Monthly Archives: September 2013

Tiger Mayhem

One beautiful sunny day Aliyah, Nathaly, and I went to the National Zoo in Washington DC.

We went to go see the pandas .Ours mom’s had told us something but we didn’t hear it because we were already far away. When we came back from the pandas we notice our moms were bot there. We realized we were lost.

We started looking for our parents when I see Mr. Altamirano with soon duded dressed in black with him. I said “Hey, that guy with Mr. Altamirano looks like a criminal”.
Yeah he is one. I saw him on the news. His name is Marc, and he’s a robber” said Nathaly.
“Also Mr. Altamirano owns a bank called the Altamirano bank near 6th street “puts in Aliyah.

“We better go see what Marc’s up to” I replied. So we followed Mr. Altamirano and Marc all around the zoo in till the got to the tiger pen.
After a little while Marc and Mr. Altamirano were still there. Mr. Altamirano went a little close to see the tiger at the bottom when Marc pushed him.
BAM! Mr. Altamirano fell to the ground. Marc said “Can you see the tiger now”?
Nathaly said “what are where going to do guys?
“Don’t worry “I replied “I have a plan”

The tiger gave out a big “ROAR “The tiger was getting ready to attack. I exclaimed “on three, 1,2,3!

Aliyah got on the phone and called the police. Nathaly went to go stop Marc and I, I went to go get Mr. Altamirano

Nathaly went up to mark and said “Hey want to see stars”?
“Sure where”? Marc replied.
Nathaly exclaimed “Right here buddy “and punched him in the face!

I grabbed a vine and swung down like Tarzan. I got Mr. Altamirano and started running away from the tiger.

While I was running away from the tiger I see the cops come .they pulled down a rope ladder so we can get up.

We ran up to the rope ladder and climbed it.

Mr. Altamirano thanked us for saving him and gave us each 10,000
Dollars. After he was paying us I said “Hey look it’s our mom’s!”

We ran up to them and gave them a hug .we all when home and told our mom’s about today .while I was falling asleep I was wondering what will happen tomorrow.

The first football game

The first football game

Me and my football team get on the field. They kick it off and we get to the 50 yard line. We get a turnover on downs. When the Pikesville get the ball back they go straight through the whole for the touchdown. They kicked it off and we get to the 45 yard line. We go 4 and out turnover on downs. They get a pitch to the left for a touchdown. They went for the 2 point conversion and they missed so it is 13-0 Pikesville. They kick it off and we get to the 50 yard line. We ran it to the left and got a touchdown. We missed the extra point so it is 13-6 Pikesville.

We kick it off and they get to the 50 yard line. They get another touchdown 20-6 Pikesville. Its halftime. They kick it off and we got to the 45 yardline. We made a passing touchdown.20-13 Pikesville. We kick it off and they get to the 45 yard line .They make a touchdown through the middle.27-13 Pikesville. We get to the 45 yard line. On third and ten we get to the 45 yard line. We get 15 yards.

We do a hurry up offense and get a pass play for another 20 yards. We are at the 15 yard line. We get a touchdown. That’s the end of the game.27-19 pikesvile.everybody said, “You are not that bad after all. After that we went to burger king and I went to get a whopper fries and a drink. Then I went home and started watching tv.

By Shivan

 

 

adventure story

Melody    and the Mall Robbery                   by Melody   Safo

 I was at the mall with my friends one Saturday when suddenly a villain named Mr. Mask appeared. He snatched Alyssa’s purse.” You’ll never get it back”, he said with a sneer. I can’t   believe he stole my purse, she sobbed. Don’t worry Alyssa, I said. We’ll catch that thief in no time. Yeah, said Ana. The next day, I was wearing a pink shirt with a purple skirt and matching suede boots. All my friends were wearing whatever they wanted. Mr. Mask was now causing robbery all across town. The bookstore, the school, everywhere. We had finished our shopping when suddenly he went to the bookstore and stole books from shelves. I reached into my purse and called Nancy Drew. Finally she arrived. ”We need to catch that thief, I said. “ First he stole one of my friends’ purse and now he’s causing robbery all around town.”  Mr. Mask was after the school. We got after him. All of us caught him with a net. Everything was back to normal. And Alyssa finally got her purse back.

 

The End.

Washington D.C

 

Washington DC

One warm sunny day Nathaly, Aliyah, and Isabela went to Washington dc. They went there because they were doing project for school. They were taking picture of the Lincoln memorial when Nathaly turned around and saw a person, they looked suspicious. Nathaly forgot about it after a while.

Later on the earth shook! It was an earthquake! Everybody started running around like maniacs. Isabela turned around. Her friends were gone! She thought how she was going to find her friends in this crowd. Isabela started to panic. She started to walk around. She saw person they looked suspicious but she wasn’t worried about that right now.

Nathaly and Aliyah were also worried that they weren’t going to find Isabela. Aliyah wanted to go back and look for Isabela but Nathaly said

“No, because we would get even more lost”.

Aliyah finally decided to just keep going.

