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friends 2 days together

One day angelica Kelly and Jessie went shopping. And got a lot of stuff. Then we sow Ms. Leo my teacher and then we ask her if she wanted to go eat with us

‘’Who is here with you guys?” said Ms. Leo

“No one just us” said answer Jessie

“My mom is going to come and get us when we are ready” said Angelica

“Oh ok yeah sure” answered back Ms. Leo

Then we all got subway. It was so fun we all got stack on are sub with and oil it was so good

After we were done we took Ms. Leo to get her a cup

“The pa cup are pretty” said Angelica

‘’Yeah they are’’ said Ms. Leo

After we got her a cup we sow Uriel walking we ask him

‘’Who r u with’’ ask Angelica

‘’No one just me” said Uriel

“Do u want to come to with us’’ ask Angelica

“Were” said Uriel

“The movies” answered Angelica

“Yeah sure” said Uriel

Ok so we went to the movie’s and angelica ask foe 4 tickets for the movie x-man but the came on until 8:50 so we went to go play games angelica and Uriel played a car game and Jessie and Kelly played something else

So then it was time to go back so we did but when we went back there was a man with a gun and a black hat he took his hat off and angelica saw that it was Jeff carter he was in jail for 3 years for robbing 711’s money so Angelica Jessie and Kelly was crying because they did not know what was happening so he let us go so we angelica called her mom and said

“Come pick us up now” said angelica

“Ok coming now’’ said mom

Then angelica mom came we ran outside in to the car then we all went to my house Uriel said what are we going to do now let’s go to the fair but that is in Germantown yeah I know then that makes it an adventure yeah ok but then Uriel’s mom called and said

“Come home” then said Uriel’s mom

“Ok” said Uriel

I will ask my mom can she take u home

“Ok thanks” said Uriel

“Welcome” answer angelica
“Mom can u take Uriel home” ask angelica

“Yeah sure” answer mom

“Thanks mom” said angelica so we all went outside to the car

“Mom can you unlock the car please” said angelica

Beep went the car

“Thank you” yelled angelica`

“Welcome” yelled mom back

So then Uriel told me mom were to go then we drop him off

“Mom can we go get are nail’s done” ask angelica

And it’s not that far from Uriel’s house so we went when we got there we ask for a row for all of as to get are nail’s done …………

adventure story

Melody    and the Mall Robbery                   by Melody   Safo

 I was at the mall with my friends one Saturday when suddenly a villain named Mr. Mask appeared. He snatched Alyssa’s purse.” You’ll never get it back”, he said with a sneer. I can’t   believe he stole my purse, she sobbed. Don’t worry Alyssa, I said. We’ll catch that thief in no time. Yeah, said Ana. The next day, I was wearing a pink shirt with a purple skirt and matching suede boots. All my friends were wearing whatever they wanted. Mr. Mask was now causing robbery all across town. The bookstore, the school, everywhere. We had finished our shopping when suddenly he went to the bookstore and stole books from shelves. I reached into my purse and called Nancy Drew. Finally she arrived. ”We need to catch that thief, I said. “ First he stole one of my friends’ purse and now he’s causing robbery all around town.”  Mr. Mask was after the school. We got after him. All of us caught him with a net. Everything was back to normal. And Alyssa finally got her purse back.

 

The End.

adventure story

The walk to the store

One day Jason walk to the store. then he saw some guys that were bad. They said come here Jason ran than they chased him.

Jason ran inside CVS. JASON ran in the aisle with all the silver ware. Jason pick up spatula at one the guys and tried hit one of them with a knife he missed so Jason ran throw opening he ran to Papa Johns. He jump over the counter and started fling toping at the guys. Then one of them jump over and grab hem and started dragging hem and then they duck taped Jason to the wall.

Then they started punching Jason then came out nowhere and started beating the bad guys up their names were chip and dip.

Then he untied me and ran away then Jason walk home and Jason how was your day he said you don’t want know.

By Jason Malry

 

 

Cory’s new bike!

Cory wanted  a new bike.  It was July14,2011 and Cory waited 2 years to get his new bike. Cory decidedn to get it from Target.

Cory was 8 years old and his mom and his grandma came with him. Cory liked some of them and but it was a hard decision for Cory. Cory liked a bike that was black and orange .Cory  hadn’t had his own bike for the last 2 years.

As soon he had  his bike at the house,  he was cruising around his neighborhood. liked to ride his bike around his neighborhood especially to his friend’s house.You can still find Cory riding like a famous rider on the same orange and black bike through his neighborhood today.

The Time My Aunt Came To America

The Time my Aunt Came to America

My Aunt finally got to come see what America looks like. My Dad picked my Aunt up at the airport before bringing her to see me. First she unpacked her clothes and went to downstairs to eat dinner. We talked and talked and we starting laughing. My Aunt name is Sleam she sweet and nice. My family and I ate cake ‘’oh my god this is so good yelled my bother’’. My Aunt give me clothes for summer ‘’oh my god these clothes are amazing .‘’I said ‘’ and I get her a hug and I said thank you for giving me these clothes.

MY BEST CHRISTMAS

On the day before Christmas me and my wonderful grandma went downstairs to get ready for everybody  to come. We put up the Christmas  tree.   There were beautiful Christmas lights on the Christmas tree and other decorations as well.

We went to go make the food and desserts.  We made chocolate cookies,  bluebery pie, and strawbery cake.

Then we started to open presents. First it was the little kids that got to open their presents.  They were so excited to open their presents.  After the little kids then grownups then grandparents got to open their presents.   After that we got the party started and for the rest of the night we partyted until morning.