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PS4

Ps4 is a cool game system. I played it but it was my friend’s PS4. We played 2K14 next generation by trading in both our games for 2K14 next gen for him. I slept over and never went to sleep. I just played that all night while he went to sleep. It is a fun game so if you like basketball games you will like 2K14 for PS4.

The seven nuns by:Mudiwa Mutokuto

There was a lady named Sister Sofia. She was a nun. She was really strange. She would always eat by herself. And in church she wouldn’t know the prayer. She was really bossy. All the other nuns would say mean stuff about her.

They all weren’t friends with Sister Sofia. Sometimes when they would talk about her she would leave and not come back for a while and no one would know where she went.

Then one evening one of the nuns named sister Kaynun saw her doing a witch spell on one of the nuns and that nuns name was Sister Tellnun.   Sister Kaynun told the head nun Sister Meanun and Sister Meanun kicked her out.

Then she moved on with her life and one day one of the nuns saw her in Paris where she lived.  The other nuns were on vacation that day.

There are seven nuns. One of them named Sister kiknun found her chair. When she got there she saw two men. They were priest and they told her where the chair was.  She got it and gave it to her boss.

Then one afternoon she told Sister Meanun that she was sorry and asked her to be saved by sister Meannun. She got saved and she changed the way she acted. She decided for an apology. She took all the nuns on vacation to Egypt which they had a great time they said thank you and helped pay at the trip because they felt bad that she had to pay all alone. Then they all lived happily ever after.

 

Another place Another time

Another Place, Another Time

For their summer vacation Evan ,who is 13 years old and wore his favorite shirt , Ray ,who is pretty short for a 6 year old ,and John , Evan’s 12 1/2 year old best friend , are going to an island called Inisa. Evan couldn’t wait to leave, meanwhile Ray, his little brother, was crying so he would get to stay.

Once they got there, they met a man whose name is Brain, he was their tour guide.

“Hey guys, I’m your tour guide. “Brian welcomed them “Welcome to Inisa!”

After he introduced himself he told the boys where they’re going for the next few days, then he left. On his way out

Ray whispers “He’s tall!”

John replies “Not really I think he’s actually-”

“Quiet” snapped Evan who was really annoyed with Ray’s crying and John’s blabbering on the plane.

On their first day of the tour they were all quiet and amazed by everything on the island of Inisa, from really cool parks to some amazing museums. After being amused by everything they get on an empty road and run into a big gray fog.

Evan wasn’t convinced with what John was saying. Which was that it was just a storm coming close.

After the gray fog, Brian told them to get some rest. But as always Ray cried so he wouldn’t have to go to sleep. Then Ray was dead asleep. When they met up with Brian, Brian told them that for now on they could go on their own tours as long as they stay close to the cabin.

“What if we get lost?!” Cried Ray

“Ask around,” replied Evan not caring

“I guess.” Ray said flatly

Then Evan decided that for their last tour alone they would go see if the fog is gone so they could see what was behind it. But on their way there Ray was crying so much that Evan led them the wrong way. John and Ray were not quiet but by the time Evan told them they were lost Evan didn’t hear a peep out of them.

So after they figured out they were lost, John suggested they ask around like Evan said on their first tour alone.

“Excuse me?” asked Evan

“Yes?” said a tall black haired man turning around

“Do you know how to get back to this address?” responded John, handing him a piece of paper with the address

“Uh no, not many people know their way around here, sorry.” Replied the man

Evan, Ray, and John kept asking around – the tall man was right – not everyone knew this island. Then Evan was about ready to quit. John convinced him to ask one last person.

“Hi, do you know how to get to this address, sir?” Evan asked. The man turned, it was Brian.

“Hey guys did you get lost? I thought I told you to stay close to the cabin!” exclaimed Brian.

“Oops!” responded Ray with a smile.

“Yeah, don’t come back down here you could get lost again.” He told them

Brian continued “Come on I’ll take you home, it’s your last day here anyway.”

Now it’s time for Evan, Ray, and John to leave. They get on their plane and wave good bye to not only Brian but the beautiful island too. Ray starts to cry so that he’ll be able to stay, again. Evan fell asleep on the plane and something inside of him told him told him he’ll find what he’s looking for at another place in another time.

Just Desert

 

All because a moment in class a boy named Sven is shy. It all started when Sven was in school at recess. He was swinging on the monkey bars when a boy named Julian walked by and accidently bumped into him so Sven fell off. Sven hit the ground and broke his leg! He was screaming in pain when the nurse rushed down with a wheel chair. Soon after, Sven woke up in the hospital. The doctor told him he would be fine but he needed crutches for a month.

The next day at school Sven was getting treated great by everybody. Julian was getting jealous because Sven was getting attention so he came up with a plan. So one day Julian waited behind Sven’s house until he left for school and Sven’s mom left for work. Once they were gone Julian snuck through the window and took out any source of light. Once he finished he stayed at the park until school was over.

After school Sven got picked up by his mom named Emily and when they got home they saw all the lights were gone. So Emily bought a jack-o-lantern for $5.00. When she got home she cut it open to get the light. It was a candle so they set it on the table and went to sleep.

During the night the candle came alive and on it was a face! The candle’s name was Bertus. Bertus tiptoed over to Sven and Sven woke up. Sven was surprised by this and almost fainted. The candle told Sven to put his hand in the flame. At first Sven said no but the flame told him he wouldn’t get hurt so Sven did it.