Isabela was walking towards the metro station. Isabela thought for a while then she remembered that they were going to the zoo afterwards. She got on the metro that went to the zoo. On the metro she saw the suspicious person. She got a little scared. Them she was finally at the zoo. She ran out the metro toward the zoo entrance.

She started to run around looking for Nathaly and Aliyah. Isabela walked toward the penguins and Isabela found Nathaly and Aliyah.

“I thought I’d never find you”. She exclaimed

“Us too we were so scared you would just go back home”. They answered they were so happy to find each other.

They were walking when this person came out. They were tall while holding a walkie-talkie. They told Nathaly, Aliyah, and Isabela to give them all their money. They said “NO”.

It talked to the walkie-talkie. Two minutes later another person came. Then they both said

“Give me all your money”.

Again they exclaimed “NO”.  The friends got really scared.

The person took off the mask. They were surprised to see it was a girl named Sandra blue. She was on the newspaper recently because she was a criminal. Sandra said she escaped a week after they put her in jail. The friends asked

“How did you get out of jail”?

Sandra said

“When I was sleeping when a police came to check on her when the police left he didn’t lock the cell. At midnight I woke up and crept out, that’s how I escaped”.

Sandra was holding a gun pointing to the friends. Then she saw there were only two girls! Nathaly and Isabela. Then out of nowhere Aliyah jumped out and started doing karate on Sandra and her friend. The police thanked the friends.

They headed out.

Nathaly told them “it’s the funniest trip ever”!

The police, officer bulldog came up to them and told them that since the captured a criminal they get 600 dollars each.

“Awesome”. Isabela exclaimed

“Cool beans”! Aliyah and Nathaly said at the same time

The police thanked them one last time and next thing you know Sandra is in the police car with an officer.

Officer bulldog came up and gave them each their 600 dollars.

 

 

Guled's Site 2013-09-19 18:52:21

The crystals of oak wood plains

One rainy day Ilwaad went to the mall then Dr. Jeffery came out. Everyone started screaming and crying, then she heard a voice that was telling her to save the world,

Ilwaad found a sail boat the captain`s name was Red Beard.  Land ho’ said captain Red Beard I went off the boat

Thanks for the ride’ said Ilwaad

Good luck kid’ said captain red beard.

Ilwaad went hunting on angle island, Ilwaad found mangoes, coconuts, and bananas. Ilwaad built a sailboat, Ilwaad ate the fruits then Ilwaad went to oak wood plains to get the crystals.

Ilwaad heard a voice that was telling her to hurry up, the little girl said

Don’t worry I got a blueprint for you to look at` said the little girl

What are you doing here?’ said Ilwaad

Where is your parents?’ said Ilwaad

I don’t have any parents` said the little girl.

Follow me’ said Ilwaad, Ilwaad and Sarah left oak wood plains then they found crystals, then Ilwaad picked up the crystals then they went into dr. Jeffery`s castle they went inside.

Uh oh run! ` Said Ilwaad

Then Ilwaad brought out her bow and shot Dr. Jeffery then Ilwaad went home then Sarah had a new family

The end

Adventure Story

The Robbery

One day in August 23, 1965 a young man was at Giant. The young man’s name was Josiah Njoroge. Josiah was 24. He was in isle 3 looking for chips and salsa and other snacks for an upcoming town party. Out of nowhere there was a loud CRASH! Josiah quickly looked around.

He saw in isle 2 there was a man with a gun! So Josiah hid behind a shelf. The man wore a hockey mask over a black hoodie. The strange man couldn’t see Josiah.

Josiah figured it was a robbery! He called 911 as fast as he could. When the cops arrived everybody was being held hostage on the floor. It was so much chaos! The robber shot 97 cops 1 by 1 until he finally ran out of bullets. So he started running outside. Josiah got in his car and started chasing him. The criminal was running so fast!

Josiah realized there was a cliff up ahead. The guy came to a sudden stop! Josiah slowly stepped out of the car and advanced toward the stranger. He tried to calm the man down. It was too late. The man jumped of the cliff! Josiah saw that he dropped his ID. His name was Elijah Njoroge! Josiah found his long lost brother but he died. Josiah told everybody but nobody cared. The town soon had a party but Josiah just sat down at home thinking about his brother. Josiah was sad so he never had a party again.

 

By Josiah Njoroge

adventure story

The walk to the store

One day Jason walk to the store. then he saw some guys that were bad. They said come here Jason ran than they chased him.

Jason ran inside CVS. JASON ran in the aisle with all the silver ware. Jason pick up spatula at one the guys and tried hit one of them with a knife he missed so Jason ran throw opening he ran to Papa Johns. He jump over the counter and started fling toping at the guys. Then one of them jump over and grab hem and started dragging hem and then they duck taped Jason to the wall.

Then they started punching Jason then came out nowhere and started beating the bad guys up their names were chip and dip.

Then he untied me and ran away then Jason walk home and Jason how was your day he said you don’t want know.

By Jason Malry