name is Harry Duce. Your wife has been possessed by that chair she was on.  “I can help her. He got his Bible his cross and his holy water.  And “he said to Lucy come out you spirit  and leave this woman alone! “Ok so beit he threw water on Lucy and … She came out!

Billy Bob went to go give Lucy  an kissy. Julie had awaken and she yelled out Mommy your back! Woo Hoo!  The chair was furious.  He went and picked up Lucy. UP UP UP in the sky they went.  Lucy said not again. She got up looked down and she jumped off!! wee she said and fell in the juno beach centre. She got up underneath the water and said NOT A GOOD TIME TO GO SWIMMING!

Billy Bob ran to Lucy picked her up and ran to the church.  Left her there the  chair was 3 feet above the ground.  Billy reached and got the chair and punched it and threw it in the nearest volcano. That chair was never heard from again. They lived happily ever after.

THE END!!!

Archie Smith Boy Wonder

Archie Smith Boy Wonder

By: Joshua

There was once a dark world where there was a boy named Archie. He lived in Washington DC. He was being stalked by a terrible monster. It was the Night Stalker. The monster was 8 feet tall and was invisible. The only thing that wasn’t invisible were his eyes. The monster stalked Archie all night. Archie still didn’t notice until the year 2100. He saw two big floating bright lights. He didn’t know what they were. He slowly walked to his mom’s room.

Once he’s in the room Archie yelled “Mommy!” Archie’s mom hit him with her belt because he woke her up. Now Archie’s butt is red as a tomato. He went to his room and went to bed. Suddenly the Night Stalker came back. Instead of going to his mom’s room he went to the front door and he made a run for it. He went through the town dogs are barking everywhere. The Night Stalker was still behind him then Archie made a hard right. Archie lost the Night Stalker. Archie was hiding behind a house. Suddenly the monster teleported right in front of him. The monster asked in a tiny voice “Is he the one?”

Archie freaked out and punch the Night Stalker in the face. His mom call the monster hunters and they said “For Archie bravery he took down a creepy monster so for this day forward we should call him Boy Wonder!”

 

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