A few seconds later Sven was in a wonderland! There was candy everywhere! There were giant jellybeans for houses and chocolate bars for doors. In the Jellybean houses lived gingerbread families. Sven started drooling at the sight. He saw a dark jellybean at the end of the row of jellybean houses that seemed to be black licorice. All the gingerbread people told him to stay away from it because there is a witch that lives there.

Sven stayed there for a long time until one day Sven decided to take out the witch. So Sven sprinkled some magic sugar dust on him that made him invincible! When the witch heard him at door she grabbed a potion and put it behind her back before she let him in. When she let him in the witch shut the door and threw the poison potion on him. Sven knew she would try this that’s why he put on the invincible dust. When the witch saw it didn’t affect him she turned scared. Sven saw the boiling pot of water where she made her potions and ran for it. She followed him and Sven turned around and dumped the boiling pot on her she screamed. She was yelling “Noooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” when she was melting.

Sven finished her and now all the gingerbread people would never worry again. They chanted for Sven and made him the king of their land. They had a feast and Sven never came home.

13th or 14th

When the Cathiedrauls got into the brown antique elevator, Paisley noticed that one of the buttons was covered in With-Out with the number 14 written on it. She asked her parents about it but they were too deep into their Bluetooth conversations to answer, so she pressed the “14” button. The elevator went up suddenly, everybody in the elevator except the Cathiedrauls disappear along with the “14th” button. The elevator came to a stop on the 3rd floor, her parents step out of the elevator, their conversations ended. In complete awe Paisley stepped out of the elevator and
“Did you see that?!”
“See what?” asked Mrs. Cathiedrauls
“Th-the and the.” Paisley stuttered.
“The what?” her mom asked.
“The disa-.” Paisley stopped, then continued.
“Never mind.” she mumbled in disappointment.

When the Cathiedrauls got to their new furnished apartment they unpacked their few belongings and decided who’s room was who’s. Paisley got the room with a view of central park, Dove wallpaper, and a window. On the window was a note that said “DO NOT OPEN!” In creepy childish hand writing. Paisley read the note and went to sleep.
The next day Paisley went to school, “Carly & Edd’s Middle School.” Her teacher Mr. Dunkin .D said
“Class we have a new student named, Paisley .B.”
Today is Assignment Day. The assignment you be -.” Mr. Dunkin .D said interrupted by his galaxy s 3 note.
“French Fries and Doughnuts, French and Doughnuts (Doughnuts).”
Blushing Mr. Dunkin .D put his phone on mute and continued.
“Sorry for thee … interruption …. You will be working in pairs of two and will have to write a 100 word report on any state of your choice except states in North America.”
“WHAAAT.” Cried the class in union.
“Class 100 words is only about a paragraph and a sentence.”
“Yay.” Whispered Cat.
Paisley .B and Cat, you two are partners. Daina and jeorge, you two are partners. Paisley .A and Noon. Raven and sun, partners.”
So on and on he went until everybody was in pairs of two.
“Ring ring!” yelled the end of the school day bell. An avalanche of kids started rushing to the door of the class room and out of the school.
“Remember projects are due next Tuesday.” Said Mr. Dunkin
“PAISLEY.” Screamed Cat.
Paisley looked around the (now empty) wall way until she saw her caller.
“Yes?”
“I’m, Cat, nice to meet you.”
“Uhmm … oh may I please have your phone number so we can work on the assignment? Hears mine.” Cat showed Paisley the paper.
“Sure.”
They exchanged phone numbers.
“Talk to you later.” said Cat
“By.” Responded Paisley.
When, Paisley got home, she picked Turkey as the state she wanted to research for her and Cat’s project. She walked in her room so she wouldn’t disturber her parents, and called Cat.
“Hello?” Asked Paisley to see if anyone was on the other line.
“Hi!” Cat said excitedly.
“What state do you want to research?” Asked Cat I was thinking Turkey.” Stated Paisley.
“Sure, sorry I’ll call you back I have to do something real quick, bye said Cat nervously.
Since paisley had already finished the rest of her homework and had no electronics she could use to look up research, she walked in the living room, sat on the couch and started flipping through channels. The TV said in different voices.
“Pay attention to the sign.”
Shocked, Paisley turned off the TV. When the phone rang. She hesitated to answer it, but did and questioned.
“Hello?”
It was Cat, they talked about the assignment and finished it in 2 hours. Paisley went to sleep hours later.
The next day it was 95 degrees farenheight and, Paisley couldn’t help but open the window even though all of those warnings told her not to she disobeyed. When she opened it she heard a voice say
“No.” From behind her.
“Dinners ready!” yelled Paisley’s mom.
“Coming?” paisley said as she backed out of the door.
Paisley ran to the kitchen in fear, but left the window open.
While the Cathiedrauls quickly were eating, Paisley asks.
“Did you hear that flapping?”
“Yeah, what was that?” Asks Mr. Cathiedrauls.
The Cathiedruals ran into Paisley’s room, they see a dove flying out of the window and a dove peeling off of the wallpaper. Mrs.Cathiedrauls quickly closes the window and, Paisley starts telling her parents about all of the scary warnings that had been said and they decided they wanted to move into a regular house.
In the morning they packed their belongings, sued their real state and used the money and all of their savings to buy a regular house in New York.
The Cathiedruals moved into their 2 story house. When people ask why they moved they say it all started when somebody pressed the “14.” Button!!